After Our Divorce, My Ex-Husband and I Were Both Reborn

The first 30% of the article is about the heroine escaping from her husband's house, and her emotional choices after rebirth are described in detail and vividly, but then it becomes redundant. 1. The setting of Shen (the second male lead) remembering the memories of his past life seems abrupt, perhaps to speed up the emotional development of the heroine and the second male lead in their next life. The second male lead acted as a control group and showed enough tolerance and tenderness to the female protagonist. Later, it was revealed that he was the heir of the former prince, and later he fulfilled the love between the male and female protagonists out of guilt. These changes did not provide a reasonable transition. 2. The relationship between men and women has always been one of her escaping and him chasing, but their emotional changes are static. In the last three chapters, the heroine accepted this relationship "by mistake". 3 Part of the advantage of Machiavellianism is that its logic is complete, and everything from dividing the world to unifying it can be self-justified. The establishment of the "Jimin Division" to accept women and the title of "Mrs. Jin" to the heroine also demonstrate the author's idealism and female perspective. The problem is that these reasons can only be used as an outline, and the details cannot withstand scrutiny. For example, how does the heir of the former prince operate in Jiangnan, and why can he compete with the Wei Dynasty? The list goes on and on. In summary, the following improvements can be made: 1. How did the second male lead meet Ji Chu in his previous life, and how did Ji Chu impress him. It is difficult for a gentle person to be unable to bear the great responsibilities of the world. The second male lead giving up the power at his fingertips at the critical moment also proves his infatuation. Or it can be changed to a person who is indifferent to fame and fortune and has a great love for the world (in fact, the author also wants to write it this way), but such people often do not value small affections, so how did Ji Chu melt his cold heart? If you are a man who is as smart and gentle as water, he will be indecisive in the face of decision-making. 2. The relationship between the male and female protagonists can gradually change. 3. The author's writing skills are insufficient in terms of political strategy. I personally feel that he is not able to control the powerful and huge world view. He is like a child dressed in heavy Chinese clothes, with personal grudges underneath. We might as well put the machinations in the background of the entanglement between the three protagonists. They are duckweeds in troubled times. We can weaken this heaviness and focus on their love entanglements. Advantages: The male protagonist - Nie Hengzhi, he is arrogant and humble, arrogant and inferior. He loves the country but loves beauty even more. He slowly loses and then regains it. Finally, I learned how to love, put down my dignity, open my heart, and gained my own happiness. The transformation of the male protagonist's character is more delicately portrayed, and the character of the little crybaby is quite cute. Who doesn't love little puppies?

After reading it, I hope the ending is what the author wanted. The male protagonist gets a female protagonist who loves another man The female protagonist is particular about marrying the male protagonist and loving the second male protagonist in her heart The second male lead shrinks up and becomes a Taoist priest, with a peaceful mind like a white moonlight, secretly peeking into the heroine's life. The endings of all three are regrettable. If this is the ending the author wanted, then I respect it.

The ending ended too quickly... There was no emotional transition between getting back together with the first guy, making the second guy look like a tool, but it was obvious that the first girl did have feelings for him, otherwise she would have wanted to marry him in her second life. Why.

The time span of this book is a bit long, so I reviewed it based on my review record. The character I hate the most in this book is the hero's father, Duke Yuan Ding. He seems to have had an affair with Li when the hero's mother was still alive. He is unqualified as a husband and unqualified as a father, but he still skipped to the end, giving him face. Does he know that he can't afford his son, and he can't afford him as his original wife, but he has the nerve to interfere in the eldest son's brilliant career, which is extremely shameless!

After reading it, I felt that I might really be sick. I just really liked the male protagonist, but I didn't like the part where the second male protagonist and the female protagonist were together. Especially after the second male protagonist died, the female protagonist still liked the second male protagonist. I actually thought that it would be great if there was a time-traveling woman or a woman who traveled through books to save the male protagonist. But in the end, I was still very satisfied?

He is completely unreasonable

Shen Tingsong is finally dead, great!

My current mentality: Let me see how this works

I haven't been here for many days. I found it better to continue saving.

This is not a male supporting character, he is simply a villain. I am so angry with him that he actually abandons the heroine and becomes a white moon.