[Irregular updates] I've dropped this story. No need to tell me, and I don't need writing advice.
In 1993, a magical screen appeared without warning on the ceiling of the Hogwarts Great Hall, showing everyone the story of someone reborn in the HPMA era.
"Only love that never changes can make a wizard's Patronus take the form of the person they love."
"That's a Slytherin-style confession."
In 2002, in the Forbidden Forest, at the Acromantula nest, first-year Shuiyue Li gazed for a long time at the memory fragment of the "Golden Snape" echo that the Echo Lake had given her as a reward. Then she said to Blade, who was standing beside her and staring just as dazedly at the silver doe leaping gracefully through the air:
In 1993, in the Hogwarts Great Hall, everyone, too, remained transfixed by Snape's Patronus. Ron's jaw nearly hit the floor. Hermione's eyes grew misty, while Lavender and the others were already sobbing in a heap.
Harry watched the doe disappear into the distance. Seeing the moved expressions of the girl and boy on the screen, he pressed his lips into a thin line.
Draco, meanwhile, was very glad that their head of house had skipped this dinner because he found the girl's daily life boring.
He couldn't even imagine what Snape would look like if he'd been there.
Not long afterward, the young witches and wizards of Hogwarts finished a grueling day of classes and made their way to the Great Hall, tired but excited, for the screen's special "evening news"!
Qiu said eagerly to her friends, "I can't wait to see them together!"
"Harry, hurry up! Professor Potter's teaching the Patronus Charm today!" Ron urged his friend to walk faster.
Harry looked at him in disbelief. "Since when are you so enthusiastic about lessons?" As he spoke, he picked up his pace, too.
The wind tousled the boy's already unruly black hair. His bright green eyes were warm with laughter, and the corners of his mouth curled up as freely as the tips of his hair.
He was looking forward to the day she met her future self, too.
Hermione followed behind them, rolling her eyes in silence.
In the HPMA era, during Defense Against the Dark Arts.
Third-year Shuiyue stood amid a crowd, modestly exchanging polite words. At Professor Potter's encouragement, she gently waved her wand, and silver light streamed from its tip.
"Expecto Patronum."
She smiled with confidence, imagining Professor Potter praising her for summoning her Patronus so effortlessly. She was sure to be his favorite student!
But when she saw what her Patronus looked like, her composed smile cracked.
Wait, what? Where's my dolphin? What is this?
Shuiyue stared blankly at the stag she had summoned: a stag exactly like Professor Potter's Patronus. It strode proudly around the classroom, then dashed out the window with a flourish.
Out of the corner of her eye, she caught sight of several shocked faces. Blade was staring open-mouthed, unable to say a word.
Her gaze went vacant, but her thoughts raced wildly. She deeply regretted spending her free time making fun of Professor Snape. Is this your revenge, Snape?
And you, Blade, keep staring and I'll have to kill you to keep you quiet!
When she finally came back to herself and met Professor Potter's startled green eyes, the girl's blank expression turned flustered. With "Danger! Danger! Danger!" blaring in her head, she reached out a hand as if to beg him to stop.
Professor Potter, let me explain!
Theme: Love will bring me to your side
Mine Clearance Warning This is the first HP fanfic. Because the author is not good enough, the heroine may be given a bigger thumbs up in the future, but it is not because she is perfect or powerful, but because the plot needs it... The original intention is to fall in love with Harry, so I will write whatever I want and you can read it over. *An ordinary tweet. The original intention was just to let the heroine die, but for some reason everyone died together! *I love the four houses of Hogwarts equally, but some of the plot needs and the author's writing skills are insufficient. There may be some behaviors that are suspected of smearing/whitewashing the houses, but this is not my intention. The author has only watched the movie, and at most he has chatted with fans who have read the original book. If there is something unreasonable, please be sure to give me some advice in the comment area QUQ (please be gentle... I have a bit of a glass heart) *Because it is not a purely sub-generation fanfic, a large part of this article is about the HPMA era, so there are a lot of original characters and some game descriptions, but also because the author is good at playing the game, he may not have written to the point, please forgive me. *If you don't like Lone Warrior's songs, you can skip the chapter from Regulus to Harry. Don't reply to me specifically because of the song selection. I'm tired. *The heroine is somewhat of a charmer, but she herself feels that she is disliked by everyone. There are descriptions of women having unrequited love for the heroine, but the heroine is a straight woman and has only ever liked Harry. *The characters belong to Rowling, the OOC belongs to me *The heroine Shuiyue Li is an overseas Chinese born in the UK, a pure-blood wizard, and Slytherin. The name of the heroine in the previous life means the moon in the water, beautiful but illusory. This is the name she gave herself, but it is not a good name. In this life, it was because my mother's surname was Li and my father's surname was Shui. Their combined surname was passed on to their daughter. However, she was not familiar with the British name registration format and made a mistake, so she was registered as Shuiyue. Li. The heroine said she was used to it in her previous life, so she didn't change it. It was not Mary Sue's name. There is no need to reply to me because of this. *I can't think of anything else that needs demining, so let's do this for now. Update as the occasion demands, plot review Modo Modo ?? Unreleased update statement (Qi Mo, I originally wanted to finish writing the latest update before posting it, but when I saw someone showing off their anger without giving likes, I got so angry that I couldn't control it anymore): Writing is not easy, and this article does not require writing guidance unless the author takes the initiative to ask questions. When I woke up, I saw someone saying that they didn't want the heroine to travel back to third grade