How Well Do Guardian Eggs Fit in Yokohama?

Blurb written on 2021/09/04 The main story is complete. A few things to know before reading (tips): 1. Guardian eggs generally fall asleep once they reach adulthood. The heroine's situation is an author-created exception, a childhood memory I thought was fun to write. 2. The heroine is a sickly beauty with a cool temperament. This is my own take on a Mary Sue story, with plenty of author-created settings and plot holes. It's a big, messy mash-up that won't stand up to scrutiny, just a brainless Mary Sue story! 3. No CP! No CP! No CP! But there will be one-sided crushes! Other characters will have one-sided crushes on the heroine! On Jinjiang, any romantic thread, including a one-sided crush, counts as romance, so this is filed under romance. 4. My writing is just good enough to get the story onto the page. 5. Please don't give unsolicited writing advice or derail the discussion. Don't make yourself suffer; if it's not to your taste, just click the X. That's all. Divider Blurb Every child has an egg in their heart. Inside that egg is their ideal self, invisible to the naked eye. Divider "When I was little, I really did a lot of silly things. Like standing on the balcony and wishing on a shooting star that a few Guardian Eggs would appear in my bed the next morning." "But I never imagined that on the day I came of age, I'd wake up and find that there really was an egg in my bed!" Suzuki Aoi: Thanks for asking. I'm in Yokohama, and I just woke up to find that the dimensional barrier has broken. But... what kind of joke is this? I'm in a hot-blooded shonen manga, a place where accidents happen all the time, yet I've been given the powers of a shoujo manga! Intended message: When prosperous, help the world; when poor, cultivate yourself.