Full-Time Spirit Tamer [Full-Dive Beast Taming]

After purchasing and reading the full text, I probably guessed a little bit of what the author wanted to feel, which is that the heroine is very awesome, very powerful, and the most popular among the spirit masters. All kinds of monsters and monsters covet the heroine, but the heroine saves the day and saves the day with her friends and boyfriend. The protagonist overcame difficulties together. Looking back on the past, it feels like the boat has passed through the mountains, but there are still mistakes to be corrected. First of all, the emotional line is really a failure to a large extent, which made me feel a little uncomfortable while reading the article. Why did the male protagonist fall in love with the female protagonist? This is my doubt, and the point that I was also confused about in the previous chapter up to Xiaoyue Yanlang is that there are only a few characters on the scene, and few of them have names or even talked to the heroine when they awakened. Where is the guy who has 91% awakening of the ice attribute? Secondly, in my opinion, the second spirit egg is that the interaction between the contracted spirit beast and its owner is too little in the first part. The large description of the evolution of the spirit beast is occasionally okay but often appears to be a bit visual fatigue, and even makes people feel disgusted. Finally, there are errors in some sentences in the writing. Of course, this is just my humble opinion.

By the way, I never noticed the title of the book [Holographic Beast Control], where does it reflect holography?

In addition... Since there is a list of skills in the spirit contract, can you please unify the names of the skills? Woohoo, Huayue Gem, Flowery Moon Crystal, etc. And isn't it said that only Yuqing can use the skill crystal? Why can the heroine herself be able to use it directly?

The little bat is quite cute, and he feels sorry for his sister

If possible, I hope to optimize the sentence segmentation and paragraphing. I'm really tired of reading, and don't forget the punctuation... Some places are too colloquial and may conflict with the entire context. (The above are all my personal thoughts. I'm sorry if I offend you.

