Ren Bailin: I'm a walking disaster, but I just want to live an ordinary life (helpless).
Sheng Yi: Brother Lin, I love you so much (infatuated).
Ren Bailin: ... (runs away in the middle of the night)
Also, the gong is a little obsessive, while the shou is painfully slow to grasp his own feelings. The romance is a slow burn.
-- He was willing to accompany him through centuries, even a thousand years, of desolation, even if there would be no next life and he became nothing but dry bones.
Younger gong x short-tempered shou (a relatively happy ending)
Levels: Spirit Entry, Feather Thickening, Substance Flight, Empty Glory, Near-God.
Danmei.
Note: I made up the setting, so don't scrutinize the details too much. This is a freewheeling work, so just enjoy reading it. Also, there's strong language, so don't imitate it. Let's try to swear less.
Theme: Never yield to darkness, and always love the warm sunshine.
Can we just make one paragraph with two or three sentences, or maybe one long paragraph and several short paragraphs? It's really a long paragraph after one paragraph. It's really a bit tiring to read.
Adjust the spacing in the writing. In a dark article, each natural paragraph should have a blank line as a spacing, and try to start a new line for each sentence of dialogue.