Three Sentences to Make the Dragon-Proud Hero Fall Head Over Heels for Me

Gengxiang, the writing and style are actually okay. The early and middle stages are relatively readable, but in the later stages, there are some places where it feels awkward, and there are places where it feels like it has been accelerated in some places. The plot where Shou wanted to use the attack but fell into it unknowingly was good. The psychological description of "A Gentleman Transforms into a Male Ghost" is quite delicious. The protagonist's character design is good, and the supporting characters such as Xiao Wu and Ah Sha are well portrayed. Xiao Wu is a carefree, optimistic and cheerful golden retriever. Ah Sha changed from a clever boy to a child (I think it was mainly because he got along with Shou and gradually released his nature. After all, he is indeed a child). Since the author is not writing the next article at the moment, why not revise it properly? There are typos/missing words (sometimes several words missing)/linguistic errors in almost the whole article... Also, Gong and Shou clearly have the same mind, and they could actually get together sooner. This section can reduce unnecessary length. Before the confession, there was too little foreshadowing. It feels like there is a hole that has not been filled. After Qu Ning bought the elixir, he thought that this person would have some plot points later.

I can't get enough of it [crying]. I really could use the Qidian novel as a model to write a long novel (of course, maybe considering that the author doesn't know how to write a fight scene, so he doesn't want to expand it). If the author re-opens a similar article based on the original text, and also uses the mobile phone to get God's perspective, write a long novel, I will definitely buy it [please]

Is there any classic extra story about the two of them cosplaying and going to Comic Con by themselves [Purple Sugar] kswl

Hey, why did you change your name [Glasses]? I still like the previous name. I will click in. The current name is a bit common [Spread Flowers]

I think adding one more frame will make it even more killer: the last two people hugging each other, where A Song can't see him, Xiao Sui's innocent face appears with a satisfied smile. Double black is more sexy [star eyes]

Why does it feel a bit weird (?) At the end of the writing? The rhythm of the fighting scenes is not very good. After you save me, the protagonist, I will save you. The repeated rescue complex makes me a little tired. As far as I am concerned, the whole article is more inclined to drive high and go low. The author's writing style is very good. I hope to see Da Da continue to work hard.

The early and middle stages are really good to watch, and the later stages develop so quickly that I was stunned for a while [loading][loading]

The last extra chapter always feels like it's not finished yet. I've been waiting for Xiang Zai to find out that Xiao Sui is reading this handwriting, and then solve the misunderstanding between them during the Cold War due to the Three Hundred Years Spring and Autumn Calligraphy... At that time, I saw Xiao Sui hypnotizing himself to believe that Xiang Zai's frown was because he was impatient and disliked himself (actually it was Xiang Zai's struggle with desire). My heart was broken... I have always had regrets, so I thought that the last meeting in this chapter was about confessing my feelings at that time, just like Xiao Sui showing his male ghost side... Wu wu wu, but I was caught off guard and stopped [crying] [crying] (Although I know that there is no gap between the two of them, I feel uncomfortable if I can't make up for the regret...) [Please] It would be best if Xiao Sui saw this handwriting and joked with Xiang, saying that the handwriting was ooc, and wanted to see Xiang because he was embarrassed and shy, but Xiang was silent (because he felt guilty, he was just as wet as in the calligraphy...) Xiang looked away guiltily, and Xiao Sui also understood something in the silence. He was happy at first, thinking that Xiang would like him if he lost his memory, and then he would definitely feel sorry for Xiang... He felt that Xiang had really suffered a lot on the way to like him, but he would never let Xiang go [please, please] ] The two of them were like bitter and sweet [please], and then Xiao Sui would coax Xiang. Diao Diao Xiao Sui hugged Xiang directly and started to coax: "Ah Song who is full of evil thoughts is also very cute... But I still prefer the gentle light now." Ah Song is so clear, after all, Ah Song now doesn't have to be patient at all, he can do anything to me." Xiao Sui just put herself into the mouth of the prime minister, no longer afraid of losing control of her emotions, no longer having any regrets, and completely giving herself to the prime minister [Huang Xin]

? ? ? Is it over? It was so rushed.

Five ants almost missed it