A man loses his memory by chance, and one horrifying vision after another begins to haunt him. Behind the story lies a world-shattering secret: the tale of the Can Cong Emperor, evidence of the lost Mayan city, the origins of the Japanese, incredible ruins, the truth behind Qin Shi Huang, and the secrets of the characters. A star of misfortune cannot be defied; one cursed to bring calamity to their family will lose their parents; a Heavenly Noble can offer salvation; cultivating oneself and doing good are the remedies. “Steal only what is needed, and put it to proper use; take it from the tombs and use it for the people.” These mysteries offer answers to questions archaeologists cannot explain. Sitting beneath the dim light, I glimpse little-known truths in a flash. Memories buried deep within fear are on the verge of breaking free. The Can Cong tomb, Mayan sacred bones, the ancient tomb at Hashihaka, the Dragon Soul's Labyrinth, and the Qin tomb in the Haunted Mountains. Each mystery solved draws us into another. Readers are caught between reality and an inexplicable terror... The real story begins now...
Very interesting~laugh But why did I find this article in martial arts?
You pay too much attention to writing, and you need to explain less.
I have to say that your writing style is really delicate. It describes the characters' actions and environment very well. The storyline can also attract the readers' hearts. I suggest you tone down the description of the environment and the characters' expressions and actions.