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One day, Cheng Huan, a successful missionary who retired from the mission, was preparing to retire. The main system arranged for Cheng Huan to draw a character card from the Three Thousand Worlds.
Draw cards three times.
1. The cross-border king [Please understand the task yourself].
2. Poverty [Please understand for yourself].
3. There are no taboos between men and women [please understand by yourself].
When he saw the second person setting up a card, Cheng Huan, a money-greedy man, was heartbroken.
I would like to ask, is a poverty-stricken retirement life okay?
After the practical operation, Cheng Huan finally understood the function of the character card and planned to change to a retirement world to continue the experience. However, she was temporarily told that she could exit the world after the person who needed the destiny completed the ultimate goal of this world.
So, Cheng Huan set his expectant eyes on the heroine, and said seductively with a cheat: "Hey, sister, do you want to reach the sky in one step and become an immortal?"
"Do you want to have unparalleled martial arts skills and be invincible?"
"Want to make rapid progress and get admitted to Tsinghua University?"
"Want to strengthen your body and become immortal?"
……
Cheng Huan was full of confidence and said firmly: "Fuck with me, and I will take you to the top of your life."
Hostess: "Hey, are you a police officer? Someone is doing a pyramid scheme here."
Cheng Huan: "..."
[World 1: Penglai Immortal vs. Rising Star.
The heroine before meeting Cheng Huan: Study hard and practice hard
The heroine after meeting Cheng Huan: Touch
[World 2: The best sword in the world vs. The treasure guardian]
The heroine before meeting Cheng Huan: dedicated to her duties
The heroine after meeting Cheng Huan: Tie Tie
[World 3: Interstellar Prison Tyrant vs. Cold Newcomer]
The heroine before meeting Cheng Huan: Loving and dedicated to her job
The heroine after meeting Cheng Huan: Rubbing
[World Four: Arrogant Academic God vs. Domineering School "Evil"]
The heroine before meeting Cheng Huan: eating, drinking and having fun.
The heroine after meeting Cheng Huan: kiss.
I haven't thought about the future world yet... Whether or not it will happen depends on the author's brain.
The final ending is definitely he's, and the process is also beautiful, that is... The author has sudden brain twitches from time to time, but he is definitely not abusive, and he can fall into the trap.
Cheng Huan, the "straight girl with strong steel" VS Zuo Le, who is "pretty and soft".
Lightning protection:
1. There are a bunch of private views, please don't mind entering by mistake!
2. Refreshing and relaxing novice writing, written by primary school students, all for the sake of having fun!
3. Cheng Huan is the taskmaster. This book is about her retirement life and finding a wife by the way.
4. If you like it, you can collect it first. We look forward to Cheng Huan's retirement life together!
5. The title of each volume is taken from "Meeting Friends" by Du Mu.
Open this next book:
++++Pre-released article "Sister, great!" , Interested friends can collect it.
When Mo Tingzhi met Shengye for the first time, she was mistaken for Pengci by her driver, and he wanted to call the police when he caught her.
The child was dirty and looked suspicious, which showed that her eyes were too clean.
Mo Tingzhi thought that this little girl had to deal with porcelain as a last resort.
Seeing that there was a scratch on her palm, Mo Tingzhi took out a cartoon band-aid and a few hundred dollars from his pocket and handed it over.
She advised in a gentle voice: "Children, don't touch the porcelain carelessly."
Shengye: "..."
Mo Tingzhi originally thought that this was just a small fluctuation in her ordinary and boring life, and it would not cause any waves.
But I didn't expect that the two would be so interested when they met again.
Mo Tingzhi looked at the child who was holding back her drink, his eyes shining under the lights of the bar.
She chuckled and said, "Children, don't hold back the wine at will."
Shengye: "..."
Later, Mo Tingzhi believed that children have a strong desire to win.
She put her hand on Shengye's shoulder and said tremblingly: "Child, don't do whatever you want..."
Sheng Ye raised her eyebrows: "You still call me kid?"
As a businessman, in order to protect yourself, you must be decisive and flexible.
Mo Tingzhi said pitifully: "Aye, I was wrong."
