Back then, he went alone to the enemy kingdom as a hostage. He was still a child.
Later, the once-celebrated child prodigy became a fiend who brought ruin to the country and misery to its people.
The old storyteller’s expression suddenly changed. Then he let out a long sigh and said, “The tale I’m telling today is about the Chu prince, Lanling.”
“Back then, that fiend nearly bewitched our king and brought our country to ruin.
“Thankfully, Heaven protected us, and our king proved wise. That is how we came to enjoy the prosperity we have today. If you want to know the whole story, just listen as this old man tells it.”
Before he could finish, a man in yellow at the table slapped it and shouted furiously, “This tea is awful!”
Looking closely, the man was delicately pretty. What young master’s son was he, and where had he come from?
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++I am the fence++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Whether they were people of Chu or of Great Wu, everyone knew of one man: the Chu prince, Lanling.
He lived on in people’s stories. Some said he was a good man, others said he was a bad man.
But there were still a few people who knew the truth: Lanling had never been a good man, nor a bad one. He was simply a man who loved deeply.
+++++++++++++++++++++I am the dividing line, called the fence++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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After reading this book, to be honest, it's not that I don't like this book, but I just don't understand why the current protagonist can abuse himself to such an extent. Is there really only love, or warmth, left in this world? Why does the author like to write this kind of sadomasochism? I really don't understand, it has to be injured by others to be completely broken and broken, then that can be called great? ? ?
I've been watching BL a lot these days, and I really don't understand why. I feel so lonely, so panicked, and so scared. . . . . . Many protagonists were tortured to death. In the end, the person who tortured him gave him some sweetness, and he immediately softened his heart. I don't understand it. The so-called sadomasochism is like this. It can only mean that he is a masochist. I can understand it!
After reading most of it, I decided to write my comments on the essay first - -
The level of cruelty is not enough (my heart is as solid as stone...). Lanling's character is somewhat unclear to me. He is contradictory, caring about everything and not caring about anything. This can only be seen from the positive description. The side description did not allow me to discover the outstanding points of his character. And sometimes, I personally think that Lan Ling has too many psychological activities and cannot let readers figure out what other people are thinking 0 0
However, this article is still pretty good-looking, but not sad enough (grit your teeth...).
(*^__^*) , Come on, author~
Except for the fact that the name Lanling is a bit popular, it's pretty good and the ending is cute. In addition, after the annotation is completed, you can change it back to the serialization...
Comments on "The Lanling Tomb of Lord Chu"
I came here from BS, which is LZ: I have nothing to do.
First of all, I'm sorry, your article is not my kind.
However, the writing is good. It directly points out the central line of the article. The writing is smooth. Although the ending is a bit rushed, it leaves people with a sense of suspense. As for the ancient sayings that fictionalize history, I still prefer your writing style. It is distant, indifferent and distant, mixed with the vicissitudes and helplessness of that era. I don't know what mood you had in writing this article, but you made the same mistake as me.
Since it is one novel, there is no need to write it separately. If it is two different stories, the author can divide them into two volumes, so as to accumulate popularity and avoid losing readers. I once divided a novel into three parts for this reason. As a result, everyone only knows one part but not the second and third part. Because it is a new copywriting, the text seems a bit incomprehensible to readers who have not read the previous ones. So I hope that the author will think carefully and write a better Brunei. I will leave here.
Throw flowers... Float away...
After reading it... I felt a little bored... But... It was very relaxing = =
The article is very well written. I read it from beginning to end, and the ending is also very exciting (I will explain it later). Maybe I can't write a long and literary review, but I still want to express my opinion.
First of all, this article is cute and unique, and the character of the protagonist is also very unique, so it gives people a very distinct feeling and makes people happily continue reading.
As for the development of the story, it is quite good, with many outstanding points. However, I would like to give you some advice. I hope that when you write in the future, you can remove some unnecessary descriptions of situations and speed up the rhythm of the article, because the plot is a bit slow at the beginning. If you cut out some, it may be more concise and fascinating.
In fact, what I appreciate most about Da Da is that Da Da did not fall into the cliché in terms of his grasp of human nature. Although Zi Luo was reluctant to give up, he still executed Lan Ling. Although it seems sad, this is what makes this article different. The beauty on the river, we can't say which one is more important. Everyone has a personal opinion. Some people love beauty without the country, but some people can turn their anger into beauty. Ziluo... I can't say he is wrong, and I can't say he is right... Since the author can make readers think like this, it means that this article has been successful. At least in terms of the entanglement and complexity of human nature, the author expressed what he wanted to express.
