One Glance, One Mistake (Heavenly Sword and Dragon Slaying Saber Fan Fiction)

The article is very good, but the emotional description is not very delicate. I believe that they are in love, but the author did not show it at all. It was all based on imagination.

I'm sorry, but I really didn't realize that Yu Sanxia liked the heroine at all. After he rejected Song Daxia's proposal, the heroine went down the mountain, but she never came down. The author only wrote about the heroine's lovesickness and the timely appearance of the hero in the end. I felt more like the heroine had a sweet dream. There is no emotional collision between the two here at all.

I love Yu San a lot lately, but it's a pity that I haven't found any articles about him before. I like the big article very much, it's so healing. I always felt that short articles were not satisfying enough, but after reading this article, my concept has completely changed. I really like this Yitian fan, keep it up!!!

Although Yi Tianli mentioned that it was Yin Susu who sent Yu Daiyan back to Wudang But the first chapter of this book talks about a young man who sent him back, and he was also called "Third Brother". So this man should be one of the Seven Heroes of Wudang, right?! Why did Yin Susu send this chapter back again!

Alas, a very happy little article. To be honest, every now and then I think about it and run over to read it, but unfortunately I still have more to say... I'll write a long story... For Yu Sanxia = =

Two nonsense words here: One is about the name, why is it called "Mistake at First Sight"? It's not like Yang Guo's saying that once you meet Yang Guo, your whole life will be misunderstood... Here the male protagonist and the female protagonist meet and their happiness begins. Why is it not called "Happy Meeting" or something like that? Another one is just nagging: As the ancients said: No matter how good your martial arts skills are, you can knock him down with one shot... You are really honest and you can't bully me...

I slowly raised my hands and held his big hand tightly. , "Yu Daiyan, I like you and I am willing to marry you." - When I saw this, I was complete... Thank you, the author

It looks good, but can you write more?

I felt dizzy after writing Water Margin, so I went back to read my previous articles, but I didn't see the message from Lihua from N years ago. I hurriedly looked for her Jin Yongtong to read. Jin Yongtong is my favorite, so I followed the clues and ended up here. Hehe, there are so many beautiful Jin Yongtong, it's so enjoyable.

The article is very sweet, but it's too short