The heroine transmigrates into the world as Sakura's twin little sister, and she transmigrates as a baby.
She and Sakura discover the Clow Cards together. She can use magic, but she had that ability even before Sakura did. If you want to know more, read on and see for yourself! ╮(╯▽╰)╭
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Everyone, this is my first story, and I'm not very good at writing. Please don't tear into me anymore. I hope you'll understand. Thank you!!!
A new project: a crossover series
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Dear, it's not a tiger, it's a leopard
The writing is really not very exciting. Originally Xiaoxue was supposed to be the protagonist, but after reading the third chapter, I felt that Xiaoxue was just a very ordinary supporting female character. The author has been writing about how Sakura is doing. The whole article is based on the original show of Cardcaptor Sakura and added a female supporting character to it. There are some running stories, and they are really unremarkable.
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Well~ the overall feeling is still good~ but there are typos, unclear sentences, punctuation marks, some places are a bit inexplicable, occasionally a bit confusing, and the characters' expressions and psychology are not very detailed. I hope more attention will be paid to these places~ But it is much better than at the beginning~
Why does your article, the author, make me feel that you want to finish this article very quickly? It skipped a lot of plots, and some plots ended very quickly, which made it feel like a running story. However, considering that the male protagonist is Elio, I forgive you gorgeously~
Why did I read your article? I'm starting to hate Sakura I think I'm crazy... And the main character is Snow ok The article you wrote If someone doesn't know I thought the main character was Sakura Really speechless
I want Snow Rabbit to be the leading actor
Really, it's quite bland, hehe. If there were more inner activities of the tasks and less plain descriptions, it would be better. Good luck with your future works.
All I can say is that if you haven't watched the anime and read this article directly, you will definitely not understand it. In addition, there are too many typos. By the way, after you finish writing, won't you read it again to see if the sentences go smoothly? This article feels like a plot synopsis, except that this synopsis contains a lot of dialogue. The title of your article is "The Ordinary Journey of Kinomoto Sakuraxue". Your heroine is Kinomoto Sakuraxue, not Kinomoto Sakura, right? From the beginning to the end, you are just telling the story, and then you insert a few words about the heroine. Most of them are talking about how Kinomoto Sakura is doing. Where is your heroine? There are no distinctive features at all, and there is not much description at all. It is just solved in a simple sentence or two. Characters always come inexplicably, and then disappear inexplicably, just like Mei Ling, she flashed for a moment, and then disappeared again. For those who have never seen the animation, who knows who she is. There is no such character in the comics (I am referring to the original CLAMP Aunts, not the Chinese version of the comics based on the cartoons) To put it bluntly, instead of reading your article, I might as well watch the animation directly, that way it will be much clearer.