At the beginning, I was a little depressed because the male protagonist of this article should be Zi Luo, but the plot changed midway through the ending = = Then I found out that the author has another part, and I was relieved again. This is the story of Zi Luo and Lan Ling. Although it is a tragedy, it has ended, and the story of Lan Ling and Liu Si has just begun...
What I love most is actually the ending arranged by the author. Zi Luo finally kills Lan Ling. He struggles and struggles, but still chooses to kill him in the end. Zi Luo doesn't understand his feelings for Lan Ling. In fact, there are not so many things in this world that are absolute. Clear, but most of them are mixed with various emotions and blurred. Lanling is gone. Although he is injured, someone still chooses to hold his hand, but Ziluo may never forget such a person for the rest of his life... I like this kind of cruelty = =
With love alone, it is impossible to stay together forever. As long as we are here, there are too many things to consider. After all, it is just a beautiful fairy tale.
Compared to such illusions, I appreciate the sad but sober reality more.
After reading it, I felt quite cold.
Everyone has their own responsibilities, difficulties, and pursuits
In the end, it was accomplished at the expense of others, with Lanling bearing the brunt.
However, after the sacrifice, I thought about it and regretted it again.
As long as Liu Si takes him away, Lan Ling may as well go.
Is there any torture... O(╯□╰)o
Maybe it's because I have a strong taste?
In short... What is the comparison...
But thank you for your post, and a bunch of flowers...
Alas...
Collected. But I'm a little scared after seeing the depth of the sadomasochistic love affair. Let's watch it again if you're in the mood = =
Personally, I think the writing is a bit cruel, haha~... I don't really appreciate the character of the protagonist, but I think it's his character that leads to his tragedy.
What a beautiful lady, what a Chu Jun Lanling.
For Ziluo, all beauties are important and cherished by him.
But since ancient times, which king has not been ruthless?
Become a king in one day and lose your limbs.
The beauty of the country...
Which one is important?
Which one is important?
Who knows?
Ziluo struggled and hesitated.
In the end, he played a chess game in the Jiangshan position.
The so-called beauty of country is indeed more important than country.
What was gained was a prosperous age, but what was lost was the Lan Ling who once had a bright smile.
Ziluo, do you know that there is one person whom you will bear for the rest of your life?
Ziluo, do you know that there is one person you have to reluctantly part with?
Ziluo, do you know that there is one person that you will lose forever.
——What is lost and gone with the wind, you can never get it back. Therefore, the Lanling who smiled brightly back then, the Lanling who played in the water with you back then, the Lanling who smiled and played with you back then... Have been missed by you forever.
Have you ever regretted it?
You said, no.
Do you know Lanling?
You said, understand, he is a child.
Yes, they are just children.
It's just... That era has passed, and children will eventually become teenagers and young adults. There is always a responsibility on your shoulders.
Children always have to grow too.
People...
There is always something to lose and give up in order to grow.
Especially, it was so beautiful to see myself cut off that hope myself.
Have you ever regretted it?
You still say that, no.
Is it uncomfortable or hungry, hot or dependent.
Is it defective or understanding, lazy or hard-working.
Is it an expectation or a casual mention?
To be angry or to make a gesture, to be on the right track or to be in vain.
Are you frustrated or don't want to pay attention at all? Are you overthinking or just that.
Is it love or asking for it, dare not name it or it is nothing to mention.
Is it because I really don't understand or is it a preface, or is it because I don't want to think about it or I just can't remember it.
It doesn't matter whether it is too deep to bear or shallow, whether it is vanity or self-respect.
Is it naive or understands human feelings, is it heartfelt or is it smiling.
Is it unworthy or unwilling?
Do you have to be able to withstand lies, tolerate perfunctory treatment, endure deception, forget promises, and let go of everything before you can grow?
——It would be great if we could not grow up.
Ziluo accepted the country, the throne, the worship of everyone, the three thousand beauties in the harem, and all the beauty in the world...
——Is it really all the beauty in this world?
What about the child who loved his brother deeply but was bruised and bruised - Lan Ling?
——It would be great if we could not grow up.
Isn't this what the world is like?
Confident, frustrated, disappointed, decadent, numb, and desperate.
This is how the world is...
Let yourself grow up slowly, endure torture, and finally end up licking your wounds alone at night.
Then, watch you cut off everything around you, cut off everything around you yourself.
Doesn't this... Such a person's life pass like this?
Lanling, Ziluo always failed him too much.
Nowhere to make amends.
Maybe...
