Father to Father

If you don't envy glory and fame, you will end up ruining the country. The survivors shed tears to talk about their father-in-law, and sing long songs to remember Xu Qing.

After reading the copy, I thought it was a good story and I was looking forward to it. But after reading the text, I want to say whether such an emperor is a failure in Xu Wenyuan's education or because he is not qualified enough and wants to take up a big banner when he is still young. The fate of high-achieving masters has been without exception since ancient times. Xu Wenyuan expected his own ending from the beginning. This is normal. His desire to protect the young master is not wrong, but his over-protective approach will probably make him die in peace. The emperor's current behavior is obviously mostly motivated by emotion and has not yet become a reality. He was a good man and a loyal minister, but he was a good man who didn't know how to adapt. He quietly did a lot of good things for the country and the people, and worked hard to die. However, he seemed to have overlooked that it was not him who wanted to take the throne, but Qi Wei. What he needed was experience and setbacks. Xu Wenyuan's death is of course a pity, a rare and loyal talent, but I feel sorry for him but not for him. The scene where the two of them had sex made me a little baffled. It didn't look like that kind of relationship. Qi Wei just did something to Xu Wenyuan, and Xu Wenyuan was so bland and unresponsive whether his house was confiscated or the emperor wanted to do something. From beginning to end, he acted like "I will do whatever the emperor wants me to do." I just said Xu Wenyuan was smart but thought he was stupid. I should say he was stupid and loyal. Couldn't he see that this emperor was not qualified to bear the heavy responsibility? Couldn't he see that the emperor was just anxious? Couldn't he see that there was a villain like Sun Sheng beside the emperor? He died like this, how could he explain to the late emperor? Sir, you want to create a feeling of spare hatred, but I can't feel it. However, my writing style is not good, so don't be shocked by me.

When I saw the name, I thought it looked familiar. When I clicked on it, I found that I had seen it before, which made it much easier. As the title says, if you simply make a short story that does not have a complete skeleton and is full of fat but no meat, it can be compressed into less than 10,000 words. Quite vulgar themes, care for orphans, nurturance, shock master, love begets respect, and love leads to hatred. (Obviously, this point is not very clear. Long Li has been looking for a reason for Xiao Qi to fall in love with Lao Xu. Unfortunately, he can't find it. It seems that the man is always too bright. Xiao Qi, shrouded in brilliance, has lived in the shadows for more than ten years. He is a successful psychopath. He actually fell in love with that man and actually did anything to him. To be honest, it's a bit embarrassing.) As we all know, educating the emperor is a technical job, because the emperor is not an ordinary person after all. He is the one who will rule the world in the future and will kill you with just one word. Even a NB person like Zhang Juzheng was almost whipped to death, but at least he was still very famous while alive. Poor old Xu actually died of typhoid after that, which is even more embarrassing. That's too far. Pull back. Although I was a little embarrassed when I read this article, Xiaolou's writing style is still good and I won't be struck by lightning. Give Xiaolou one point for his writing. In short, this is a preliminary experimental report on a young grass emperor in a greenhouse that mutated after being exposed to excessive light and ultimately successfully polluted its growth environment.

