The Slacker Talent Hub

The character design is very perfect, and the case is also very interesting. The same sentence can be appropriately dispersed! If there is any offense, please delete the comment immediately, thank you!

The "in full view of the public" in this paragraph can be changed to "being abducted in full view of the public", so that it reads more smoothly. Of course there is no malice. If it is offensive, I will delete the comment immediately! Thanks!! Very well written!!!

When writing, you can choose a place in the first few chapters to introduce the background of the story, as well as psychic powers, things in the mountains and seas, and this place. You can also write it in the article, and choose a place that does not appear obtrusive, so that you can also write the font! The writing is really good, don't give up~~(^з^)-☆

Some places in this chapter can also be scattered. For example: Dan Piaopiao, squinting, and speaking slowly, this sentence can be divided into three paragraphs. The sentence above is divided into a small paragraph, this one is divided into a small paragraph, and then the bottom is divided into a small paragraph. However, the writing in big letters is also very good, very imaginative, and uses the Classic of Mountains and Seas as the background. In the process of writing, I can emphasize the Classic of Mountains and Seas many times! The writing is really great~(^з^)-☆I hope you won't be discouraged!!!! It's really great~ヽ(爱??'爱)ノ

It's well written (??ω??)?? But this chapter is a little too dense. You can give it a try and spread out the dialogue to make it less dense and increase the number of pages. If it offends, delete the comment immediately. Thanks!

It's a water font. I said it wrong just now, sorry. (/ω\)