On the other side of the Earth, there is another Earth
On the other side of Prince of Tennis, there is another Prince of Tennis
And on the other side of all those schools where the protagonists battle for supremacy, there is another school, one that gathers countless protagonists:
Die Fa Bo!!!!
A group of young people, and their ideals and convictions.
A word of warning to everyone reading
The protagonist of this story, Yi Yin, will sometimes do a string of harmlessly idiotic things, so you'll have to put up with him...
The second protagonist, Yi Tianji, is someone you'll have to put up with even more: she gets a little violent now and then, and her brain short-circuits from time to time...
And then, on top of that, you'll have to put up with the supporting characters occasionally taking over as protagonists and doing even more outrageous and violent things...
In the end, this story can be summed up in one word: chaotic.
If you can't stand the writing style, please embrace the little red X in the upper right corner of the page. Look how bright and adorable it is...
If you're going to leave abusive comments, then you'd better embrace that little red X in the upper right corner too. You deserve to click it a hundred times before you start, until your computer crashes...
One more thing:
I sincerely hope you'll leave a comment.
That's all.
So long.
o(∩_∩)o
Is this how you change the article? Stupid or not?
Why is it in Japanese again? Make up the word count? You are indeed going to be scolded to death~!!!! Deserve it!
The writing is not bad, but I have some questions (you can also say questions, (*^__^*) hehe): NO.1: Why are the chances of princes appearing so small? As we all know (maybe not many people think so, but at least that's what I think), isn't the purpose of reading Internet King fanfic just to see the interaction between the protagonist and the princes (or the interaction between the princes)? However, I only spent a few words describing the princes at the beginning, and then it became a world of original characters~~~ This always makes people feel very awkward, because since you only want to write the stories of the protagonists you created, then don't lie to us, uh, kind and honest readers in the name of Prince of Tennis fan fiction! I always speak very strongly, first of all please don't mind, and then I hope you can listen to my advice. NO.2: Why does the protagonist appear in the first few chapters, but let us start from Chapter 10? If you don't write well, you shouldn't give up because of your own laziness. Otherwise, what's the point of writing the first few pictures? Is it used to make up the word count? I personally think you just don't care about your work!!! If you cherish this work, then you won't be so perfunctory! Also, it would be foolish to let readers read it from the middle and think that readers will collect or support the article you just thought was good because of it in the future! There are three reasons: ① Readers come here for the princes, but you let the readers see that there is no trace of princes at all, and they even went to China. . . . . . ② My sense of self-superiority (self-righteousness) is too strong. Even though my writing is not very good, I still feel good about myself, and I still wonder how much others will like it. (This is purely a personal guess, but there is a 99.9999...% Possibility that I have such thoughts). . . . ③He ran to China after writing it in big letters?? Very surprising to us readers. And I want the author to ask himself: When writing about the King of Internet in China (currently in Chapter 12, except for the first three chapters, there is no prince), why didn't you remove the last two words "King of Internet" from the title? In other words, it is purely a work of your nerves. . . Or change these two words to "talk about China affairs", that's what it should be. . . . . . . . It turns to the problem of not having a prince again, I am sweating ||||| To be honest, it's pretty good written in big letters. Really, it's definitely true. But if I hadn't always had poor eyesight and didn't see the tenth picture at the end, I would have thought there was no prince at all, so I would have just closed the window. . . . . . But for the things that I might think are very shocking later, I feel like they might be, uh, very boring! Don't be angry, even though I have said so many things before... That made you angry... Speaking of which, I said a lot of nonsense (excluding my opinions), o(∩_∩)o I remembered something again (I forgot to mention it just now): I think it's pretty good overall, and the writing is just okay. . . It's just a bit of a character introduction, what should I say? It's just too story-like, because character introduction and background introduction are only secondary. The main thing is to introduce the person's personality, age, birthday, etc. Does this give away the plot a bit? Feeling (personal feeling, personal feeling~) Haha, that's all I have to say. If I say anything else, I'll be very angry. I don't know if it's 1,000 words or not. I once heard someone say what happens if a long review exceeds 1,000 words. Anyway, it's very good for the author, and it seems to be the same for the reviewer, (*^__^*). If it's less than 1,000 words, don't blame me. Finally, I sincerely hope that you will listen to my opinion. I will be very grateful to you, little lady.
I work so hard, but why is no one commenting? No one is watching~~~~~~~~~~~~~5555555555555555555555555555555555 = - =Is what I wrote really not good-looking?
Is it true that no one is watching? So a certain work is suspected of abandoning the article...
By the way, I don't know anything about tennis, so I just wrote some random stuff. If anyone knows, please point out what I'm doing wrong. I'd be very grateful~~~·
Yes, I watched it. But... I can't understand it, it feels confusing. This is your first time writing it. Keep working hard. I believe I will get better as I write. Please keep working hard...
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