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About this story:
In her previous life, after transmigrating into a book, Wen Qingyu became the supreme immortal revered by all in a fantasy world. After a century of glory, she suddenly learned that she was actually a spy for the demon race, and ultimately became a casualty of the war between immortals and demons.
After being reborn, she planned to break free of the demon race and live out the rest of her days in peace.
But in this life, she keeps having the same dream. In it, an obsessive man is secretly in love with her and sneaks glances at her along the paths she always takes. He even has a secret room filled with her portraits. Wen Qingyu feels as if she's being watched, and swears she'll find him.
But when she discovers that the man in her dream is none other than her usually sweet and sensible disciple, her world falls apart.
Knowing that all the tenderness he showed her had been an act, Wen Qingyu feels both angry and afraid. She avoids Mu Yan, lashes out at him, and makes no secret of how much she hates him.
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Mu Yan has loved his master for two lifetimes. In his previous life, he watched her soul perish, and that gave rise to a heart demon. In this life, he hears his master say with his own ears that she hates him. At last, he can't hold back and lets the heart demon consume his reason.
The moment he stormed the Heavenly Palace, all he wanted was to see her.
In the empty bamboo grove, he can't stop himself from wanting to kiss her.
He wants to make every wish he'd held in his heart in his previous life come true. But when he sees her tears of hurt, his heart still aches. "Don't cry. I'll stay away from now on."
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The male lead isn't a pervert. There's more to the dream.
One-sided love at first, then they both fall for each other.
HE, with lots of personal headcanons.
I hope everyone will leave kind comments. Thank you.
If it's not for you, please stop reading without telling me.
Historical romance: The Princess Dislikes It
Though both are legitimate princesses, Zhao Ke'an always comes second to her second elder sister, Zhao Rong. Even their mother favors that haughty, spoiled princess.
The sisters are close in age, and their weddings are set for the same day, but their husbands-to-be couldn't be more different.
Zhao Ke'an is to marry Shen Hanzhi, heir to the Duke of Han, whom Zhao Rong once looked down on.
Shen Hanzhi is a notorious young rascal in the capital, racing through the streets on horseback and causing trouble all day long.
Zhao Rong, meanwhile, is to marry the son of the chancellor, a renowned scholar who is both exceptionally talented and handsome as Pan An. He's one of the few great beauties in the capital.
Zhao Ke'an has no hopes for her marriage and keeps her distance from Shen Hanzhi, but the young heir seems incapable of reading the room. Every day he finds a new way to please her, and at night he's insatiable. Zhao Ke'an is thoroughly fed up.
At a palace banquet, a noble's white dog suddenly goes mad. Zhao Rong and Wen Chenye fall into the water in their fright, but when the crazed dog approaches Zhao Ke'an, Shen Hanzhi kicks it to the ground. It scampers off with its tail between its legs, yelping. At that moment, Zhao Ke'an is relieved to realize that a man with nothing but brute strength isn't entirely useless.
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Shen Hanzhi was once an ambitious, spirited young man determined to serve his country. But when he learned that his family's military power had grown so great it aroused the emperor's suspicions, he reined himself in completely. When he found out he might have to marry a princess, he simply gave up and played the wastrel to the hilt.
But he never expected the second princess to change her mind and the emperor to send the third princess in her place. How could he possibly resist the woman he'd admired in his youth?
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On the day the two princesses wed, the people of the capital privately gossiped about how happy the second princess's marriage was, and how miserable the third princess's seemed.
To everyone's surprise, it was the second princess and her husband who later divorced. By then, the pregnant third princess was being supported by Young Master Shen as she entered the second princess's residence to help reconcile the couple.
* One-on-one romance, marriage first, love later, sweet story, happy ending, sexually exclusive
* A mash-up of government systems from different dynasties. Don't take the history too seriously.
* The author's writing is limited. If it's not to your taste, please stop reading. Kind comments only.
Coming soon: The Crown Prince's Spirited Childhood Friend
About the story:
Luo Zhaozhao has been spoiled since she was little, and when she throws a tantrum, nothing can rein her in.
One day, a remarkably handsome boy comes to the village school. Luo Zhaozhao likes him very much, but the boy has no sense at all and doesn't even try to win her over. So Luo Zhaozhao resorts to an underhanded approach to befriend him.
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On the first day she meets He Linyou, Luo Zhaozhao has her friends stop his carriage. Then she stands in the middle of the road and challenges the "bandits" blocking the way.
"How dare you block the way of my friend, Luo Zhaozhao? Are you tired of living?"
The scene goes perfectly, and Luo Zhaozhao assumes He Linyou must be incredibly grateful. Instead, all she gets is:
"You're blocking the road too."
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Luo Zhaozhao is so annoyed she doesn't want to talk to him, so she goes out of her way to get under his skin.
She hides his books, puts chili powder in his pastries, and slips bugs into his textbooks... In short, if she doesn't annoy He Linyou at least once a day, she feels miserable.
