Ye Youzhou transmigrated into a novel about a universally adored protagonist, as the protagonist’s senior fellow disciple.
Two-thirds of the book was devoted to the protagonist’s tangled love life. The plot-focused sections had less description than the protagonist’s appearance, but Ye Youzhou still read the whole thing.
That was because the main villain was so vividly written that he made readers grind their teeth with hatred. Ye Youzhou kept following the updates, waiting for the protagonist to take him down.
But the protagonist’s daily life consisted of being pushed against walls or drugged. It wasn’t until the very end that the protagonist’s defeat of the villain was mentioned in a few brief strokes.
After transmigrating into the book, Ye Youzhou watched the villain start wreaking havoc, while the protagonist, the only person the book said could kill him, was still busy falling in love with other people.
Ye Youzhou angrily embarked on the point-of-view-fan path of no return.
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His junior fellow disciple met someone late at night. Ye Youzhou drove his sword between the two figures in the dark, separating them.
Facing their startled expressions, Ye Youzhou calmly sheathed his sword. “Sorry, my hand slipped.”
His junior fellow disciple kept drinking and taking aphrodisiacs, so Ye Youzhou never dared let him have even a single cup of wine. He took every drink offered to his junior fellow disciple himself.
After working so diligently to block the protagonist’s romantic prospects, Ye Youzhou thought it was only a matter of time before the story got back on track.
Until one day, his junior fellow disciple was pressed against a wall with someone again. Only this time, it was Ye Youzhou.
Looking at his junior fellow disciple pinning him firmly in place, Ye Youzhou furrowed his brow. “Junior brother, it’s time to cultivate.”
His junior fellow disciple lowered his eyes, his long lashes casting half his face in shadow. “It’s just the two of us here, senior brother. You don’t need to put on an act.”
His warm, damp breath brushed close to Ye Youzhou’s ear. “I’ve known your feelings for me for a long time.”
Ye Youzhou: Feelings? What feelings? Junior brother, don’t come any closer!
Where exactly did he go wrong?!
A single-minded cultivator, stoic bottom x black-hearted protagonist, top
Theme: Keep the heart of a dreamer
The beauty of this article touched my heart!! It's a pity that the final scene where the senior brother entered the battle and the world ended was a bit too hasty, especially if there had been more foreshadowing and more psychological pull when entering the battle, 555 would have had the potential to be sour and sweet. Seeing the self-pity, his face turned pale and asked the master to let him out. Then the master closed his eyes and said "Seventeen, you have entered the obstacle". I really knelt down directly. I really hate that the plot point was so hastily skipped! It would be nice to write more about the point of entering the barrier, and the character design of Zhou Lian is really good and really nice xzl. It's a pity that there is no support at the back. I could have cried more to the limit, but overall the flaws are not hidden, I still love Youzhou and self-pity!
It feels a bit unfinished () The ending is too hasty. I really like the character setting of this article. It's a pity.
… I always feel like it's a bit unfinished
How should I put it, it felt like it was unfinished, the ending was too inexplicable, and the extra modern writing was also very strange. I always felt that the character design was broken, and the two people always had a feeling of respecting each other as guests. But overall this book is still very interesting. The setting was very attractive to me at first. I was a little hesitant when I saw that the number of collectors was only a few thousand, because I was afraid that the writing was not good, but it turned out to be really good! I really like this kind of setting where you can travel through books and naturally use the spiritual sword. I really hate the setting where you can travel through books and find out that you can't use the spells and waste the identity of the original master. It's like a waste. All in all, the flaws outweigh the flaws, so cheers on the author! You will definitely write a perfect book!
It's a bit confusing to start with the episode where the protagonist of the world of cultivating immortals dies, and then immediately follow the modern plot. Looking at the comments, it seems like there was a long break in the middle? The modern chapter really feels very different from the characters and the way of getting along with the main story. It's a bit regretful, and I'm a bit worried about the follow-up to the world I traveled through. . . .
Junior brother's character is actually very fair and dark, but he seems to be very obedient in front of his senior brother. The modern Wen Bing doesn't pretend to be obedient and has a more mature and calm temperament, which makes Zhouzhou feel a bit strange.
Am I the first commentator on this chapter? Let me tell you something, the back of this book is really baffling
So strange. . . . The ending is good but not good
Although in the main text it is the junior year, the senior brother is still very mature. In the extra modern chapter, it feels like the junior brother has become more mature than the senior brother.
It was quite sudden. The world of cultivation disappeared, and the world switched to modern times in seconds. It felt like a loss.