
Mistaken Love
错爱(迹越)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 7k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
5Chapters
347Favorites
7.7Score
16.3kClicks per chapter
41Comments
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Reader comments 32
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It's great, but it's a lot censored.
Damn, have you abandoned the article? It looks so good. Please write it down.
Damn, can you repost it to Baidu Jiyueba and Bingdiyueba? We reserve all rights to withdraw the article and indicate the author and source. We hope you agree. This article is reproduced from Jinjiang Literature City, original address: □//www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=971607
I like it very much. I don't think Ryoma is wrong. At that time, Fuji was already dating Ryoma, and he and Tezuka maintained that "getting along with each other would always be between ambiguity and friendship." Who could stand this?
Can't understand, confused. .
Beat him up~~Torture him to death~~
The sweaty ending is very loving, but! But my dear, what you wrote like this makes me very confused. I have to express my love.
The proud young man from Qingyue, with upward-turned cat eyes hidden under dark green hair, always had an unruly curve at the corner of his mouth. No one can infringe on the self-esteem of such a cat-like boy. If anyone touches his scales, he will definitely be cut off. Fuji did not cherish this hard-won treasure, but Atobe seized this opportunity with decisive methods and a sharp attitude, leaving no escape route for the young man. He cared for him tenderly and interacted with him attentively. He became the so-called Emperor of Ice. The author's story goes by a little too quickly. Although it leaves a lot of room for imagination, it is still not full enough. The emotion is a little thin, and the unruly and sharp lines of the Echizen boy are not expressed. But overall, it is still a refreshing work that makes people feel a little tired after reading thousands of articles.
I used to think that I couldn't read short articles, but I think I was wrong. When I first started reading your "Echizen Ryoma (The Prince of Tennis fan trilogy - Hyokui Chapter)", I accidentally clicked on the wrong article when I read the introduction of your article. I opened the webpage and read it with the intention of killing time. I read this short novel with only five chapters. I think at that moment, I really started to feel sorry for Echizen Ryoma and the Prince of Tennis. I have read a lot of novels written by Geng Mei, the Internet king, and there are many excellent writers in them. However, the one that is so short, but touches my heart, Qier Danye is the first one. I have read Time Travel, Soul Travel, and Wearing. There are some cruelties in them, but none of your writing makes people feel sad. It's not the kind of writing that suddenly breaks your heart, but the kind that corrodes your heart bit by bit, and makes you feel like a pair of big hands are pulling hard on your heart, making it impossible to breathe. I always feel that in this article, I see my own shadow. At that time, I was also hurt so much that I couldn't breathe or open my eyes because of the betrayal. I have been thinking about what that young man, as proud as a dragon and a horse, with a clean soul, was thinking after the person he loved, respected and trusted the most betrayed him at the same time. The man who should have been wanton in the sun, but what was the reason that made his heart so tired that he couldn't even start his favorite mantra? When betrayed, the so-called faith and trust collapsed, how did he face that cold home? I am reminded of the famous and heart-wrenching "Double Station". But what makes me feel even more distressed is that when Tezuka Kunimitsu handed over the important task of Seigaku to the man named Echizen Ryoma, what was he thinking when his past persistence was all a mistake? The author's description of the betrayal is not profound, but it still makes people feel so distressed. I've read a lot of novels, and in them, no matter how cruel they are, they will eventually come together to resolve their differences or get back together. Or have a sad ending, etc. However, when I stood in the sun and worked hard for my ideals, I really felt how clean and dazzling those people's souls were. I always feel that nothing can be changed. However, Jibu, Renzu... A young man who is forced by society to grow up and mature. Is it really possible to remain unchanged in this dirty society? Perhaps, it is because we have placed too many beautiful wishes in the virtual world, and we use this to express ourselves and vent ourselves. Tezuka Kunimitsu, Fuji Shusuke, are they really what we imagined? Wouldn't they betray others? Wow, how ridiculous. However, I think that the boy named Echizen Ryoma should have been a proud and wanton existence. He will come out, I firmly believe. The ending is still unfinished.
Nana, hello, I am the owner of Jiyue Bar. . . Although this article is a bit short to be honest... But I personally think it is very good~~ I like this article very much~ I hope it can be reprinted in Jiyue Bar for everyone to share~ The address and author will be indicated, and I hope you can approve it! !