The Wound of Parting: Mushishi Fan Fiction

Yin Gu no longer remembers Chang An and what happened before

I read this short story and it was very good. The picture constructed by the text is very smooth. It has a very similar feel to the original scenes of Mushi Master~~~ Because I started to know Xiao Xia from the cute story, I didn't expect to see such a beautiful short story, and I was pleasantly surprised.

Don't let it end~~Hmph! ! !

The duck sat tangled on the top of the mountain, and the duck feathers on his head had been blown into a mess of straw: "Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. Com, Wa wants to go home, woo woo, Wa will no longer pursue the realm, woo woo, who is going to take Wa home, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Wa doesn't want to become a savage on the top of the mountain, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..."

Naturally, a certain duck sat alone on the top of the mountain and continued to blow in the wind. From time to time, the wind could be heard muttering to himself, "Mother worm", "Daughter worm", "This", "That", "Is it this or that", "Not this", "Not that"... Well, in short, it was chaos... The last drop ended with a wailing cry: "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, aaaaaaaaaa, the strength, the part--I'm crazy!"

The duck stood on the top of a mountain where the wind was roaring and looked into the distance. Suddenly, it raised its paws and pointed to the distant sky (pretending to be serious): "This is the realm that Wa has been pursuing all his life!" Crowd: "Oh, it turns out that my lifelong wish is to be a wild man in the mountains!" Duck: "..."

Let's read this short story first, let's talk about our feelings~ I have never read the original work, only the movie, so I won't comment on the characters. I read this article as the original, so don't blame me if I'm wrong~ The author's writing is quite good, smooth and comfortable, and very visual. As I read, animations automatically appeared in my head, haha But the biggest problem is that the plot is a bit thin. I also write Japanese-style novels. I think the biggest common problem with this kind of novels is that words are more important than plot and they pay too much attention to details. Looking at Japanese translated novels, great writers can write brilliant details, but many of them appear awkward if you are not careful. But this is a short story, so it's pretty good! Let's write it as a series of stories. It might be better. Come on! I also have the dinosaur egg one in my collection. I will take a look when I have time~