The Imperial Tomb

Some people may think that the ending left to Hu Tianlei is too merciful. I will explain a few words about this characterization here. First of all, he is not a good person, but when I write, I will not just write about the shortcomings. It is not just about him, but about every character. I will also cover the advantages and disadvantages. The conflict between him and Du Zijing could have been treated lightly (I also hesitated at the time, that is, not to have a sexual encounter, but to simply abduct and threaten the heroine). After careful consideration, I decided to write it more seriously because of the following issues: First, the class problem in the feudal period was serious, and bureaucrats would not take the people seriously. Hu Tianlei was a scumbag in this regard. He liked to be superior and did not care about class oppression. This scene is to show how bad Mr. Hu is and completely eliminate the possibility of him becoming a candidate for the male lead. Two, the second reason is that I am not good and I am lazy. There was also a scene in the original outline. After the Du family gained power, Du Zijing chose to enter politics. The ending of these two supporting characters. I originally wanted Du Zijing to personally bring down the Hu family and avenge their great revenge. On the one hand, from the perspective of the story, good will be rewarded with good and evil will be punished with evil. On the other hand, I wanted to reflect Du Zijing's growth. But I skipped it. Once I write about the ending of the Hu family, I definitely can't just write about his family, but also involve the development of various figures in the Du family in the officialdom... I couldn't contain 100,000 words, so I finally stopped at the founding ceremony of the People's Republic of China. If I have the chance to write a side story, I will mention the ending of these two people, as well as the married life of Ping Ping and Yuan Qing.

Female channels lack writers who focus on plot. Why so many sweet novels are criticized as industrial saccharine? The final analysis is that the plot is too poorly written. If the plot is well written, the emotional scenes can still be impressive even if they are used as embellishments. Excellent novels and TV series must be based on plot. Emotions can be present, but they are not the most important thing.

Each character has his or her own personality and persistence, so when you see two people falling in love but failing, you will cry with the characters, you will feel emotional when you see things changing, and you will feel sad when you see dilemmas and parting ways. It was actually not very satisfying to watch in the end, and no one really reached the perfect ending, but it was extremely attractive.

I think the emotional scenes are enough, but too much will make you bored, because this film is mainly about the career and growth of the heroine. The article mentions textile machines, guns, and even trains, which is of no use to the overall reform, and instead makes people feel that it is against the law. Even if the novel is fanciful, it should still fit the current environment. It can be said that a few textile machines and guns were shipped from overseas, but not too many that would make people feel whimsical and inconsistent. The heroine's abolition of the monarchy and revolution. Anyone who knows history knows that the so-called revolution first emerged from the pens of literati, and then spread throughout the country with ideas. After the collision of ideas, the environment chose the path of revolution. And here, the heroine is directly shocked with force, making people feel that the revolution seems very simple? Can you do whatever you want with force? Then there's the emotion. Many people think that the heroine and Yuan Qing are like-minded? Not at all! Throughout the story, Yuan Qing chose to always stand by the heroine's side because of his emotions. He doesn't understand the heroine and just follows her blindly. I can't see the spark of love between them, and they even get along very well. Chengye is not worthy of the heroine because he has no ambition and is old-fashioned and cannot stand side by side with the heroine. Hu Tianlei is indeed too flowery to be desirable. Originally, Zhang Tian was the most suitable, but for the sake of the heroine's great career, the author made a mistake in writing him, making him unable to match the heroine. Cao Ziting is not even a match. The one I find most difficult to let go of is Feng Yingzhi. If you insist on having someone to accompany you, you might as well be with Feng. He really understands her and getting along with her is so natural. His grandfather was killed by her mother and he lost two of his hands for her. The heroine should owe him the most in her life. If the heroine is willing to give Feng a chance, I believe that Feng will also walk on the road of reform with the heroine. Because they are two people who grew up in the same environment, as long as they are willing to talk, it is okay. Does the author think that a dull monk from a temple can have the same thoughts as a princess from a wealthy family? Although the hero does not matter where he comes from. But Yuan Qing has obviously undergone some changes as he grows up. He has just been unconditionally catering to the heroine, instead of growing up with the heroine like Feng, or he has not had a bumpy growth experience like Zhang Tian and can be shaped. I cry every time I see Feng and Yongan getting along. They are perfect together because they share the same frequency. If Pingyang hadn't killed Mr. Feng Ge, the two of them could have been together.

I think we can try to add more emotional scenes in an appropriate amount in the next book. This book doesn't contain much about emotions, but every paragraph is wonderful. The supporting characters are also different types of people, making people love and hate them. Especially Zhang Tian, ​​his masculine charm is very strong, and the description of He Ping together is full of sexual tension. Born to be reckless, he has his class limitations. Although we can see his shortcomings, there is no way not to be attracted to him.

Ah..."I am Du Ping, the one who can bring peace to the world", full of emotions

The proportion of romance in the novel is quite good. The love between Ping Ping and Ying Zhi, Princess Ping Yang and Du Li is enough to be remembered. There are too many inexplicable and inexplicable plots nowadays. It is not easy to find a strong female character who can seriously pursue a career. Come on!

Why is it called "The Tomb of the Emperor" after I read it? It is a very interesting novel with a straightforward and thrilling narration. Pingyang, Du Ping, Yuan Qing, Feng Yingzhi, Li Chengye, Chen Qianyu, even Cao Ziyan, Zhang Tian, ​​Poria, etc., The earliest Mr. Zhang, I still remember it deeply. He is not a thin piece of paper, and it really stands up to the soul. I rarely remember the names in the novel after reading it. The group portraits in this article about the Imperial Tomb are so well written. At the end, I feel like I have seen the real prosperous China. This pattern is unexpected. The reason why the novel is a novel is that it has a legendary color. It is still far, far away from being able to truly achieve it. The introduction of New Deal reforms and so on will not be so smooth, but I still want to believe it. In the romance line, Du Ping and Li Chengye's childhood sweethearts, their mutual love and affection with Feng Yingzhi, and finally their mutual acquaintance and mutual respect with Yuan Qing, the three relationships have been carried out in Du Ping's three time periods, accompanying different journeys, and are very vivid. Well, regret, reluctance, and satisfaction are all in it. As an outsider, I have been deeply moved by Feng Yingzhi. Yuan Qing is also very good. The only regret in portraying Yuan Qing is that there are too few emotional lines. I hope that there will be a sequel to fulfill my dream. I have rarely seen similar themes so far, and I look forward to a new book.

In fact, when I saw the author writing about Zhang Tian blowing up the river embankment, I had a vague feeling of paying homage to history, including Pingping saying that after her death, someone came out to overthrow the regime. Her senior brother advised her that it was the world that chose her. This is probably what the author wanted to say to the great man. The feeling of paying tribute to the motherland is reflected everywhere in the writing. I like this kind of righteousness. Support

It's finally finished, and I still want to see the extras about Du Ping and Yuan Qing. Although the heroine has experienced many hardships, she is still lucky. She has a mother, first love, ex-husband, father and senior brother who love her. The characters are very full-bodied, but they are truly ideal characters. Such a magnificent woman is difficult to find in modern times, let alone in ancient times. The princess also has great ambitions, but being born into a royal family has become her limitation, which is a pity. Pingyang, Du Li, or Mi Ying, I feel like I am a fan of this CP.