Welcome to the Nightmare Zone [Infinite Flow]

Hey! This is a very smooth book to read~~~I really like it~~ I would like to make some suggestions here. It's just my first time reading DaDa's article, so I'm not sure about DaDa's writing style… Anyway, I'll mention it… I hope you don't mind (sweat) The large narrative is simple and clear, and it is very comfortable to read, but for example, the scary atmosphere can be increased, such as the appearance of ghosts and the cold feeling before the appearance, and the feeling will be more in place. The psychological fear of the protagonist may also be added. The protagonist is powerful, but it does not prevent him from being afraid. In fact, Zhong Heyi's growth is very natural and not abrupt, which is very surprising (?▽?) Next is the level of supporting characters. Although they are supporting characters, they should still have the necessary settings, emotions, and behaviors. This is especially important when the supporting character is the central character. For example, "The Useless Rehearsal Theater" has a setting closer to reality, which is indeed good, but the presentation of the central character is still a bit thin, and it is impossible to fully empathize with it (????;) The above are small suggestions, you can refer to them for reference (sweat) Oh, but the contrast in the final world is so cute, hahahaha, there should be more chapters to make Yun Xuanzhou stupid longer (no The relationship is tender and tender in life and death together, I like it so much!

Actually, what I was thinking of was, ahem, that thing below. I thought that Yun was so bold and stared directly at that position, which would be outrageous. Little did I know that what I was looking at was the Adam's apple. In fact, girls also have Adam's apple. But some are visible and some are invisible. I have practiced pseudo-male voice before, and I have achieved some success. The key points are chest resonance and compression of the breath tone. Especially when the compression expands the width of the throat and makes the sound richer, the originally invisible Adam's apple will become visible (but it varies from person to person). Because it's very novel, I paid special attention to it. I tried it when I just commented, and I could still achieve a natural male voice before, but now that I haven't practiced it, it has regressed.

Damn it, just pamper him, beauties can attack me!!!

Nice looking!!! It's written in big letters and has a scary feel to it, and countless readers who read it were frightened! Looks good!

Damn it, when I mention horror love, I think of the unresolved love between humans and ghosts.

Hahahahahahahahahaha I died laughing

"Zhong Heyi is a teacher," which is a big bug for the author~ Yunxuan

The teacher is really scary!

Happy New Year!!! So happy!

I don't know why I feel so scared. This is the first book that scares me. I have read many unlimited books and I don't dare to go to the toilet. (˙-˙)