As she keeps teasing him, He Linyou grows taller, until Luo Zhaozhao has to stand on tiptoe to whisper to him. The boy who used to look impatient whenever he saw her now has a new catchphrase: "Luo Zhaozhao, come here."
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On Luo Zhaozhao's fifteenth birthday, He Linyou hurries over, only to catch a young man flirting with her.
Seeing Luo Zhaozhao dead drunk, He Linyou burns with anger and carries her straight to a quiet corner of the house.
"Luo Zhaozhao, you are not to go after anyone but me for the rest of your life, or else..."
Before He Linyou can finish, the girl, her eyes hazy with drink, raises her chin and brushes her soft lips against the corner of his. Her voice is sweet and gentle. "Sealed with a kiss. My fifteenth birthday wish came true!"
Theme: Follow your heart
Before I read the article, I came in to complain about a certain comment. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist, why does he say that the female protagonist is not worthy? Men's love is so noble! Disgusted.
No, I must say that the cover is beautiful!
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After reading some of it, what can I say... The biggest feeling is that the character creation is a bit thin and the setting is superficial. The female protagonist doesn't act like a fairy or a superior person. I also feel that she is not worthy of the male protagonist's affection, at least I can't see it clearly. The status of the Immortal Lord seems to be very high, but in the article, he can be punished at will. His abilities should be very strong, but he can be easily controlled by the Immortal Lord. In some plots, the very powerful male protagonist behaves like a person without any ability, and can only hammer the wall with his red eyes. The status, abilities, and relationships between characters are not so reasonable. For example: a disciple can easily take punishment for the master without the master knowing about it. She is an Immortal Lord. How could her punishment be borne by others so easily? If she is required to do something else, a setting such as committing crimes and meritorious service would be more reasonable. What I see now is that the punishment in the Immortal Palace is arbitrary and child's play. In a large and serious system, it is impossible for one person to control everything easily, and the distribution of power will not be so extreme. The authority of rules and regulations cannot be easily questioned and cannot be changed and replaced at will. Various positions, powers, relationships between people, etc. Are more complex and three-dimensional. As far as what I have seen is concerned, especially the power system part of the article, the author constructed an empty worldview with the general shape of a house, but a closer look at the structure and furnishings is not satisfactory. Let me take a blind guess, maybe the author is relatively young? I don't have much experience, so I have weak control especially in the power system. We can give an example that is closer to life to describe it: the squad leader and the deputy squad leader are similar to the Immortal Lord and the Immortal Lord. There are some differences in status. However, in terms of class affairs, it is impossible for the squad leader to do whatever he says, and the deputy squad leader can only obey. Both people have influence in the class. Or replace the deputy squad leader with another class committee member. This is more like one immortal leader with multiple immortals, and the conclusion is still similar. The analogy is the same with the teacher and the squad leader. The teacher can decide who is the squad leader, but it is one thing if the squad leader is unpopular. Therefore, the teacher cannot arbitrarily say who is the squad leader or remove such and such from a certain position, nor can he decide or change the punishment for the squad leader at will. The former affects the squad leader's authority in the class and is not conducive to subsequent management. The latter will make the teacher and class management regulations have no authority. (You can imagine that the monitor made a mistake and the teacher wants to punish him. However, since the monitor still has to manage the class, is it unreasonable to let the monitor's followers or younger siblings be punished on his behalf?) In this case, who will listen to the teacher? I personally believe that the power system is essentially the result of uneven distribution of various powers and checks and balances on each other. I won't say much about character creation. You have to slowly understand the complexity and multi-faceted nature of a person. Moreover, I didn't read the entire book carefully, so there may be some deviations. Everyone has different opinions, so what I say may be too subjective. I can only say that I don't see much of the qualitative change process between the heroine's feelings for the hero from gratitude to the love between a man and a woman. However, the power system is considered to be relatively objective, and the author can make some reference. The author's literary talent is still acceptable, and most of his control over some lyrical descriptions is considered OK. There are also some ingenious ideas, such as the author himself taking a mission through the book and being reborn. I have never seen a female supporting character with so many buffs. Most of the characters with similar buffs are female protagonists. But it may be that the emotional level, logic, and structure are relatively weak. Maybe these need to be understood or experienced more. Ps: If the author is older than me, then I, um... Maybe I just don't want to waste time on less important systems and the like, and use supporting characters as a pure tool to promote emotions () or the author is having a smooth life, so reading these things is relatively simple. Ah, by the way, I am currently in college () pps: I can't say it's not writing guidance at all, there is still some (.) But again: the author can choose to make a brief reference, or simply treat me as a p... Ppps: I personally feel that the above words are not curse words or very impolite. The slight nature of writing guidance may offend the author, so I would like to apologize in advance: I'm sorry m(._.)M, and I'm sorry for offending you. Finally, I wish the author can write better and better articles. Above.
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The heroine can't think of this?
Looks good, keep up the good work!
It's good not to be a master and a disciple, and there's no reason for others to stop them from being together.
I made a mistake in hurrying up, so there will be no tomorrow.
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