I dreamed of a youth of breathtaking beauty on a high tower, resolutely hurling himself down. His black hair flowed like silk, his red robe like a lotus. In despair, he said, “Su Jin, you don't understand. How could you possibly understand?”
I dreamed of a man beneath a flowering tree, his eyes like stars and a smile on his lips. Cherry blossoms covered his spotless blue robe. He said gently, “I didn't know young ladies liked to dream of princes. But she loves cherry blossoms, so I planted them. Maybe when this whole hillside is in bloom, at least one cherry blossom will find its way into her dreams.”
I dreamed of a man beside a wind-whipped cliff, slowly letting go of her hand. Peonies across the mountainside cast a red glow over her despairing face. From then on, they were separated by a world, though only an inch apart.
I dreamed of a woman of incomparable beauty, her cold sword inching into her chest. Blood bloomed across her body like a bewitching red lotus. Holding the sword, she smiled like a flower: “Does it hurt? It hurts me even more!”
I dreamed of so many things. Those tangled nightmares were like a curse with no way out of the darkness. I couldn't escape, and you couldn't come in…
I'm not stuck, I'm just too lazy to fight
Well written, don't give up on the article~
It's well written, not too messy. At most, the scene switching in the previous part makes people's brains even more confused. When switching scenes, you can add some words to indicate the location and time, or else just use dividing lines and text similar to subtitles.
It turns out I've seen it I really think you wrote well Come on
I'm here, Is it just because of people's names, I still prefer Liuyun
All right! Someone has already said something nice, so I won't repeat it. I just want to say, enough foreshadowing, enough conspiracy, and enough atmosphere. Just let your male protagonist come out to meet people! If you stay at his mother's place all this time, aren't you afraid that you won't be welcomed by my aunt when you come out?
My heart ached~~~In this life and past life, I met an old friend
It's so exciting. I've decided on this Su Jin. Xiao Mo, can you guess who I am? I'm Jingyue. Hehe, I'll use this vest from now on.
Little Momo, Kawen is normal, Kaka is healthier, ho ho! By the way, I want to set up a friendly link with you, can you do it?
There is really no need for you to burst into tears! I haven't even written a chapter! I'm going crazy!