Lanling just wanted to feel the happy feeling of loving and being loved by others.
It's a pity——
Fortune plays tricks on people...
Fireworks get cold easily and the scenery becomes cold. Things are different and people are different, so let everything go.
A kind of despair with nowhere to complain, wandering around and tasting alone in the long cool night.
Who can predict the fate of running away?
Crazy, obviously all because of love.
Because I care too much, I am afraid of losing, so I do stupid things and say stupid things, and lose my reason.
The world is too vast, and his laughter and tears are not just for him.
This is a bloody story that is not even interesting to mention.
Where does love come from? It is unique and it comes from fate.
The so-called beauty of country is indeed more important than country.
After reading this book, to be honest, it's not that I don't like this book, but I just don't understand why the current protagonist can abuse himself to such an extent. Is there really only love, or warmth, left in this world? Why does the author like to write this kind of sadomasochism? I really don't understand, it has to be injured by others to be completely broken and broken, then that can be called great? ? ? I've been watching BL a lot these days, and I really don't understand why. I feel so lonely, so panicked, and so scared. . . . . . Many protagonists were tortured to death. In the end, the person who tortured him gave him some sweetness, and he immediately softened his heart. I don't understand it. The so-called sadomasochism is like this. It can only mean that he is a masochist. I can understand it!
After reading most of it, I decided to write my comments on the essay first - - The level of cruelty is not enough (my heart is as solid as stone...). Lanling's character is somewhat unclear to me. He is contradictory, caring about everything and not caring about anything. This can only be seen from the positive description. The side description did not allow me to discover the outstanding points of his character. And sometimes, I personally think that Lan Ling has too many psychological activities and cannot let readers figure out what other people are thinking 0 0 However, this article is still pretty good-looking, but not sad enough (grit your teeth...). (*^__^*) , Come on, author~
Except for the fact that the name Lanling is a bit popular, it's pretty good and the ending is cute. In addition, after the annotation is completed, you can change it back to the serialization...
Comments on "The Lanling Tomb of Lord Chu" I came here from BS, which is LZ: I have nothing to do. First of all, I'm sorry, your article is not my kind. However, the writing is good. It directly points out the central line of the article. The writing is smooth. Although the ending is a bit rushed, it leaves people with a sense of suspense. As for the ancient sayings that fictionalize history, I still prefer your writing style. It is distant, indifferent and distant, mixed with the vicissitudes and helplessness of that era. I don't know what mood you had in writing this article, but you made the same mistake as me. Since it is one novel, there is no need to write it separately. If it is two different stories, the author can divide them into two volumes, so as to accumulate popularity and avoid losing readers. I once divided a novel into three parts for this reason. As a result, everyone only knows one part but not the second and third part. Because it is a new copywriting, the text seems a bit incomprehensible to readers who have not read the previous ones. So I hope that the author will think carefully and write a better Brunei. I will leave here. Throw flowers... Float away...
After reading it... I felt a little bored... But... It was very relaxing = = The article is very well written. I read it from beginning to end, and the ending is also very exciting (I will explain it later). Maybe I can't write a long and literary review, but I still want to express my opinion. First of all, this article is cute and unique, and the character of the protagonist is also very unique, so it gives people a very distinct feeling and makes people happily continue reading. As for the development of the story, it is quite good, with many outstanding points. However, I would like to give you some advice. I hope that when you write in the future, you can remove some unnecessary descriptions of situations and speed up the rhythm of the article, because the plot is a bit slow at the beginning. If you cut out some, it may be more concise and fascinating. In fact, what I appreciate most about Da Da is that Da Da did not fall into the cliché in terms of his grasp of human nature. Although Zi Luo was reluctant to give up, he still executed Lan Ling. Although it seems sad, this is what makes this article different. The beauty on the river, we can't say which one is more important. Everyone has a personal opinion. Some people love beauty without the country, but some people can turn their anger into beauty. Ziluo... I can't say he is wrong, and I can't say he is right... Since the author can make readers think like this, it means that this article has been successful. At least in terms of the entanglement and complexity of human nature, the author expressed what he wanted to express. At the beginning, I was a little depressed because the male protagonist of this article should be Zi Luo, but the plot changed midway through the ending = = Then I found out that the author has another part, and I was relieved again. This is the story of Zi Luo and Lan Ling. Although it is a tragedy, it has ended, and the story of Lan Ling and Liu Si has just begun... What I love most is actually the ending arranged by the author. Zi Luo finally kills Lan Ling. He struggles and struggles, but still chooses to kill him in the end. Zi Luo doesn't understand his feelings for Lan Ling. In fact, there are not so many things in this world that are absolute. Clear, but most of them are mixed with various emotions and blurred. Lanling is gone. Although he is injured, someone still chooses to hold his hand, but Ziluo may never forget such a person for the rest of his life... I like this kind of cruelty = = With love alone, it is impossible to stay together forever. As long as we are here, there are too many things to consider. After all, it is just a beautiful fairy tale. Compared to such illusions, I appreciate the sad but sober reality more.
