The story of the wolf boy, it's a wonderful article... Huahua for you... \(^O^)/~
I cry----
Not because of the article
I commented before, and I kept writing and writing. I finally finished the comment, but I couldn't find it when I looked back. 5555555
Say it again
The idea and plot of the article are good, and the language description is OK, but it has made a few common-sense mistakes, and there are also contradictions in the sentences. Don't over-describe in pursuit of the gorgeousness of the sentences, it is easy to make mistakes. For example, the sun shines warmly, and the haze above the mountains and fields is instantly forced back by the light breaking through the clouds. There is a contradiction between warmth and twinkling!
That's roughly it. What I just wrote was so long that it failed to be published.
Still depressed
This plot is good, I want to try to write it in my own way according to this plot, what do you think?" But I'm very lazy, and it may take me a long, long time to write it down. I'll be happy to give you some advice when the time comes.
I have something to say, haha. In fact, I am of average skill and dare to preach to you here, haha, with all due respect.
My teacher told me that you should have your own style when writing essays. This sentence is also given to you.
The internet speed is not good today, so go to sleep and watch something else tomorrow.
I wrote so many reviews before that I can't find them??
Embarrassing, Aqi, you lied to me... You actually said that what you wrote is unacceptable to my eyes... Such a delicate writing style, and full of sarcasm... I like it, I'll go to other articles of yours
Oh haha~~Mo Mo's writing is very thoughtful
The story of the wolf boy, it's a wonderful article... Huahua for you... \(^O^)/~
I cry---- Not because of the article I commented before, and I kept writing and writing. I finally finished the comment, but I couldn't find it when I looked back. 5555555 Say it again The idea and plot of the article are good, and the language description is OK, but it has made a few common-sense mistakes, and there are also contradictions in the sentences. Don't over-describe in pursuit of the gorgeousness of the sentences, it is easy to make mistakes. For example, the sun shines warmly, and the haze above the mountains and fields is instantly forced back by the light breaking through the clouds. There is a contradiction between warmth and twinkling! That's roughly it. What I just wrote was so long that it failed to be published. Still depressed This plot is good, I want to try to write it in my own way according to this plot, what do you think?" But I'm very lazy, and it may take me a long, long time to write it down. I'll be happy to give you some advice when the time comes. I have something to say, haha. In fact, I am of average skill and dare to preach to you here, haha, with all due respect. My teacher told me that you should have your own style when writing essays. This sentence is also given to you. The internet speed is not good today, so go to sleep and watch something else tomorrow.
I wrote so many reviews before that I can't find them??
Embarrassing, Aqi, you lied to me... You actually said that what you wrote is unacceptable to my eyes... Such a delicate writing style, and full of sarcasm... I like it, I'll go to other articles of yours