Women in novels need to have some special appeal.
For example,
A beauty who could topple a kingdom, a rose in troubled times
Charming and sweet, considerate and understanding
Adorable and innocent
Strong and patient, tempered into steel
Cool and aloof, as if she were an immortal
Sadly, the heroine of this story doesn’t seem to have any of the above.
If I had to find something appealing about her...
Does having a little girl’s body and an old man’s heart count?
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