again, that is, after watching the movie, because it would be no different from other novels. I was so angry when I woke up that I decided to write a premise in advance. The original intention of writing the article: I want to write about something I have not seen, and I want to write about my unsatisfied wishes. Although I know that what I want to say has been said by others, and what I want to do has been done by others (from other lyrics), I still hope that I can write even a little bit new. This story originally stems from the fact that when I first started watching movies, I was always cheated without seeing the battles (the ones that didn't cheat were not written well). I always lost to Cedric and Draco (…) when buying Harry's stock in otome novels, so I wrote angry tweets. It was too tiring to open two holes, so I just combined them into one. Now it seems that the audiences on both sides are completely different. A considerable number of people left after watching the previous movies. The story of Shuiyue didn't get much popularity, but I wrote it all, so I could only keep going because I haven't written about their meeting yet. I have never been exposed to or watched other otome movies before, and I hope that I can rely on this innovation that may not be considered innovative to hook me to continue writing (of course it is also difficult to explode, because the protagonist and Harry have almost no interaction at all, and I don't know (Which senior should I refer to?) Just like in the early stage, I relied on "Hey, no one seems to have written about using the Golden Snitch as a ring box, so I will write it." Even though I finally found out that this meme was already popular at that time, because I had never read the relevant fan fiction, I still had the motivation to write it. And in the past two years of writing, I feel that more and more relatives have noticed the points that I have struggled with early on. I am very happy, and I feel that although it is delayed, I still have the happiness of being connected. Although I was like a big colander and almost said everything that came to my mind (because I also knew that I might not be able to hold on), and prematurely revealed that Shuiyue was going to travel through time (there is no way to fall in love without wearing it...), But two years later, when you said that my story was no different from other people's, I became very depressed. Suigetsu's re-travel is a definite thing. I have roughly thought about her story in the seventh year of Hogwarts after the millennium. But to be honest, I haven't thought about her story after time travel. It may be anticlimactic (this can also be regarded as a kind of love between a lion and a snake?), But no matter what, she will be with Xiao Ha, because otherwise, "a time-traveling girl will not be able to die in society", and the main purpose of this article is: love will bring me to you. I have been looking forward to a Black Brothers otome novel. After waiting for a long time, I suddenly found out that the author has stopped publishing it. It is because the long article about HP free power generation that I wrote before was deleted. I can understand the regret, but as a reader, I really want to read it. I can't influence her choice, I can only write more stories of my own while I still want to write stories. So why is it that my birthday is coming soon and there are still so many troubles waiting for me? (I collapse with my head in my arms)
Great, the author has started to update again. I know the author is very confused, but first of all, this is a free article, and you are meant to generate electricity for love. Secondly, if you think it is not good enough, then you can make your choice firm. This is your article, and you have the right to think how it is. What does it mean? In the end, I think the author wrote it very well. If you are looking for a better feel, you can just explain it in advance. There are many people in my collection who left without saying a word. They even got stuck, were anticlimactic, and couldn't accept the more negative comments. Anyway, to be honest, I am really relieved to see you come back to update, because it seems that with your personality, you are unlikely to give up on this article, and you have very high requirements for your writing style. There is a high probability that it will not end unexpectedly without thinking of the ending. If you really can't think of it, you can directly pin your own comment and tell us readers that you need to rest, or you need to hone your writing skills, so the update will be slower, etc. I will always look forward to the update of your article 🤩
[Add a long comment] It can be said that I followed the author when he published the article in 22 years. I didn't expect that three years would pass by. I started to sigh with emotion. It's very well written. The interactions between the two of the three Harrys really touched me. The auditorium was a bit lacking and I don't know where it will go from here. This is my first movie-watching novel, and it is written by Harper. The writing is so novel. It is not exactly the kind of movie-watching from the original novel. It is also edited with the addition of Shuiyue's growth and follow-up story lines (it also incorporates the magic awakening, so smooth!). It is so special and has a huge imagination! I really like this type of book, and the characters and scenes described in detail and the lyrics are very appropriate. My wife likes it! Qiu is really a mouth-spinner. Watching her kowtow to the moon like an ant on a hot pot, I feel so different in this world! Kwsl! Shuha and Shuiyue are just like each other. They are attracted to each other from a certain distance (Shuha loves him very much). Shuha slowly explores and enters Shuiyue's life... Ah, scratching my head, I still like Shuha and Shuiyue the most, because at this time, the two souls are at least the same age and independent, and they can understand each other's pain... Later, I looked through the comments section and saw some of Shui Yue's interpretations of some of her ways and character. It makes sense after seeing her sense of separation. In addition, in her previous life, Shui Yue was an independent girl and a teacher. She was the kind of person who was used to being a leader. But I really feel sorry for her unconscious sense of separation and exclusion from the world, and the