Ink in Pale Hues

T-T hates being abused the most

Cover your big face, Xiao Xie is so cute

I am a reader who rarely writes comments, but I think your articles are well written and leave a mark for you. I hope you write more articles like this, but longer ones would be even better!

I also want a Xie Jian who will never leave me.

Comment-light color becomes ink (This is my first time writing a review. The author apologizes if the writing is not good~\\(≧▽≦)/~) I don't know how to write polite words, and I'm too lazy to analyze the structure of the article, the logic of the story, etc. As soon as I opened this article, I was shocked by the high click-through rate! I feel so guilty looking at it. After reading the first chapter, I was attracted by the storyline. I really like this way of inserting narratives. The two people's college life is interspersed with stories from their childhood. Xiao Xia (the author is big~ I really like the word Xia in you~ just call her Xiao Xia~) did not directly mention the entanglement or secret love history between Xie and Fang when they were young, which is why I can continue to watch it! I hardly paid much attention when I was writing the article, but I discovered a lot when I read the article. Although the writing style of some Guliang's novels is very fresh and feels good, the fascinating factor is still missing. Sometimes when you read Chapter 7 or Chapter 8 and you still haven't seen the whole story, you will inevitably get confused. Xiao Xia's story is very interesting. After reading the first chapter, I couldn't help but read the second chapter, wanting to get a closer look at the nonsense these two children had when they were young. I think Xiaoxia is very powerful! When I was collecting the article, I actually wanted to skip the campus article, but it ignited my cuteness! I think Xiaoxia's writing is very good, and it's not the same as ordinary campus writing. I don't know why, but after reading too many clichés, I don't want to read those articles that are dedicated to college dormitory life or cohabitation life. Those articles feel like they have the same tone. Although they are funny, the emotions of those articles are too complicated and contradictory to the theme of campus articles. After reading too many, I will get tired. From the beginning to the end, the story of "Lanse Chengmo" has a light and warm feeling. There is no overly strong emotion. It is simply the longing between two shy little boys. It has no ancient gorgeousness and is not mixed with too much worldliness, love and hatred (you don't have to worry about being abused╮(╯▽╰)╭ and the reader feels comfortable). It is like listening to the boy next door narrating his first love. Although it is young, it is full of true feelings. Every ordinary little thing, under the rendering of the two boys, is like a drop of light ink droplets, exuding a fragrance, but not strong, which makes people want to touch those warm past events. When the stories of the two people accumulate, the bond between Xie and Fang gradually deepens. The original light ink droplets accumulate into thick ink, and the two people's hearts become one, blended in this ink, and they cannot be separated even if they want to. The two characters in the article are Fang Zhao and Xie Jian. The first three chapters are written from Fang Yao's perspective, the last three chapters are from Xie Jian's point of view, and the extra chapters are about the lives of Fang Yao and Xie Jian. I like this way of writing very much. Describing it from the perspectives of two people makes the article appear not to be single. This method of description can use the least amount of space to express the character's heart and reflect the character's personality, and it will not appear to only start from one person's perspective and ignore the inner thoughts of another person. Personally, I prefer Xiao Xie, he is so cute with his dark side, especially the part where he seduces Xiao Fang. The author first writes from Xiaofang's perspective that he finally hooked up with Xiao Xie, and then slowly describes their hookup process from Xiao Xie's perspective. The analysis bit by bit shows Xiao Xie's good intentions! The description of Xiao Fang's roommate seemed a little vague. At first I thought Xiao Fang's roommate would make a fuss when seeing Xiao Xie like that~~ But it doesn't matter (By the way, is it because Xiaofang is always unlucky when he sees Xiao Xie because he puts all his thoughts on Xiao Xie and then accidentally gets into trouble?~~~Hehehe·~~) What do you say about the extra chapter? I can't say that it's a bit of a joke. It's good to struggle with it occasionally. If the extra chapter is so sweet... It would be a bit weird~ Besides, the relationship between two people will deepen if they rub more and more~~~Xiao Xie in the extra chapter is so considerate! So considerate! Xiao Xie is a gentle gong who occasionally has a dark side! ! Xiao Fang is being honest Anyway, I really like your article (M: Are you interested in writing a few more extras?! Xiaoxia: Die! ! I want to update the article! ! Embarrassing) Okay, okay~~It's about a thousand words~~The mission of my first long review is completed! ! ! The author is very awesome! ! ! Come on! ! ! I'll check out your column later =3

It looked like he had been holding it in for a long time. . . . . . . . ↑ When I saw this sentence, I was eating plums. Plums suddenly smelled like bird droppings.

The attitude of the parents, especially Xie's mother, was too harsh. Was it because of space constraints that the relationship had to end quickly?

Xiao Xie is so cute~ Cover your face

I have BLX and I finished the ending with tears in my eyes. Sister nurse, you are so healed><

I like it~ although the ending is a bit rushed. I have basically read your articles, as well as your collections and some of your comments. Although there are not many, I firmly believe that more and more people will know you and like you in the future^_^. After all, the author has to go through this desolate process in the beginning, so adults, don't give up, come on ↖(^ω^)↗. Looking forward to your new work!