After reading it, I felt quite cold. Everyone has their own responsibilities, difficulties, and pursuits In the end, it was accomplished at the expense of others, with Lanling bearing the brunt. However, after the sacrifice, I thought about it and regretted it again. As long as Liu Si takes him away, Lan Ling may as well go.
Is there any torture... O(╯□╰)o Maybe it's because I have a strong taste? In short... What is the comparison... But thank you for your post, and a bunch of flowers... Alas...
Collected. But I'm a little scared after seeing the depth of the sadomasochistic love affair. Let's watch it again if you're in the mood = =
Personally, I think the writing is a bit cruel, haha~... I don't really appreciate the character of the protagonist, but I think it's his character that leads to his tragedy.
What a beautiful lady, what a Chu Jun Lanling. For Ziluo, all beauties are important and cherished by him. But since ancient times, which king has not been ruthless? Become a king in one day and lose your limbs. The beauty of the country... Which one is important? Which one is important? Who knows? Ziluo struggled and hesitated. In the end, he played a chess game in the Jiangshan position. The so-called beauty of country is indeed more important than country. What was gained was a prosperous age, but what was lost was the Lan Ling who once had a bright smile. Ziluo, do you know that there is one person whom you will bear for the rest of your life? Ziluo, do you know that there is one person you have to reluctantly part with? Ziluo, do you know that there is one person that you will lose forever. ——What is lost and gone with the wind, you can never get it back. Therefore, the Lanling who smiled brightly back then, the Lanling who played in the water with you back then, the Lanling who smiled and played with you back then... Have been missed by you forever. Have you ever regretted it? You said, no. Do you know Lanling? You said, understand, he is a child. Yes, they are just children. It's just... That era has passed, and children will eventually become teenagers and young adults. There is always a responsibility on your shoulders. Children always have to grow too. People... There is always something to lose and give up in order to grow. Especially, it was so beautiful to see myself cut off that hope myself. Have you ever regretted it? You still say that, no. Is it uncomfortable or hungry, hot or dependent. Is it defective or understanding, lazy or hard-working. Is it an expectation or a casual mention? To be angry or to make a gesture, to be on the right track or to be in vain. Are you frustrated or don't want to pay attention at all? Are you overthinking or just that. Is it love or asking for it, dare not name it or it is nothing to mention. Is it because I really don't understand or is it a preface, or is it because I don't want to think about it or I just can't remember it. It doesn't matter whether it is too deep to bear or shallow, whether it is vanity or self-respect. Is it naive or understands human feelings, is it heartfelt or is it smiling. Is it unworthy or unwilling? Do you have to be able to withstand lies, tolerate perfunctory treatment, endure deception, forget promises, and let go of everything before you can grow? ——It would be great if we could not grow up. Ziluo accepted the country, the throne, the worship of everyone, the three thousand beauties in the harem, and all the beauty in the world... ——Is it really all the beauty in this world? What about the child who loved his brother deeply but was bruised and bruised - Lan Ling? ——It would be great if we could not grow up. Isn't this what the world is like? Confident, frustrated, disappointed, decadent, numb, and desperate. This is how the world is... Let yourself grow up slowly, endure torture, and finally end up licking your wounds alone at night. Then, watch you cut off everything around you, cut off everything around you yourself. Doesn't this... Such a person's life pass like this? Lanling, Ziluo always failed him too much. Nowhere to make amends. Maybe... Lanling just wanted to feel the happy feeling of loving and being loved by others. It's a pity—— Fortune plays tricks on people... Fireworks get cold easily and the scenery becomes cold. Things are different and people are different, so let everything go. A kind of despair with nowhere to complain, wandering around and tasting alone in the long cool night. Who can predict the fate of running away? Crazy, obviously all because of love. Because I care too much, I am afraid of losing, so I do stupid things and say stupid things, and lose my reason. The world is too vast, and his laughter and tears are not just for him. This is a bloody story that is not even interesting to mention. Where does love come from? It is unique and it comes from fate. The so-called beauty of country is indeed more important than country.