Through the touch of the heart, through the emptiness of the soul, through the loneliness of life, through the drifting of fate, my love was forged. It cannot last forever, yet it is precious beyond measure; it cannot be held onto, yet it has weathered countless storms; it cannot be sung in verse, yet it is enough to shake the world.
Jiu Yuan, a girl who chose to shoulder burdens and give of herself, was ultimately blessed by fate and led to happiness.
P.S. Thank you all for reading my story.
How about we start a group to discuss it? I□□ don't have permission, but if you do, and you'd like to join, leave a message.
Here, I want to offer a sincere apology.
I really am at fault. There are still lots of typos in the story.
I know you understand what I mean.
I'm sorry about that.
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Lots of typos. . . . .
I felt so uncomfortable watching it. . . . Although the content seems quite good.
But I can't watch anymore, so I'd better withdraw!
Alas... It turns out that Jiujiu is Jiuyuan...
The relationship between Haiyan and Jiujiu, the wedding episode, and the drunken words. In this context, I suddenly lost any feeling of warmth. Instead, there is a kind of sadness that is so far away and unknown to each other...
The story of constant cutting and chaos is about to unfold~
A certain Jiujiu has half fallen into the clutches of the blue boss... Hiding his face...
But it seems that Blue Boss and Sister Haiyan are definitely having sex... Could it be that I'm cheating on them again? ?
Ps: I wonder if there is a small bug. Jiujiu said earlier that the person who killed Haiyan was similar to Feizhen. Did Feizhen and Jiujiu know each other before? ? It doesn't seem to be mentioned in the previous article.
Oh haha~I guessed the plot~
As expected, I met Blue Boss at the wedding banquet.
But something unexpected happened, that is Haiyan's sister and that mysterious unforgivable mistake.
Is it related to blue boss?
Could it be that Boss Blue is approaching Jiujiu because of Sister Haiyan? ? (This is my unscrupulous YY... Ignore it...)
I have a small suggestion. I feel that when Blue Boss and Jiujiu met, the portrayal of the two people was a bit lacking. Blue Boss's behavior and Jiujiu's psychology are a bit like this suddenly. Wouldn't it be better to be more delicate and hazy? ?
I'm back to make a comment~
After reading this chapter, I have begun to appreciate the power and complexity of your story behind it. In just four chapters, many entangled characters appeared one after another, including Kisuke, Gin, Haiyan, Rangiku...
Probably the only thing missing is the blue boss.
Moreover, the plot of opening a clothing store is really unexpected. I am very looking forward to whether there will be foreshadowing or the like later~
The silent and tacit dialogue between Haiyan and Jiujiu towards the end was very good~ the character traits of the two people were highlighted~
I guess in the next chapter, we are going to have a wedding ceremony and meet the blue boss? O(∩_∩)O haha~
It seems very esoteric and I don't really understand it.
One word: good
Two words: very good
Three words: very good
Four words: extremely good
Five words: I'll take you away
Six words: Keep up the good work
The eyes are red..
Silver's eyes seem to be red, right?
Take it away
Lots of typos. . . . . I felt so uncomfortable watching it. . . . Although the content seems quite good. But I can't watch anymore, so I'd better withdraw!
Alas... It turns out that Jiujiu is Jiuyuan... The relationship between Haiyan and Jiujiu, the wedding episode, and the drunken words. In this context, I suddenly lost any feeling of warmth. Instead, there is a kind of sadness that is so far away and unknown to each other...
The story of constant cutting and chaos is about to unfold~ A certain Jiujiu has half fallen into the clutches of the blue boss... Hiding his face... But it seems that Blue Boss and Sister Haiyan are definitely having sex... Could it be that I'm cheating on them again? ? Ps: I wonder if there is a small bug. Jiujiu said earlier that the person who killed Haiyan was similar to Feizhen. Did Feizhen and Jiujiu know each other before? ? It doesn't seem to be mentioned in the previous article.
Oh haha~I guessed the plot~ As expected, I met Blue Boss at the wedding banquet. But something unexpected happened, that is Haiyan's sister and that mysterious unforgivable mistake. Is it related to blue boss? Could it be that Boss Blue is approaching Jiujiu because of Sister Haiyan? ? (This is my unscrupulous YY... Ignore it...) I have a small suggestion. I feel that when Blue Boss and Jiujiu met, the portrayal of the two people was a bit lacking. Blue Boss's behavior and Jiujiu's psychology are a bit like this suddenly. Wouldn't it be better to be more delicate and hazy? ?
I'm back to make a comment~ After reading this chapter, I have begun to appreciate the power and complexity of your story behind it. In just four chapters, many entangled characters appeared one after another, including Kisuke, Gin, Haiyan, Rangiku... Probably the only thing missing is the blue boss. Moreover, the plot of opening a clothing store is really unexpected. I am very looking forward to whether there will be foreshadowing or the like later~ The silent and tacit dialogue between Haiyan and Jiujiu towards the end was very good~ the character traits of the two people were highlighted~ I guess in the next chapter, we are going to have a wedding ceremony and meet the blue boss? O(∩_∩)O haha~
It seems very esoteric and I don't really understand it.
One word: good Two words: very good Three words: very good Four words: extremely good Five words: I'll take you away Six words: Keep up the good work