One Piece: Loneliness Sings

This chapter is indeed a bit speechless, not to mention that the word count is a bit short and the plot is dry, let's just talk about Shanks... Before this, there were almost no descriptions of Shanks's magical horse, and there was no plot between Shanks and the heroine. At most, Shanks had some worship of the heroine, knew some little secrets, saw her power, well, of course, she also had a straw hat. And then, and then, and then fell in love like this? ? Didn't even experience liking, didn't even have ambiguity, didn't even have foreplay, and fell in love directly? This speed is too fast... It feels very abrupt, there is not enough foreshadowing, and the content seems very thin. Moreover, there is almost nothing written in this chapter...

It's super cool, but a bit short. I might try writing a longer Pirates fanfic.

Very nice, but a little short.

The unexpected feeling is great! ! ! I like it so much! ! !

It would be even better if there were OX films of Biluo and Shanks! !

I really like being tired! ! !

It's well written. It would be ok if there was a side story about Biluo and Shanks! !

2010.11.11.11:11, Good article, give you my highest praise, good article, no one else

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It's so beautiful~ I don't even remember how many times I watched it~ I just think about it over and over again~ I hope you will write some good articles in the future. Come on, I will always support you~(*^__^*)~