Stealing You Away: Straightening Out My Beautiful, Tragic, Strong Childhood Friend

I am indeed a bit wordy. After reading it, I really felt that the heroine is just a dog licker? And almost 40 of the more than 60 chapters in the whole text are about the plot between the hero and the general. The plot between the hero and the hero going south is only 20 chapters. Is this really a romance novel? I want to say? The female protagonist is really a tool and has no sense of redemption at all. After watching it, I can only say that the male protagonist is too good. He is protected by the general in front of him, and after the end, the female protagonist will be a licker. This is really unfair to the female protagonist. I feel unfair for the female protagonist??????

Author, I feel that the heroine's description of the hero's feelings is not enough, and it is not delicate enough, and even feels very bland. There is no dynamic feeling of the relationship between the hero and the general, which makes me have the illusion that the heroine is a tool, and I feel that most of them are from the male protagonist's perspective. I don't know if you understand what I mean. As a female protagonist, I am actually not satisfied. I have read the whole story and I can only say that the plot setting is quite good, but it is not delicate enough and the emotions are really not delicate enough. Come on, author! I believe you can write better articles! (I don't know much about versioning)

It's quite good-looking, and the heroine dares to love and hate! The children of Jianghu are informal and like this style! The male protagonist is also pretty good. Being stretched straight feels a bit unnatural in the transition, but it doesn't matter, I just have fun watching it~ The writing is very good!

After reading the whole story, I felt like it was just about the male protagonist and the general falling in love. If I wanted to see the love between the two men, why didn't I watch it on BL? I also watched the story. It's a romance, and although "The Story of Me" will inevitably talk about the male protagonist's ex, the length of this article is too big, and I really can't accept it. . . [Split]

Yes, Jiyuan was a little worried and uncomfortable at first. It would be fine if the heroine later has some strength. The logic of the male protagonist's love for the female protagonist could be written more deeply, and the sense of redemption could be stronger.

Is it true that the author doesn't want to make extra chapters? 😭

I just want to say that this novel, emm, is very creative and the writing is good, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too abrupt.

It can also be regarded as having an ancient flavor. The length is just right, neither too long nor too short, but the meaning is still unfinished. I think it's a pure love story that twists and turns, and the author is still updating it. Hahaha `(*∩_∩*)′ really made me enjoy it.

It's a fairy tale... It's not enough to watch. Please write a few more extras 🙏

I know that the straight twists and turns written by good authors must be particularly beautiful. I truly believe that in love, all living beings are equal. I never watch BL, but I don't discriminate either. Whether it is straight twists or straight twists, as long as you truly love the other person and are not mixed with interests or calculations, it is okay. Love is always sacred. He once loved a man, but he was not inferior to anyone else. He just loved one person, and he was still the most cherished person in her heart. I read two books by the author in succession. This kind of anti-grabbing is really great. The girls are so cute. I almost fall in love with them. Love is not robbery, but restraint. I particularly like what Baby Girl said, letting him go wherever he wants. This is love, just hoping that he can have the freedom of choice.