[Super-Rich Slacker Top x Sports-Challenged Academic Ace Bottom]
(Lu Chuan x Su Yan)
Su Yan first saw the boy who shone like the morning sun in eighth grade. One glance was all it took for him to fall. Later, every teacher at their middle school knew that the problem student had made a sudden leap in his grades and earned the school's only ticket to a top high school.
By chance, Su Yan and Lu Chuan had their first conversation since starting high school.
Lu Chuan: "Little top student, I remember you. Your name is Su Yan, right?"
Su Yan: "Mm..."
Lu Chuan: "That's a good name. Your soft, sweet looks are impossible to describe in words."
What kind of bizarre explanation was that?
"Between the dazzling starlight and him, I choose him."
"Even if the galaxy falls and the world ends, he and I will be together forever."
"I will always be true to my heart, and to you."
[This is a tragic ending!!! I won't spoil what happens to them later in the blurb. I won't delete the story, so never mind the old version, 'Success and Failure.' I've started it over. I still like that title better.
I'm a beginner and don't know if my writing is any good. I'm using this story to practice.]
Theme: Study hard and keep improving every day.
Is my pace too fast? Many things were not explained clearly in the first chapter.
Let's compare the first chapter. Although my writing is not that good, I obviously feel that the first chapter is better.