I read the adult short story first. The beginning of the story is about the prime minister's house being ransacked, and the conspiracy and intrigues are unfolding all at once, which is very attractive. And the prime minister, dressed in white, also made his appearance despite repeated calls. Throughout the entire article, Xu Wenyuan's frontal appearance only appears three times (perhaps I remember it incorrectly), and there are only a few words. I know that the author deliberately used sideways to highlight the story. In my eyes, I did see a father-in-law wrapped in white and with an indifferent expression. However, Qi Wei was downplayed instead, probably because only one person was captured in the whole story - Xiangfu, and a series of Qi Wei's inner activities revolved around Xu Wenyuan. However, the reasons for the occurrence and development of the events in the story are still far-fetched. Although the adults are making assumptions, the background of Shu is Shu, and there are many backgrounds of Hou Shu in the article, which really confused me, probably because I didn't read the copy (PS, I am exactly the opposite of the adult downstairs. I basically don't read the copy, only the right side and the label, embarrassment), so I struggled with the historical background. I think adults can just ignore it completely. The writing skills are good, and it belongs to the literary and ancient style (which is also my favorite category, as I am a good reader who is not picky~). It is not gorgeous enough, it is a little unfounded, and the wording is slightly inappropriate in some places. I somewhat ignored Qi Wei's inner monologue and watched the plot and ending directly. In the penultimate chapter, I knew it was a tragedy, and I felt a little uncomfortable. But when I saw the ending, I felt that everything was very ordinary, as if everything was like this. In fact, the ending of the adults is already very colorful, maybe it is still not outstanding enough. Your Excellency's writing is good. Although the opening chapter is not amazing, it still makes people think and can't help but get into the story. Although the ending is an expected tragedy, it also makes people sigh. I hope you will continue to work hard and present good works, and business people will consider jumping into the trap. If you don't, I hope you will continue to work hard and present good works. The above is some anxious nonsense. If there is any mistake, please ignore it.

Come as promised First impression, the cover is beautiful. However, the copy is a bit too long. I don't know what other readers think, but we didn't finish it. I always feel that the copywriting is the cuteness or high-level summary of the story. However, the text of this article seems to be a past experience and an overview of the past situation. Enter the text. The author's writing style is a bit literary. The choice of words and sentences is a bit too gorgeous, which makes the object to be described look flashy. To give a small example, "The emotion in the eyes is indescribable." The expression of gaze is indescribable. I seem to have seen it twice in three chapters. But I personally feel that the word indescribable is inappropriate, it just looks beautiful. This article is fictitious, and the story is obviously different from Zhuge Kongming and Adou. The beginning of the story is the confiscation of the prime minister's house. I personally think the setting is good, but the writing is a bit sloppy. It's such a big deal for the Prime Minister to confiscate the house. How could it be successful without a careful layout before? But judging from the text, it turns out that it was just a whim of the emperor without any premeditation, but what you copied was from the home of the prime minister who had great power. Why does it look like a kid's house drinking? The foreshadowing in the previous article is not clear enough, which is one of the shortcomings. Next, let's talk about the characters, about the little emperor. Especially Sun Sheng's feelings towards the emperor when he repaid the emperor, the author said, "It was just one night, and he suddenly became a different person." But the previous paragraph is, "Even though he had seen the empress Qi Wei in front of him countless times, but when he looked at his bottomless eyes, Sun Sheng couldn't help but be a little surprised." I will list these two sentences separately. Did the author find that in your writing, the same person's feelings for the same male protagonist at the same time are completely different? Of course, I can understand that you can emphasize that this kind of emperor grew up and took power overnight, and developed the majesty of a superior, but when I read it in the text, it still feels very inconsistent. As for the Prime Minister, let me put it more pointedly, he is just a flat picture. Apart from wearing white clothes, his expression is indifferent, and the emotion in his eyes is indescribable. I don't know what qualities this prime minister has. Of course, it could also be because I only read the first three chapters. Above, someone made a lot of nonsense, the author should just laugh it off

It turned out to be a tragedy, I cried to death

TAT! See you again BE! In the middle of the night, it was really torture. . .

I like your writing style. It's very appetizing.

Regardless of the plot, the writing is indeed quite good.

After reading this article, I remembered the second part of "The Legend of Xiaolou" that I had watched before. The content of the story is similar. If the appearance was not very human, I am afraid that he would have ended up in the same situation as Mr. Xu (although the emperor only had a relationship with him as a father and son, teacher and student, but coups and other events were very similar). All I can say is that it is really a tragedy. The young emperor could not see the intentions of the people around him and wrongly hurt the person he loved most. It is extremely sad. But I always feel that Sun is weird... I don't quite understand it... And Mr. Xu's death... Is there really no second part...?