[Online Game] Passing Each Other By

Oh my god, I feel like I was coaxing a child to write it for fun.

I remember that the True Essence Beast was quite easy to fight... It seems that I didn't pick up any cultivators =v=

Let me make it clear first that I wrote this a long time ago (I didn't keep the date, so I don't know). Some of the problems may have been corrected, but I'm too lazy to look at them, so that's it. I read the article in one sitting and felt so good that I couldn't help but get out of bed and write a long review. First of all, this article feels real. Just like you said - I have been playing online games for six or seven years, and a lot of them are based on my own experiences. For this reason alone, it is much better than other articles. There are other articles that are also well written, but what? Online game experience, to be honest, is too lacking. It is not enough just by reading a few novels. It's like a person writing and acting there, a one-man show with many different names. It's my own character, my own story, and I have a lot of fun playing it. Secondly, I like the author very much. Firstly, I think you and I have similar personalities (personally, just ignore it), and secondly, we are very attracted to each other (otherwise, I wouldn't have gotten up in the middle of the night to write this thing). Meeting an article is like meeting a person. I like the article very much and the person is also very genuine. But. . . . . . Well, this article has a lot of problems. Many things you have experienced, I can understand from the sentimentality between the lines of your words. But is truth enough? Is it really okay to use such materials in the same article? A little too samey. Moreover, the skill is not enough, the relationship between the events is not handled well, and the juxtaposition or layer-by-layer progression is not a way of making the emotions stronger. It is too arbitrary. Things written in this way are more likely to make people feel uncomfortable. Personally, I suggest changing the narrative method of these events, for example, making it more compact, and then changing the order according to your own ideas, so that readers can resonate with you more, instead of being uncomfortable at times. There is also the issue of character relationships. There are some places before and after that need to be added to make the article more coherent. The hint of the hero's identity is too direct and could have been written in a more subtle way. The "heart is dead and the wind" appears in the previous article is too high, and I personally feel that it is dispensable in the article. It should either increase its weight or delete it directly. In the early stage of "What Is Love?", There was a teacher's wife, but there was no one after that. The foreign teacher in the middle of the class got sad once, for unknown reasons. The relationship between the foreign teacher and the heroine and his wife is useless and can be deleted. In short, I feel that the relationship between the characters was not well set up in the early stage, and it was too arbitrary. That's probably all I remember, I'll talk about it later when I rewatch it. As for the setting of the heroine, this is a matter of personal habits. She is a bit too Mary Sue, like vocals, and things that are not covered in the article about academic performance can be deleted. The heroine doesn't need to be omnipotent, just one skill is enough. Finally, regarding the deletion of accounts at the end of the article, I cannot understand it at all. Maybe not wanting to pass him by was a reason. But there are so many beautiful memories of him and her in this game, so many stories about them, that they can leave so easily? The author plays a lot of online games, and many of them may be discarded. But for a person who doesn't play online games, the first one has too much special meaning, and he will not make this decision easily. I personally feel that it is very ill-considered. But you have your own reasons, and I will not and cannot interfere. One final comment: You may not necessarily leave a review for what you like most, but once you leave a review, it will truly touch your heart. Looking forward to more works appearing

It's so boring to write. . . Four years of ashes-level silk passed by. . . It's such a waste of a good game that I can't write anything. . . It has nothing to do with fandom, I really don't know where the label fanfic came from!

I originally came here because of Zhu Xian Wen. After all, I have been playing it for more than 2 years. Unfortunately, the heroine is so amazing that I don't know what to say. . . If you want to play with me, please leave a message to find out. My classic Telecom Zone 4 Fire Dragon - 149 Immortal Ghost King, 148 Buddha Tianyin, 146 Immortal Tianyin, 146 Buddha Qingyun and Wu Ascension 5th Turn Number. . .

I also play Zhu Xian. . Quite pretty. . It's a pity that I can't upgrade it. Tragedy. . Keep messing around~

I have never been interested in people studying music in domestic universities. Our school has a music and dance academy. . . . Maybe it's because I look at people through colored glasses, um, I don't like adults' settings like this.

What I want to say is that this heroine is really white. It's my first time playing an online game and I'm not really white... Even if the feelings in the game are unreal, I won't just pick one.

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Words: Rat, is the game really fun? I'm just a computer idiot, I can't even register an account... (Hiding my face and drifting away~)