The locked chapters did not specify exactly which parts needed to be revised. After looking into it myself, I suspect it was a few minor instances of physical contact and some indoor descriptions. Revising them would be a real hassle, and I don't want to change the content for that reason alone. (That's how I honestly feel.) Besides, I don't know whether the revisions would even be approved.
The full story has been reposted on C Pei. If you'd like to read it, just search for the title or the same pen name.
If I have the energy, I may gradually post the other locked content there, too.
I won't delete the content here.
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This world had rotted long ago.
Matsuyama Okashi, a cold and aloof man who hated trouble and worked at a library near his apartment, led a perfectly ordinary life. One day, he met a strange, gloomy boy at the library.
“You look a lot like Tokuya. Will you be my friend?”
Hounded by the boy, Matsuyama was plunged into endless trouble. Their interactions, as he deliberately tried to keep his distance, began to twist and change before he knew it.
“If you want Matsuyama Yuki to stay safe, come to that park tonight.”
It hadn't even begun, yet it was already heading toward an ending like a plunge into the abyss.
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"Warning": To reiterate, this story is in the horror and dark fiction category! If you don't like this kind of work, or think it may cause you psychological or physical discomfort, please choose not to read it!
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I re-read it many times and found some details. Is it possible that Qianli's mother also joined the teacher's game? Did she buy the hatchet herself or was it given to her? If it is related to the teacher, it feels like the teacher knows how things will develop. After Yuya's death, there is no further story about Guishu, as well as many other characters in the article, so this story reads to me more like a branch of the main plot. So is the author's article related to this story? Love your work very much!
Oh my god, my god, I was surprised to see Matsuyama Snow turn like that in the end, but the thing that made me scream WOC the most was that Matsuyama Snow also went to look for Atsushi in the end... Oh my god
Uh-huh~~ I finally updated it and finished it (???ω???). I really like this story. When I saw this, I suddenly felt that both Atsushi and the teacher were not simple. Will the author write this series of stories again? I really want to know the story between the teacher and Atsushi.
Mobile phones are a good thing. I digress. I think children are really easily influenced by the outside world. Chisato's abnormality must have something to do with his parents. And that teacher and Ayano-sister? Anyway, it was just a series of people he met after the fire. His life was a tragedy, and then it was a continuation of the tragedy? It seems that he lives by the belief of searching for "Atsushi". It would be great if he could be redeemed before killing. Although I sympathize with Chisato, I hope he can be punished by the law in the end. By the way, the organization behind him is also mentioned. In addition, brotherhood is very healing, although it is a tragedy.
The writing style is really great. Every character is vividly created. I like it very much. I hope I can continue to work hard and wait for updates~
I like it very much, although the ending of Oka Shi is a bit unbelievable, but if I like someone, I will probably do the same, like a clown, looking for my own queen
I like it very much, although the ending of Oka Shi is a bit unbelievable, but if I like someone, I will probably do the same, like a clown, looking for my own queen
It's really great! I particularly like dark-type novels. I saw the serialization of "Artificial Fragrance" by Zhida Da on Youyaoqi. I thought it was very interesting. Later I found out that it was based on a novel, so I found it. I support it a lot. The writing is great and it has a very Japanese feel! I hope you can write more articles. I really like your articles!
It's a pity that Akiko's love was given to the wrong person.