The Abyss at Daybreak

Hello author, I have read your work and I have some suggestions for you. First of all, it is best not to have too many characters in the first chapter, which will make the reader feel very confused. You can gradually unfold their stories through the following plots, and then write in their names. You can directly call some unimportant characters by their characteristics, such as black clothes, noble boy, etc. I hope it helps you. I really like the title of your book. Come on.