Walking on Thin Ice

I burst into tears when I saw it. It's not that I want to be the king, but I'm too involved and don't have time to leave a message.

I read the whole book in three days I burst into tears when I finally watched it~ There are so many things I want to say and feel, but I don't even know what to say. . . The last 10 chapters are so depressing and sadistic By the way, are you really your biological mother = = Or, are you a stepmother who finally woke up~~ Tears running~~ Watching the complete version of me also gives me the feeling that I have been on a long journey = = What a sense of vicissitudes~ My suggestion is, the plot has too many twists and turns T_T The battle line is a bit long and the plot is a bit repetitive However, overall I still like this book~ I hope you will continue to create good works~ I support you!

I'm so tired after sitting all day. I finally finished reading it carefully. I'm so happy. I've witnessed another touching story. Thank you. Like

Read it in one sitting. . . The ending is finally HE. . . So pretty

It took me a day and a half, switching between mobile phones and computers, and I read it carefully. It has been a long time since I had a long article that attracted me to read it all. It was very exciting! PS: The heroine before falling in love with Shen Muyun reminded me of a certain singer ^_^

Finally finished reading it! Good!

I finished reading it in one go. To be honest, I really admire you~~ I like the heroine so much~~

I left a comment and came as promised. I read both the article and the Y article, so I hope that the comments will be from both the author's and the reader's perspective. However, if there are any mistakes in the words, please don't be sad and hope that you can work hard, haha. 1. Let's first talk about a feature or problem of this article. Scene transition. Adults deeply love the influence of scene changes in film and television works, and use the scene change methods of film and television dramas directly in written works. However, the expression methods of images and text are very different, and the feelings given to the audience are also very different. Texts give people a more malleable feeling than images, which means they have more meaningful meanings. Direct scene changes without connection will be too abrupt and overwhelming. The flavor of the previous episode ended abruptly, but the next episode seemed to be forced to accept. However, in the author's later narration, this problem gradually faded away, although it still exists. 2. The most attractive thing about the story is that the heroine is excellent and strong. However, such an excellent and strong woman sheds more tears than the heroines in many other novels who do not have such a halo. The "common tears" setting is a bit disharmonious. 3. I seem to remember that the author said in a certain chapter at the beginning that it was his first time writing an article, so the preparation was a bit slow. Let me briefly talk about this issue and discuss it. In fact, to put it bluntly, this article would be more than half its current length. I personally feel that when I watched the second half, I started to feel restless. In fact, for a novel that is entirely centered on emotions, the biggest problem with being too long is that the more you write it, the easier it is to fall into a cliché and turn into a stinky and long Taiwanese drama. Why? Because human emotions are nothing more than a few types: shyness, confession, love, jealousy, sweetness, wavering, choice, care, etc. In order to express these basic elements, the available plots are only those that are commonly used, because it is difficult to create very novel plots. Therefore, the author always works hard on character creation. However, for romance novels, the characters will not be too many or complex, and the character creation can be completed within a similar length. Therefore, if the story cannot be completed at the appropriate time, the plot will inevitably develop. However, as mentioned before, it is not easy to innovate the plot, so it will inevitably lead to the more it is written, the more cliché it becomes and the story becomes useless. In addition, the emotions that humans express love as mentioned above are also established, such as jealousy. It is good if a story can be successfully expressed once and make it impressive. And if you perform it once and continue to perform it, it is likely that there will not be very good results. For example, Liu Kun, Qiao Lin, and He Ping, these three people successively caused a little jealousy between the male and female protagonists, and they kept discounting it. Later, it simply made people think, are these two people still finished? This is actually the same as the plot problem mentioned above. The excessive length is really a difficult problem to deal with for a novel that is purely about emotions. Those long articles must be written with other thematic elements and love combined together. Another thematic element shapes the platform of the story and also becomes an element of sublimating love. In fact, 3 is the point I want to talk about most in this article. 4. In addition to the above, I want to start talking about the advantages of adult literature. The adults are still very skillful in shaping the characters. Each character does not have too many inflexible things, and basically makes people feel comfortable. Being able to write the characters without too many flaws is a manifestation of the writing skills. In romance stories with business as the background, many authors do not have a certain knowledge background to build a financial and business platform. However, from the text, it can be seen that if the author is not engaged in related industries, then he has carefully prepared relevant knowledge. Although the relevant statements only account for a small proportion of the story, it is worthy of our praise for this article. The article shows us an excellent female protagonist. I think girls like to read romantic fantasies in romance novels, but today's romance novels are far from satisfying us if they only have romantic and unreal love. Letting girls see their own beauty and value in novels is what romance novels should give us at the same time. Overall, this is a well-written, well-written, and readable story. I hope the author can continue to write beautiful stories and beautiful heroines.

