[Harry Potter] The New Transfer Student

This is the second time I've read it hahaha, and I couldn't help but want to write a long review: DaDa's control over the original text is very good. Each character basically develops according to the behavior pattern of the original work. The whole thing is not broken. I think DaDa must have studied HP for many years (doge) In fact, the development of Xiaoka's emotional line was a bit strange before. Suddenly, he began to describe on a large scale how Xiaoka chased Hermione. It felt like Xiaoka suddenly became a love brain (). Because I personally feel that Xiaoka's growth line should be: 1. Being used by fairies for experiments, lonely, insecure, and only trusting himself; 2. Learning from gg, being trained, and having both trust and distrust in my heart (if I write gg, I can do anything crazy for Xiaoka's growth, Is it better to lay down a echo for the later story of Xiaoka sacrificing himself for Hermione?); 3. Go to Hogwarts to study, and rely on yourself at the beginning to get to know Hermione, but still have a sense of distrust towards anyone; 4. Gradually trust Hermione, and at the same time discover that friendship is not friendship. Love; 5. You can do anything for Hermione's life, including hurting yourself (but I think people who are truly subconsciously insecure will choose to go against Hermione's will or trap Hermione in a safe place hh); 6. When everything is over, you will despise yourself. At the same time, he knew that his fate was over and started messing around (bushi); 7. Hermione chased him, and he was moved and wanted her to go and stay at the same time (emphasizing the resistance of Xiaoka when Hermione used her soul as nourishment, Xiaoka's silence when Hermione resolutely dedicated herself, etc. () Anyway, part of this growth line is what I made up in my head hahh I personally like Slytherin very much (I am a member of the Snake Yard). In the later stage, Xiaoka still loved Hermione so much that he was even willing to sacrifice his life to help Hermione fulfill her wish. Do you want to poke me by any means necessary?

"Saint - From Outlaw to Business Association", Gallon is so delicious!

Very nice! Also, please don't stop persecuting Snape after you get married, thank you! Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

It's such a good ending. Everyone gets what they want, but Luna... Kind of likes Kaka, right? Ggad Two coins really poke me

Luna has a crush on Kaka. If there is a BE extravaganza, Kaka should be with Luna. It's hard to let go. The ending is full of flowers.

Hahaha Snape finally became a father

So cool, so cool, so handsome, ahhhhhhhhhh

I thought Kaka only had one or two years to live, and I can understand it. I didn't expect that there are still so many years. It's so good and interesting. I really hope to read another good Luna fanfic.

Laughing so hard hahahahahahahahahaha

What about the promised extra?? Why is it Little Red Riding Hood?!! I want to see them get married!!!!