loneliness that cannot be dispelled. Fortunately, Shuha accidentally clicked in to fully unfold the story. And the one from Wumingha: I see you. "My existence is grounded by your gaze." Really, really, I really screamed when I saw this! It's also very exciting here, a very shocking scene! The movie-watching experience is that it is difficult to push the timeline, the time flow is difficult, and everyone's reactions must be reasonable. The writing is completely non-ooc, and the inner drama of each character is very silly and cute. It tends to be light-hearted, and some sadistic parts are also very sharp. It's the first time I've experienced Harry's charming charm (I'm not saying I don't like Harry, it's because he recommended it. There are basically no annoying characters in HP, stacked armor), it's so charming! He talks duplicity in the auditorium but his eyes betray him. He likes to use excuses to care about Shuiyue in the curtain... Wumingha currently has two names before the Wuming book is updated. They are both very good, but the updated system allows more people to be exposed. It is more like raising a little ha wwww Not to mention, this one is so fragrant that a grain-producing wife meets a very understanding owner (fans)... What kind of divine unfolding is this! Is it okay to eat a lot?!! But it's a pity that after more than a hundred chapters, the two of them haven't shed their vests yet. It's a pity. Just thinking about the shock of recognizing each other makes the corners of their mouths curl up. Many of the small theaters in Zuihua are so fun, hahahahahaha, so cute. Generally speaking, the flow is very smooth. The characters don't have that OOC feeling. The writing is great and looks very relaxed and happy. It's also very comfortable to kowtow. The interaction and psychological description are also very interesting. I really want to be able to go in and kowtow with Qiu on the spot. Are the cover and character pictures drawn in large sizes? So pretty!!! It's all candy, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah scream (if you make a mistake, slide to TUT because this is the second time to browse quickly, some words and comments were not read) Will continue to wait for the big one (Mao Mao is looking forward to it). It doesn't matter if you have been busy three times and been happy three times, and then slowly consider returning to the trap. Fan creations and power generation for love are all amazing, and you have presented us with such interesting stories. I am very satisfied just to see and eat them... I love you so much. I hope you are happy on the road of creation. You must always be happy! Bless you greatly (show your heart)
This is indeed the case... Unless you are a very special kind of netizen, most of the time, it is difficult to reveal your personal information in a short period of time. I am the same way. Personal information may not be disclosed to netizens I have known for two or three years, but once I judge it to be "harmless", I will disclose my information appropriately.
I have always loved writing novels seriously, and I will interact with readers in my writing, explaining why I write it this way, why it is not updated, what should I do because of it, and so on. I don't know about other people, but I have read this article a long time ago. I remember I started reading it not long after it was published, although I can't find my previous comments (the greater possibility is that I don't have any at all) There are comments) But I still like this book as much as I did when I first read this article. I have many books that I have collected in the past. I bought them and then the author suddenly disappeared or the author was very exciting before entering V, and then started to freeze after entering V (this does not happen in Harry Potter fan fiction, because if I remember correctly, Harry Potter fan fiction has not been able to enter V since a few years ago), or when the author promised I came back when I was due, but didn't wait again, or suddenly stopped updating after normal updates, and said in the comments that I couldn't continue writing. There is also the most regrettable book for me. When I was reading it, I remembered that the author's name was Milkshake Jellyfish, and she was also a Harry Potter fan. Because she had a lot of negative comments in the comment section, she couldn't continue writing, so she left the outline and left. More often than not, the author left without saying goodbye. I waited for all of them equally. There are authors who come back, but they often end in disappointment. In addition, basically they haven't updated for so long. Those who don't like or have no feelings about the book have left. Those who remain are those who really like the book (probably). After talking for a long time, I don't know what I said. It's inexplicable. I deleted, deleted, changed and left these to let the author know that I am really looking forward to the follow-up of their story 🤩
Woohoo, I really like it. I watched 🤩 a long time ago, but I didn't have time to come back because of real life. Now I'm going to watch it again from the beginning. The writing is also very good! Looking at those words also brought about waves of emotions in me 🥺 the author's writing is particularly good 55555 ~ I like it very much 😚 😚
Goddess, I have been waiting for you to come back. It smells so good and delicious.
Wow! I just happened to be revisiting this article a few days ago! The teacher actually came back today! Super lucky! I really like the teacher's writing style! Very natural and comfortable! Generating electricity for love is really amazing! Coding is also very hard! I haven't spoken much before! But I keep watching!
I kind of forgot about it, but it doesn't matter. We novel girls have the strength and means to relive old dreams. I'm very happy to see my wife update it again, because the previous post said that she is busy with work, but as a college party, I may not understand it, at least I don't think OOC is there, because I have only seen the movie version and part of the original work to the fans, I am really looking forward to the interaction between Xiaoha* Shuiyue in the future.
What? Teacher, you actually hid it from us so much that we don't even know what a birthday is! (Angry) (Table HP-1) I won't allow it! Bring the rest quickly! I want to fight with you! [Chicken Legs][Chicken Legs][Chicken Legs]