Reading guide:
1. Poor writing style and soft words;
2. Attack at the end of the year, huh...
Purpose: People must be happy.
Reader comments
Hello, author
I came across your article by chance, and I think the atmosphere you wrote is really good. I like the feeling. The description of the environment is also my favorite type. I can see that the writing style is very good.
I am actually a writer myself. I have been writing fan fiction or original works on other platforms for a year or two, so the following are just some suggestions. Just listen to them.
After reading the first three chapters, there were two places where I was a little stuck. One is the connection between characters: I know the identities of Yeruo and Xianrong, but I don't understand how they met and what interactions they had before. It seems that these are not written, and it jumps directly to them having some interaction, and there are several pieces missing in the middle. I know you may add it later, but even if you briefly explain it in one or two sentences, the readers will not be so confused (if the first picture is when they first met, treat the previous words as I did not say). The other is the worldview: what are the rules of this church, why Arlene can abuse children at will, and the priest's position in this system. These background information are not explained. They may be mentioned later, but without these sentences, readers will not know how to view these conflicts.
The scene of the baptismal font being filled with water and suffocating, coupled with the line "The Lord will protect you from going to hell", put together made me think of "The Shocking". I don't know if you have read it, but if you have, you can adjust it a bit to avoid being mentioned by other readers in the future; if you haven't, just think of it as a kind reminder.
Writing is inherently a matter of slow response. You may finish the entire book before you get a single reader, or you may write for many years before you have enough comments. I felt a little sad when I read the sentence in Chapter 3: "If no one reads it, I won't write it anymore." It's not that your writing is not good, it's just that when you say that sentence, it seems that you already thought that you would be given up in advance.
You are well-founded and have a rare sense of atmosphere. I hope you can adjust your mentality and finish this story well. I'm not saying this to find fault, I just think you have potential and want you to move forward more steadily.
If you continue to update, I will probably continue to follow up with updates, come on!
This... Is a bit stupid. When I first arrived in the small world, I gave others what they asked for, so...
What does it mean? Don't write sourness, I want pure love [Cracked]
Come on. It's much better than the many submissions I've seen. But there is still work to be done. The passion it brings me is still not enough.
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Hello, author I came across your article by chance, and I think the atmosphere you wrote is really good. I like the feeling. The description of the environment is also my favorite type. I can see that the writing style is very good. I am actually a writer myself. I have been writing fan fiction or original works on other platforms for a year or two, so the following are just some suggestions. Just listen to them. After reading the first three chapters, there were two places where I was a little stuck. One is the connection between characters: I know the identities of Yeruo and Xianrong, but I don't understand how they met and what interactions they had before. It seems that these are not written, and it jumps directly to them having some interaction, and there are several pieces missing in the middle. I know you may add it later, but even if you briefly explain it in one or two sentences, the readers will not be so confused (if the first picture is when they first met, treat the previous words as I did not say). The other is the worldview: what are the rules of this church, why Arlene can abuse children at will, and the priest's position in this system. These background information are not explained. They may be mentioned later, but without these sentences, readers will not know how to view these conflicts. The scene of the baptismal font being filled with water and suffocating, coupled with the line "The Lord will protect you from going to hell", put together made me think of "The Shocking". I don't know if you have read it, but if you have, you can adjust it a bit to avoid being mentioned by other readers in the future; if you haven't, just think of it as a kind reminder. Writing is inherently a matter of slow response. You may finish the entire book before you get a single reader, or you may write for many years before you have enough comments. I felt a little sad when I read the sentence in Chapter 3: "If no one reads it, I won't write it anymore." It's not that your writing is not good, it's just that when you say that sentence, it seems that you already thought that you would be given up in advance. You are well-founded and have a rare sense of atmosphere. I hope you can adjust your mentality and finish this story well. I'm not saying this to find fault, I just think you have potential and want you to move forward more steadily. If you continue to update, I will probably continue to follow up with updates, come on!
This... Is a bit stupid. When I first arrived in the small world, I gave others what they asked for, so...
What does it mean? Don't write sourness, I want pure love [Cracked]
Come on. It's much better than the many submissions I've seen. But there is still work to be done. The passion it brings me is still not enough.