I left a comment and came as promised. I read both the article and the Y article, so I hope that the comments will be from both the author's and the reader's perspective. However, if there are any mistakes in the words, please don't be sad and hope that you can work hard, haha. 1. Let's first talk about a feature or problem of this article. Scene transition. Adults deeply love the influence of scene changes in film and television works, and use the scene change methods of film and television dramas directly in written works. However, the expression methods of images and text are very different, and the feelings given to the audience are also very different. Texts give people a more malleable feeling than images, which means they have more meaningful meanings. Direct scene changes without connection will be too abrupt and overwhelming. The flavor of the previous episode ended abruptly, but the next episode seemed to be forced to accept. However, in the author's later narration, this problem gradually faded away, although it still exists. 2. The most attractive thing about the story is that the heroine is excellent and strong. However, such an excellent and strong woman sheds more tears than the heroines in many other novels who do not have such a halo. The "common tears" setting is a bit disharmonious. 3. I seem to remember that the author said in a certain chapter at the beginning that it was his first time writing an article, so the preparation was a bit slow. Let me briefly talk about this issue and discuss it. In fact, to put it bluntly, this article would be more than half its current length. I personally feel that when I watched the second half, I started to feel restless. In fact, for a novel that is entirely centered on emotions, the biggest problem with being too long is that the more you write it, the easier it is to fall into a cliché and turn into a stinky and long Taiwanese drama. Why? Because human emotions are nothing more than a few types: shyness, confession, love, jealousy, sweetness, wavering, choice, care, etc. In order to express these basic elements, the available plots are only those that are commonly used, because it is difficult to create very novel plots. Therefore, the author always works hard on character creation. However, for romance novels, the characters will not be too many or complex, and the character creation can be completed within a similar length. Therefore, if the story cannot be completed at the appropriate time, the plot will inevitably develop. However, as mentioned before, it is not easy to innovate the plot, so it will inevitably lead to the more it is written, the more cliché it becomes and the story becomes useless. In addition, the emotions that humans express love as mentioned above are also established, such as jealousy. It is good if a story can be successfully expressed once and make it impressive. And if you perform it once and continue to perform it, it is likely that there will not be very good results. For example, Liu Kun, Qiao Lin, and He Ping, these three people successively caused a little jealousy between the male and female protagonists, and they kept discounting it. Later, it simply made people think, are these two people still finished? This is actually the same as the plot problem mentioned above. The excessive length is really a difficult problem to deal with for a novel that is purely about emotions. Those long articles must be written with other thematic elements and love combined together. Another thematic element shapes the platform of the story and also becomes an element of sublimating love. In fact, 3 is the point I want to talk about most in this article. 4. In addition to the above, I want to start talking about the advantages of adult literature. The adults are still very skillful in shaping the characters. Each character does not have too many inflexible things, and basically makes people feel comfortable. Being able to write the characters without too many flaws is a manifestation of the writing skills. In romance stories with business as the background, many authors do not have a certain knowledge background to build a financial and business platform. However, from the text, it can be seen that if the author is not engaged in related industries, then he has carefully prepared relevant knowledge. Although the relevant statements only account for a small proportion of the story, it is worthy of our praise for this article. The article shows us an excellent female protagonist. I think girls like to read romantic fantasies in romance novels, but today's romance novels are far from satisfying us if they only have romantic and unreal love. Letting girls see their own beauty and value in novels is what romance novels should give us at the same time. Overall, this is a well-written, well-written, and readable story. I hope the author can continue to write beautiful stories and beautiful heroines.

King ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah Brother morning glory ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Introduce Sister Xuan and Sister Yanran to me ah ah ah ah ah I went to stick them and they all left!! I admire them so much ahhhhhhhhhhhh OK, OK, OK, OK, OK!!!