The writing is good, but it feels a bit rough and far-fetched and needs some polishing.
It felt a bit overwhelming at the beginning, but it became more interesting later on.
I felt even more emotional when I saw the end. . . . Well written. A woman in a deep palace, no matter how talented she is, will be wiped out. . . What's more, a girl with a simple mind like Yaoguang. . . . That emperor really didn't know how to love. . . . . He must have feelings for Fluctlight and like it, but he doesn't know if it's love? I remember that on the day he went to war, when he said goodbye to Yaoguang, it was Yaoguang's sister who he looked at. . . . . Yaoguang understands in his heart!
I feel so sad after reading this. Let me write a big story about Jin Ai. I don't understand what his love is about?
When will you write the sequel?
It's really depressing to watch this heroine. It's quite attractive at the beginning, but then it's like this in the second half. It seems like nothing has been written. I feel like I haven't read anything. A woman's inner palace monologue is really boring. The heroine is really unlikable. All her relatives have been treated like this by the emperor. It seems that nothing has happened. They say it is destined. The heroine is too human. And she is a talented woman. Her life is too ordinary. Haven't she heard the saying that man can conquer heaven? She was really depressed after reading this book.
The ending was too rushed. Not enough aftertaste.
The plot is a bit confusing
But I still want to encourage you
The emperor's love is too obscure. He wants to love but dare not!
Emperor, do you love fluctuating light? Fluctuating light, are you happy?
If I were Yaoguang, I would severely retaliate against that dog emperor and a heartless man!
How can you take advantage of a woman who really likes you? Damn it, I can't stand this kind of man the most! Shameless!
The writing is good, but it feels a bit rough and far-fetched and needs some polishing.
It felt a bit overwhelming at the beginning, but it became more interesting later on.
I felt even more emotional when I saw the end. . . . Well written. A woman in a deep palace, no matter how talented she is, will be wiped out. . . What's more, a girl with a simple mind like Yaoguang. . . . That emperor really didn't know how to love. . . . . He must have feelings for Fluctlight and like it, but he doesn't know if it's love? I remember that on the day he went to war, when he said goodbye to Yaoguang, it was Yaoguang's sister who he looked at. . . . . Yaoguang understands in his heart!
I feel so sad after reading this. Let me write a big story about Jin Ai. I don't understand what his love is about?
When will you write the sequel?
It's really depressing to watch this heroine. It's quite attractive at the beginning, but then it's like this in the second half. It seems like nothing has been written. I feel like I haven't read anything. A woman's inner palace monologue is really boring. The heroine is really unlikable. All her relatives have been treated like this by the emperor. It seems that nothing has happened. They say it is destined. The heroine is too human. And she is a talented woman. Her life is too ordinary. Haven't she heard the saying that man can conquer heaven? She was really depressed after reading this book.
The ending was too rushed. Not enough aftertaste. The plot is a bit confusing But I still want to encourage you
The emperor's love is too obscure. He wants to love but dare not!
Emperor, do you love fluctuating light? Fluctuating light, are you happy?
If I were Yaoguang, I would severely retaliate against that dog emperor and a heartless man! How can you take advantage of a woman who really likes you? Damn it, I can't stand this kind of man the most! Shameless!