The Land of Nowhere (GL)
无何有之乡(GL)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 337k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 20y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
74Chapters
303Favorites
8.7Score
60Nutrient gifts
3kClicks per chapter
600Comments
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Makeup points seven years late. . . . . .
Sir, you are so awesome. Keep diving to read the full text, I have to leave a message to add points.
The article is very long and the text is very painful to read, but it is still addictive~~
The writing style is very good, and it shows that the cultural attainments are very deep. However, this is also a shortcoming. It makes people feel a little artificial. Many descriptions are too cumbersome, which actually affects the plot of the story. As the saying goes: when the water is full, it overflows, and when the moon is full, it loses. Too much pursuit of the stacking of words and vocabulary makes people feel bored after reading too much. Rare things are precious, extremely romantic, delicate and jerky sentence patterns, and the pursuit of ideas. It would be better if there were less; I believe that with your profound cultural background, you will be able to create further masterpieces.
Kannazuki's miko~really looks alike~ I like Mu who sounds similar to Qian Ge~
Being slow when done well is called character. Haha, that makes sense
It reminds me of Kannazuki... If they can also break their fate...
Phew, I finally finished reading it after a long time. The writing is so beautiful. I admire it. It seems that I will never be a writer again in this life. Wow. . . Present flowers, little flasher. . .
714 Okay~~~I'll treat this as a forum reply... Although it feels really weird ORZ The article has been with me for a long time. I started planning it during the summer vacation last year and in the blink of an eye, the year is here again. Time really flies by (Mystery: What are you feeling?). Then I'll just try to be a small writer XD. If everyone could have their own sense of understanding when reading the article, instead of trying to convey something clumsy like me, that would be a very happy and interesting thing. Thank you to everyone who read the article. Everyone is a very precious and important part in the process of writing the article. Well, it is a journey worthy of gratitude and treasure^^ to Actually, I never know which person it is and how many persons it is: Thank you for your concern. I will prepare well for the exam (then I will go online...)