
My Happy Ending
MY HAPPY ENDING
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I remember liking this cartoon very much~ I spent a lot of money on phone calls to watch on-demand videos, huh?
Even though I have never watched The Magician, I was very happy as soon as I read this article.
Cry Call Extra I like this article but can't get enough of it
So cute Lina is so cute like this What does this mean to Jerry? He just ran away like this. Sure enough, it's just a way to relieve lovesickness? (Hey! Nothing has happened yet!)
Comment on "MY HAPPY ENDING" BY——commentator Heiran First, let's talk about the copywriting. Although the content in the copy is a bit convoluted, it is very distinctive and clearly expresses that this is a legend from long ago and the author's sense of humor. The words "self-recommended" are difficult to attract attention in white and are very distracting to the eyes. It is recommended to change them to a more obvious color. For self-recommended articles, it is recommended to use button links or text links. Such two picture links that are larger than the copy of this article always give the impression of taking over the main content. Next, let's talk about the word count. The number of words in each chapter is too small, which makes people feel unfinished. As soon as they get into the mood, they are gone... Although you can clearly know from the title that each chapter is actually two chapters combined... However, I always feel that I can't get enough. Then comes the wedge. In fact, there is only one irrelevant thing I want to say... It turned out that the sentence in the copy was said by Jeroz, and suddenly I felt that the sentence was doubly happy. Next, comes the text. The handsome young man with purple hair and purple eyes did not appear in the princess's dream, but in the princess's boudoir. What moved the princess's heart was not the sincerity of the foreign youth, but the princess' curiosity about foreign countries. What the princess gives to the loser is not an apologetic smile, but a comfortable smile. The eldest princess did not give false blessings. She directly warned her beloved sister not to fall in love with that demon. The young man who went to the battlefield was not for the princess, but for the mission assigned by his superior. The princess was not sad for her lover who died protecting her sister, but she hated the demons who had deceived her. My first impression is that there is a big difference between fairy tales and reality, even though they are all about the same thing. Second thought... How are fairy tales passed down? Third thought, but I prefer violence to beautified fairy tales. I mean the beautiful and lovely Princess Lena and the tragic handsome (old) young man of the demon clan. Unfortunately, it is also a tragedy in the end. In the end, I was cheated... I thought it was XL, but the author said that it wasn't necessarily Lina's previous life... But that means it doesn't necessarily mean it wasn't, right? In fact, Jeros also has feelings for the princess. Otherwise, how could he still remember it after the year before? And if he remembers the princess's name incorrectly, it means that Jeroz has feelings for Lina now... I firmly believe it (please don't say no, thank you). Actually, I like the wedge and outro the best because it's definitely XL… The immature (old) young people from a thousand years ago are good, and the young people from a thousand years later (even older) are also good, but I like Lina the best. Please forgive me if I offend you, above.
Thinking of Romeo and Juliet... Meeting at midnight...
Maybe it's because of the short story? There will be less talent... You are so transparent like Wa, you don't dare to publish a short story first.
Ahhh... It turns out to be this article. It's a short story. I'm not good at writing short stories... I think it is difficult to grasp the character and plot development of short films. It takes courage T T Although I haven't watched the original anime, I think the writing is pretty good! The dialogue flows smoothly... I always... Get stuck = =