Disclaimer: The book review was written while reading Chapter 107 in one sitting. I am not responsible for subsequent plots. Story tags: Beast Control, Medical Care, CP, Life Style, Research Department, Upgrade Flow, Stable Society Department, Logical Settings Storyline Lin Youning, who was about to become a beast master, was extremely confused by the powerlessness of the medical beast masters in the survival of the fittest and the law of the jungle that her mother faced during her divorce. Therefore, Lin Youning, who obviously had the strongest wood talent at the beginning, chose the "Treasure Carrot Rabbit", which would give the beastmaster a spiritual beast that best suited his own skills in an "objective sense" when signing the contract. However, it was like God was joking. I had just realized from my mother that because the Qi Ling doctor had no offensive ability, he was in a weak position in marriage in society. Because of her contract with the "Treasure Carrot Rabbit", Lin Youning became the most potential Qi Ling doctor, and she was able to become a disciple of Hua Jinxiu, the strongest female veterinary doctor in today's society. However, even a female Qi Ling doctor like Lin Youning, who had a great start, faced competition from major wealthy families in order to get the "best daughter-in-law" at the weakest stage at the beginning. Lin Youning was introduced by her teacher to find Bai Jingyu, a good-tempered and mutually beneficial shield, as her contractual boyfriend. Although Lin Youning quickly got rid of her disadvantaged position by relying on her research talent, Lin Youning has not forgotten what happened to her mother. Therefore, Lin Youning continued to study ways for a series of disadvantaged groups such as Doctor Qi Ling to get out of their predicament, and she also gained a lot of love and career in the process. Story evaluation It's too tiring to write the above, so let's just list the advantages and disadvantages below. Advantages: 1. The setting of humanistic society is really surreal. It starts from the beginning and sets up why even if there are beasts to control, society has still gone through the ancient times when men were superior to women and they had three wives and four concubines. Because disharmony between husband and wife will affect the man's cultivation speed and lifespan, the head wife has status. However, because the spiritual power of the Qi Ling Physician is gentle, beneficial and non-aggressive, and will not affect the speed of cultivation after the man cheats on him, female Qi Ling Physicians were still the best concubine and childbearing candidates in ancient times. In modern times, the medical system has been vigorously promoted due to peace, otherwise there would not even be a male spiritual doctor. The author really makes the setting so reasonable and well-founded that it's really scary to think about it carefully. No wonder Lin Youning, who had a great start, also had to find a shield at the beginning. Moreover, the author also set up that although senior doctors can save people and kill people with one thought, not every doctor is Lin Youning and her teacher, and none of the 1% Qi Ling doctors are. Physician Qi Ling is really a defenseless bastard in this beast-controlling society. Even oneself can be regarded as a resource. 2. Because of the beast control, the myth has come true! Although the details have changed, Chang'e really represents the moon! There are also other mythical characters appearing. In order not to spoil the story, I won't go into details about this part. 3. Other upgrade stories only change the world after becoming a big shot, but the research-type protagonist changes the world from the beginning to the end. Sure enough, the world cannot be changed by relying on morality. Only by creating more benefits can the disadvantaged groups get rid of their disadvantages. However, to avoid spoilers, this part will not be discussed in detail. [Disadvantages]: In fact, there is only one, so let's just write it down, which is also a summary. The writing got better and better in the later stages, and the plot in the early stage was really jumpy. I obviously bought the original version, but I felt like I was reading a pirated version. I always felt that I had missed a chapter somewhere. But my writing skills are also bad, so I won't talk about this topic. But this is also related to the shortcomings I want to say. I think the biggest shortcoming of this article is that it is not good enough. The whole article does not have enough words. The serialization has now reached 500,000 words, but I feel that in order to express it clearly, the 500,000 words should be expanded to at least 700,000 words. Regardless of the fact that the [storyline] I wrote is still quite smooth, this is because I have already read it in the later stages and can make up my mind. However, in the early stage, I also felt that the plot arrangement was unreasonable. According to my understanding, I know that the author wants to write a refreshing article. Although in this beast-controlling society, the strong survive everywhere, so the protagonist is unlikely to face the situation faced by a vulnerable group. Moreover, if there is one of the best Qi Ling doctors who serves as a teacher and is still a disadvantaged group, then this society should not let him go and conquer the world again. But the reasons that drive the plot still need to be described, right? For example, female spirit doctors are the best candidates for concubines and children, so they are disadvantaged in society, even if the protagonist's mother is a doctor in a large hospital. Then, the author can describe the plight of the protagonist's mother to express the shortcomings of the female spirit doctor, which is why Lin Youning needs Bai Jingyu as a shield. Although this shield can be easily kicked off by the protagonist's teacher, this shield is also approved by the protagonist's mother, because female contract doctors really need protection in this beast-controlling society. But they didn't expect the protagonist to grow up so fast. Moreover, Bai Jingyu, a second-generation rich man, actually has a good character, but straight men are not very good at reading the atmosphere, and he is very innocent. In the middle of the movie, he and the protagonist actually became a couple before asking for a kiss. Even Lin Youning herself was so angry that she broke a wall with her punch. Moreover, Bai Jingyu has grown up very quickly in this article, so his status as the male protagonist is nothing to be shaken. For example, as one of the best Qiling doctors, Hua Jinxiu has also faced moral compulsion to grow limbs for others, but this kind of thing actually consumes the vitality of Qiling doctors. But the author has never written this before, she just mentioned it in one sentence! ! ! In general, one of the cool points of this article is that society is changed through research, but the description before the change is not enough. There are all kinds of other things, not enough foreshadowing was laid in the early stages, etc. (It's not that it's not deep enough, it's just that it's not rich enough.) I suggest you write more side-by-side descriptions in the early stages.

In the mechanical department, this is rare. Unless you are a foodie like a halberd-eating spirit or a prisoner of delicious food, it is not interesting.

Yes, it's the highest level of dog licking. You can lick it to the end.

Actually, I quite like this kind of scientific research setting. It doesn't have to be a fight. The scientific research is also exciting.

I really appreciate it. Why did it end so suddenly? Ahhhhhh. This is the feeling of reading half of the article without any follow-up.