When James was five, he had an argument with his father and ran out of the hospital room by himself. At the corner, he happened to bump into a fair-skinned little girl…
Childhood sweethearts: James Potter X Luna Black
Sirius: I thought of you as a brother, and you want to date my sister?!
Regulus: Please stay away from her.
Bella: Get lost! You despicable Potter.
Narcissa: That Potter is no good. Don't let him fool you, Rose~
Snape: How can you be as foolish as Lily? Don't let that slug cloud your judgment!
James: Who are you calling a slug?
Keir Parkinson: To atone, for you, I can sacrifice myself. You are my sun.
Theme: Falling for James all over again.
My personal opinion is that the length of the paragraphs can be improved. It's a bit tiring to read a long paragraph.
Sirius seems to be acting a little bit, and I think it would be better to use Sirius (just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)