May 19, the riverbank lined with green willows.
Nanning walked slowly in the warm breeze, on her way to Qixi Temple to pray for blessings.
First, she wished for peace and happiness for her country. Second, she wished for the safety of old friends. Third, she wished that, though a thousand miles apart, they could all share the same moon.
The wild days of youth were long gone, and those people had all vanished in the blink of an eye.
The wavering candlelight of Qixi Temple, enclosed in pale yellow lantern shades, seemed as if it might drift away on the wind, yet also as if it might shine for a thousand years.
And is a person's legend not the same?
Some readers call this a major character-swap spoiler. Volume One is lighthearted, Volume Two is more heartbreaking, and Volume Three involves war.
The second installment in the Five Kingdoms and Three Islands series: North Star
New story: Into the Fire, written for all the little crazies.
Theme:
Looking at the entire text as a whole, the author's writing power is extraordinary, with a kind of "romantic and dexterous" tranquility and elegance. However, when the author created a "free and easy" writing style, he lacked something. 1. The first person and the third person are replaced too frequently. The third person is better. 2. Describe the lack of time In the process of describing the scene, the lack of description of the moment will give people a sense of confusion. 3. Writing style Judging from the author's writing style, it tends to be free and easy, but he uses "woman" to refer to "women" in the writing. Legendary novels (historically) often use slang to express. The author wants to create a legend, and his style of expression is quite "painting a tiger can't be like a dog". My personal thought is this. Instead of focusing on imitating writing style, it is better to create a person's legend - a person's deeds are a legend. The author can try to change this style of writing to make it contain a "free and easy atmosphere", which will bring about a kind of "destined romance". 4. Characters In the characterization of the characters, the author focuses on the description of the characters' appearance, language, expressions and movements, but ignores a very important point - it is always his actions that make a person successful. For the famous King Lanling in history, apart from his beauty, his achievements are very important; apart from their beauty, their talents and learning must not be ignored, such as Pan An and Song Yu; the fame of the four beauties is closely related to their experiences. Even Bao Si was captivated by his "beautiful smile". Many people say that their names and pen names are not good. In fact, when their actual achievements are relatively great, they will be given the "big name". That ordinary name will also be engraved in history and will be famous throughout the ages. Therefore, the "number of romantic figures" throughout the ages have left a profound mark in history. It is recommended that the author should not stick to the superficial form when describing the characters, but describe them from their deeds and actions. I believe that such characters are flesh and blood and vivid on the page.
Touch your chin... This ending... This feeling can be recalled later, but it was already at a loss at that time
Why! Why! Why! Why! Why!
I hold on until now just to see Nanning and Young Master finally stay together through hardships and joys, and the result is this ending!!!
There has always been a question, that is, why did the author switch this article between first and third person? It shouldn't just be a special hobby. If it is, the above question will be automatically blocked. I'm so embarrassed~
The ending... = = Is it the version of myself that I can't go back to?
Well. . . End? ... This ending is very tearful...
Sprinkle flowers, the ending, although you can't go back, there is always something left behind.
Alas, such an inexplicable ending.
Faint! What kind of ending is this? It's true that Jun Yu loves Nanning, but for the sake of the imperial hegemony, he still resolutely hurts Nanning (even knowing how important Lin is in her heart, he still designs to kill him). When he did this, he should have the consciousness of losing Nanning in his heart. Jun Yu doesn't deserve forgiveness! Gong Shuyin is so pitiful! He woke up three years later and was abandoned by Nanning. I think he would rather continue to sleep!