I miraculously transmigrated in the bathroom at an anime convention.
I finished using the toilet and opened the door, only to find that it wasn't a bathroom at all! And I bumped right into my own master as soon as I opened it!!!
A damn System even popped into my head. All it does is boss me around and talk like it isn't the one who has to do the work.
I bumped into my master right from the start!! He's so petty. I only bumped into him once, and now he's even stricter with me during cultivation**!
So I started teasing my master in every way I could!
An arrogant, tsundere eldest disciple and his cold, expressionless master
System: [What the heck! How can you leave me out? I'm the System!] Add a **System (half-heartedly)
System: [...**********!]
Theme: The world accepting us
How should I put it, it has that nonsensical taste. . . You have to tell the story clearly, and the writing is secondary. All I can say is that the narrative ability has been greatly improved. I read a lot of other articles, and the paragraphs are gradually getting better, but others need to be improved. Writing is a difficult task for first-time writers, but everyone who likes to read novels has thought about becoming an author at the moment when he started writing, while those who have not done so continue to be a reader and love the next story. I wanted to write countless times, but I didn't. Hahahaha, you have the courage to write. You can listen to my suggestions. (Or show it to your friends) Even if you write shitty stories in the future, you won't have the sense of Mary Sue déjà vu.