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I promised that as soon as you finish writing Winter Day, I will write a thousand-word long review for you. I met you in 2008, and you have always been a little girl in my heart. At the beginning, your writing was terrible. Even with my sharp tongue back then, I couldn't bear to say such serious words as "horrible" when facing you. For you now, I can tell you what I really thought back then. This is because, in the past three years, your transformation has surprised me. You were still a little loli back then. And now you have slowly begun to understand something. You once told me that you liked my previous style. I just want to be the kind of writer who can make you burst into tears by using the simplest words. Dongri, you have been cheating me for such a long time. I thought you would never end it, but you gave me a surprise and gave me a reply in such a short period of time. Perhaps, the ending felt a little rushed and a little imperfect, but it was enough - you made me feel emotional. The feeling of winter really lives up to the name you gave it. In winter, the wind is biting. There is no escape from the harsh environment. The warm sun just shined over. Maybe he brushed by quietly inadvertently. But this is enough. Because even if it is just such an inadvertent brushstroke, that kind of warmth is enough for you to have the courage and determination to resist the severe cold. Maybe the other person can't notice or understand what such a simple feeling is like, but the greed and yearning in our hearts will remind ourselves of its beauty. You're really starting to blow me away a little bit. I think people who have had the same experience will always remember this story. Because it directly reaches people's hearts. I also had this experience last year. This is also the reason why I took my words and hid them for nearly a year. When interacting with people, there will be too many contradictions and inexplicable frictions. This is how we gradually wear away some of our own edges and corners amid conflicts and frictions. Then each one turned into a sphere. The shapes that appeared in front of our eyes when we first started have shrunk in the face of too many hardships that life has given us. In the end, they were lost in the years, and not even the dust was left. Perhaps we are still clinging to some of our edges and corners, refusing to back down in the face of life, and showing our teeth and claws. It feels so good. Because if you stay in an environment of isolation, indifference, and contempt for too long, people will begin to become numb and compromised. ——This is how our edges and corners are erased. Even if you were so unwilling, it was erased so quietly and inadvertently. A person will become exhausted if he fights against the cold for too long. Therefore, the warm sunshine in winter is so rare. I think. Chang Yun should be lucky because she encountered that warm light. I disappeared with my writing for a year because I insisted on my edges and I was unwilling to compromise. It takes too much strength for me to muster the courage to fight the cold of winter. Therefore, having a little more time to take care of my words and stories is a luxury wish for me. I don't want my emotions to invade my story. My dear girl, you must learn to do this too. Regardless of your emotions, keep the original essence of your story. The advantage of winter lies in the way it is written. It will resonate with people. The story is simple and clear. But it allows you to understand the growth of a little girl. However, its ending is rushed. It doesn't even explain the growth of our dear little girl Chang Yun after those experiences. In other words, it's too concise. It would be really nice if you could go a little deeper. My dear girl, winter is over. Spring will bring new vitality, remember to smile at the sky. ——The word Qi Lingshang. August 11, 2011.
The words are like flowing clouds and flowing water, and there is a refreshing feeling of Beethoven's sadness! Support good works, and beautiful people and articles will be even more beautiful!
Finished reading. I like this style very much =-= The psychological description is quite nice. Looking forward to the following~ 33 Come on~
I don't think Lianjia will just let it go~~ She will probably think of ways to settle the score with Chang Yun. As for the result, Shanshan should give us a satisfactory answer o(∩_∩)o Hehe
Shanshan wrote so well~! I'm envious... Damn it~!
Written by Shanshan, CC, I saw it, it's pretty good, pretty good. Thumbs up with all my strength, (*^__^*) Hehe
Embarrassing, the heroine is so cruel. I have never slapped anyone since I was a child. . .
Question: Is this a junior high school or a high school? In fact, there is really less intrigue in junior high school... In high school, there isn't much. At most, it's just about competing with grades... Maybe it's because I'm sweating.
You left a lot of messages... =. =
One year anniversary of confession. . OTZ.