[Blurb]
Yun Qi, the Dragon Clan's second prince, is lazy by nature and spends every day idling away. Though exceptionally gifted, he can't be bothered to cultivate. For eight hundred years, he's gone to great lengths to maintain his reputation as a good-for-nothing with "acquired deformities":
So ordinary people would have a chance to catch up with him, he cultivates as little as possible. He doesn't care that he loses the annual immortal arts competition to his older brother, and even when the young master of the Phoenix Clan beats him up, he sticks to trash talk and never hits back.
As long as they don't hit him in the face, he's fine with anything.
He's been betrothed since childhood to Feng Lin, the little princess of the Phoenix Clan. Apparently, the two of them are destined to be together.
To bring them together, all the various factions of the immortal realm joined forces to concoct a touching love story for them in the mortal world.
Yun Qi scoffed at the idea. "What age are we living in? Arranged marriages? As long as it isn't me, she can marry whoever she wants!"
He personally took a knife to his mortal incarnation's lifespan, causing him to die young and fall into an illusion...
But later, he clung to Feng Lin day and night, refusing to let go. Even when she turned into an egg, he stayed by her side.
[Coming-of-age story. The male lead reaches max combat strength later on. One-on-one romance, no wavering, happy ending, both leads' first love.]
[Rolling around and begging you to add it to your collection~]
Coming soon to my author page: After I Wrote the Evil God as Beautiful, Strong, and Tragic. Here's the blurb:
Zhi Yuan, an immortal official in the Hall of Fate, had a strange and eventful dream. After waking, she wrote down the bizarre story out of professional obligation.
Who could have guessed that after she turned it into a storybook, it would unexpectedly become a hit?
And the story's protagonist, the evil god Jiu Yao, rose to become a top-tier star in the immortal realm.
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At first, Zhi Yuan thought she was just writing a storybook. To make the story more gripping, she had no qualms about making the evil god a beautiful, strong, and tragic tyrant.
Now that the Three Realms were peaceful, she didn't think any evil gods actually existed. But as she kept writing, she realized something was wrong.
Someone had discovered the entrance to the isolated Demon Realm, and immortals who went exploring claimed to have seen the so-called evil god there.
This evil god's background, appearance, and personality were all exactly as Zhi Yuan had described in her book.
Countless fairy maidens rushed to the Demon Realm to follow their new idol, completely obsessed.
Even the Lingxiao Palace was abuzz with talk of this previously unknown evil god...
Zhi Yuan was baffled. Could someone like that really exist?!
Though she couldn't understand it, that didn't stop her from posting more chapters and making money.
Just as she was busy writing the grand finale, in which the evil god from her story was about to raze the Three Realms, her pen name was exposed!!!
The Heavenly Emperor feared the evil god might become real and plunge the Three Realms into turmoil. He ordered her to go to the Demon Realm and investigate whether the evil god was real. If she refused, he'd ban her book...
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After traveling a thousand miles to the Demon Realm, Zhi Yuan discovered that the so-called evil god, apart from being beautiful, had nothing at all to do with being beautiful, strong, and tragic!
Theme: Love never loses its wings.
I've finished reading it. Overall, it's pretty good. The author has a unique setting, a novel world view, the characters are relatively distinct and not flat, the writing is smooth, the writing style is acceptable, and the plot direction has its own ingenuity. The above is enough to instantly kill 90% of the works on the home page, but there are still some shortcomings. First of all, the writing style is still a bit shallow, but I believe the author will definitely improve it a lot in the next book. Secondly, the plot description is not enough, and many places are not focused on the description. Most of the simple summaries are more concise, but if there is not enough foreshadowing, it will lead to a very important point that the emotional contrast will not be in place. There are several small climaxes in the article because they are not highlighted well enough that the reading cannot achieve the sadness and pain that the author wants to show. There is also the problem of transitions. Inadequate description will also lead to abrupt and inconsistent plot transitions. For example, one second the heroine is still mourning Ji Bai's death, and the next second she is discussing how to pull out the magic weapon with the male protagonist. Finally, there is the emotional transformation between the protagonist and the supporting characters. The emotional scene between the male and female protagonists is generally quite smooth. There is sweetness and sourness, but I think it would be better to add more psychological description details and increase the ambiguous atmosphere of the pulling. 🤩 In addition, I know that my wife wants to write the three-dimensional and multi-faceted supporting characters, but there is not enough preparation. The two extra chapters in the middle were written concisely and profoundly, and I cried for them sincerely. Finally, I'm looking forward to the author's next article. The debut novel is already great. 💪 I believe the next one will be even more exciting!
"Feng Wuya, the leader of the Feng clan, has an expressionless face..." This is a big bug for the author~
First of all, congratulations to my wife for finishing the whole story. The overall writing is good, but the first chapter is difficult to read, and the characters and relationships that appear are also more complicated. I think the first chapter can mention a little more mortal memories, and briefly introduce the background story of the characters' relationships. Then it is the foreshadowing in the early stage, and there are not enough details that can be explored. The more hidden threads and details in the early stage, the more enjoyable it will be in the later reading. The world view, initial character positioning, and character relationships can be made fuller and more detailed. Most of the storyline is relatively straightforward and narrated by one person. It would be better if there were more twists and turns. The emotional transition is the same as mentioned in the previous long review. The heroine is sad one second and then draws the magic weapon the next, which is very abrupt. More writing should be spent on scene transitions in sub-chapters and the continuation of sub-chapters. The most annoying thing about the whole story is that the male protagonist prefers to be intimate in public, and there are really people watching. And in the end, is it really necessary to write so cruelly about what happened after the wedding? The plot after the wedding is not only sloppy but also a bit ridiculous, and even the plot of the battle is not rigorous enough. Apart from the above, overall it's pretty good, let's spread flowers 💪
The previous long review was really well written. I feel the same way. I cried while watching the extra episode before. I feel like the plot of this article is very good
So why did my brother leave hh
Have a good, good, be. It hurts so much
Come on, madam (??ω??)??