(Sasuke X Naruto) The Sun in the Palm of My Hand

What my wife wrote is really cruel! It really made me cry in the middle and later stages. I really regret that I only saw my wife's writing now. Thinking about this article in 2009, I only saw it at 25. I really want to praise my wife's writing style of writing abuse 10,000 times! ! It's really good! The twists and turns in the plot can help readers understand the love and hatred between Zuo Ming and Zuo Ming? Anyway, it's just that my wife's writing skills are good!

Wow, wow, I finished it in the wee hours of the morning before going to bed. The writing is so great that I don't even know what to comment on. It tortured them to death and made me cry. Every time I felt like he, I would start to abuse again. Poor me, I was tortured. It's so easy to play with in the palm of your hand [heartbroken], but the writing is very good. It's the most delicious fanfic among the Zuoming rice I've eaten. Although this bowl of rice was more than ten years ago, it still tastes good [love eyes]. I'm a little regretful that I didn't see the meat [shy]

Real! My wife writes very well! It's really cruel! If it hadn't been for the bad ending, there would have been another girl in the world who was heartbroken after reading Zuo Ming's sadistic novel.

It's really amazing, and it's also painful in the middle. It just feels like they have a hard time whining.

Real! My wife writes very well! It's really cruel! If it hadn't been for the bad ending, there would have been another girl in the world who was heartbroken after reading Zuo Ming's sadistic novel.

I like abuse stories very much, but it has to be he. If it is be, I will be really sad for a long time. Thank you to the author for letting them do it under such abusive circumstances. I am really happy ^_^

This was the first Zuo Mingwen I read. I read many more later, but the one I remember the most is the sun in my hand! I love you, madam! Thank you, madam, for writing such a good work! (Leave a comment three times)

The author Jubi is Chef Sasuke, I really hope Naruto won't forgive Erzhu so quickly! ! What a scumbag. He hurt Ming Bao so much and cannot be forgiven so easily! However, one thing is that Yiyi is really good-looking and quite restores the character of the original work. At that time, Erzhuzi was really a crazy person, and Mingbao was really an angel.

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad

It took me three hours to read this article. To be honest, my wife's writing style is very good. Among the many Naruto fanfics I have read, the characters in this one are not very bad. ? The actions of childhood, the memories of childhood, and those young and ignorant feelings pulled the two people together. From the beginning to the end, there is little talk or love between the two people, but they can give people a feeling that they are very good and they are very suitable. The article was indeed cruel, but it also made the previous relationship between Sasuke and Naruto stronger. It was as if Naruto approached Sasuke at the beginning because Sasuke was as lonely as him, and he cautiously approached little by little, eager for contact and fearful at the same time. Never stopped chasing Sasuke for a moment? Even though his chest was penetrated by Sasuke himself, he still insisted on taking him back to Konoha and their home.,,, "",,, From the beginning to the end, Naruto was like a moth, even though he knew there was an open flame in front of him, he rushed in regardless of his own safety. Even though he knew that Sasuke was burdened with a lot and it would be dangerous for him to follow him, he still wanted to save him without hesitation. As for Sasuke, he has always been bound by the words revenge and power. His feelings for Naruto were also annoyed at the beginning. He wanted to stop the emergence of this abnormal emotion but was helpless. Can't climb out of the big pit called "Naruto". He wanted to protect Naruto but found that he was helpless. During the battle with Naruto, he wanted to cruelly cut off the bond between him and Naruto, but when they met again, he said, "Follow me." He could never let go of Naruto. The word "Naruto" was like an inner demon that lingered in his heart, wanting to cut it off and protect it. This thought made him hurt Naruto again and again while regretting his actions. The two emotions of hatred and love have been tormenting Sasuke. He wanted to escape and cut off ruthlessly. In the end, everything fell apart when he once again penetrated Naruto's chest with his own hands. Sasuke wanted Naruto, wanted everything about him, wanted him to be his only, wanted to protect him. Sasuke is like a madman, torturing others and himself at the same time. The relationship between Zuo Ming and Zuo Ming is like a redemption. They are each other's sun and the light in each other's world. There is no cruelty, it's just that one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer. Both of them want to give each other the best, but at the same time they are awkwardly competing with each other and neither of them wants to bow their heads. (The above is just my personal opinion) Finally, let's talk about my wife. My wife's writing is very good, and her emotional descriptions are very delicate! I hope that my wife will continue to work hard. Of course, there are still some areas where the article is a bit broken and I hope that my wife can improve it.