
After Cheating All the Way, I Got the Heroine (Quickly Wear It)
一路开挂,女主到手(快穿)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 337k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Stats
11.1kFavorites
8.8Score
82Chapters
7.7kNutrition
19.3kClicks / chapter
2.3kComments
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In booklists 8
Completion of Update 1
Read^o^
27Followers100Books1yUpdated
Main Attack
They are all fully booked, I like sweet articles, I have finished thinking, I like temptations
13Followers58Books1moUpdated
Gl Quick Wear
I ordered all gl fast wear
9Followers64Books
Two Heroines Quick Travel Story
Two heroines quick travel story
2Followers10Books
Main Attack, Wear, and Quick Wear
Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking
1Followers5Books
Wear Quickly
Fast travel
1Followers24Books
Kuaiwenwen (Lily, Sweet Article,)
Various fast-travel stories (it's been so long that I don't remember the plot, so I gave them all four stars. Friends who are interested can click on them to check out the ones they are interested in.)
1Followers48Books
Full Booking
None
1Followers86Books6moUpdated
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Hello, author I came across your article by chance, and I think the atmosphere you wrote is really good. I like the feeling. The description of the environment is also my favorite type. I can see that the writing style is very good. I am actually a writer myself. I have been writing fan fiction or original works on other platforms for a year or two, so the following are just some suggestions. Just listen to them. After reading the first three chapters, there were two places where I was a little stuck. One is the connection between characters: I know the identities of Yeruo and Xianrong, but I don't understand how they met and what interactions they had before. It seems that these are not written, and it jumps directly to them having some interaction, and there are several pieces missing in the middle. I know you may add it later, but even if you briefly explain it in one or two sentences, the readers will not be so confused (if the first picture is when they first met, treat the previous words as I did not say). The other is the worldview: what are the rules of this church, why Arlene can abuse children at will, and the priest's position in this system. These background information are not explained. They may be mentioned later, but without these sentences, readers will not know how to view these conflicts. The scene of the baptismal font being filled with water and suffocating, coupled with the line "The Lord will protect you from going to hell", put together made me think of "The Shocking". I don't know if you have read it, but if you have, you can adjust it a bit to avoid being mentioned by other readers in the future; if you haven't, just think of it as a kind reminder. Writing is inherently a matter of slow response. You may finish the entire book before you get a single reader, or you may write for many years before you have enough comments. I felt a little sad when I read the sentence in Chapter 3: "If no one reads it, I won't write it anymore." It's not that your writing is not good, it's just that when you say that sentence, it seems that you already thought that you would be given up in advance. You are well-founded and have a rare sense of atmosphere. I hope you can adjust your mentality and finish this story well. I'm not saying this to find fault, I just think you have potential and want you to move forward more steadily. If you continue to update, I will probably continue to follow up with updates, come on!
This... Is a bit stupid. When I first arrived in the small world, I gave others what they asked for, so...
What does it mean? Don't write sourness, I want pure love [Cracked]
Come on. It's much better than the many submissions I've seen. But there is still work to be done. The passion it brings me is still not enough.