Latest announcement: On the evening of May 1, 2010, I added the completed tag... PIA myself.
A tragic transmigration that makes the original characters hilarious: Saint Seiya: Tea Table and Tragedy, by Ying Ying Ran [Deadbeat Ran: I'll finish writing Dirty and then come back to this one, fist clenched.]
A short, completed AVG game novel of over ten thousand words: [Bleach] Father-Daughter Diary, by Little Loli Who Chops Cucumbers [Deadbeat Ran: Don't expose my secret identity. I don't think I have any Bleach WIPs here, so nobody should come looking for me (calmly).]
The WIP I'm working on lately: Girls in Infinite Terror, by Moon of the Change-Type + Ying Ying Ran [This was actually a WIP from 2007. I'm rewriting it now and have reached the second horror movie. I think I've improved by more than a little since 2007.]
...= = Can I just say I started this WIP on a whim, when I was going stir-crazy and completely frazzled with nowhere else to turn...
Anyway, this is a story about a madwoman running wild...
Where are you going?
You just said, wait a little.
You shine so brightly
I don't know where to look.
Like a flower, like the wind,
Forever in my heart.
If time could turn back,
I wish we could return to that sunlit day.
Biting your lip, you lower your head
and resolutely walk on.
The reason for your tears
I still don't understand.
Like a flower, like the wind,
Forever in my heart.
If time could turn back,
I wish we could return to that sunlit day.
If you were here now,
what would you say?
You're still on a distant journey,
That summer so long ago feels far away.
Like a flower, like the wind,
Forever in my heart.
If time could turn back,
I wish we could return to that sunlit day.
-End-
P.S. A KUSO fic disguised as copy made from excerpts of song lyrics... (There's music. If you're interested, give it a listen... For example, some people have a strange habit of needing music on while using the computer to write, chat, or read. This is Mats Takako's "Like a Flower"...)
Long Saint Seiya fanfics that had a big influence on me:
Ah, My Goddess, by Vela (complete)
Saint Seiya Fanfic: The Legend of Silver, by Yin Gou (complete)
The Truthful Lie (Saint Seiya Fanfic), by Leng Yue Bing Ling (abandoned)
A very warm, very long, snarky story (though the recent updates and even the ending have been quite literary). The main story is complete, but the bonus chapters are still ongoing. Let's wave tearfully goodbye to the adorable Miss Mileika, who's been with us for so long:
[Saint Seiya] Sea of Miracles (Transmigrated as Aiolia), by Fu Zhe Ge Tu
Theme:
I think the author is a jerk. . . . Still a god. . . . Together, it's exciting~
This is an uneasy reminder
I calmly passed by Soy Sauce and urged me to write... Sigh... You should hurry up and finish the other articles...
Hey... The ending is half updated. Although it is clearly stated in the title that it has been completed, wouldn't you feel guilty if you didn't complete it? … = =
As for the ending of Fairy... I've been waiting for a long time. Hey Xiaoran, it would be very immoral if you don't... = =
Xiao negative, at least Yi Di has updated a little bit... Why don't you update it... = =
Saint Seiya—The Clear Sky of Xi Author: Ying Yingran ==dabao!
Urgent update! ! ! ! ! !
Your update! ! ! !
Finish this ending as soon as possible and go to the Fairy ending...
A brief review of "Saint Seiya - Clear Sky of Dawn"
When I first read this article, I actually didn't have much love in my heart. Because the copywriting of this article is really a bit erratic and confusing, and it is impossible to grasp the meaning and theme that the author wants to express. After all, a good copywriting is very important for an article. For me, I would rather see a few simple content introductions than such semi-literary copywriting. Copywriting is used to give readers a preliminary understanding of your article. If the meaning is too vague, people will not understand it and cannot find the cuteness of it.
You probably like the characters in Saint Seiya very much. Thinking about those boys and girls who were touched and obsessed with when they were young, in fact, they are all very vague now. The adults use their own perspective to write out the thoughts of the characters in their hearts and Athena's helplessness and uneasiness. He has a relatively good grasp of the character's personality traits and can fulfill this task in different details. And among the large number of articles about Saint Seiya and Athena that are despised and criticized from an opposing perspective, Sakura's article is somewhat reassuring - after all, the stories and characters that I once loved so much, made me laugh and cry for them, are now being thrown away all of a sudden, which makes me feel a little disappointed.
The original protagonist Zhang Xixi looks heartless, but she is actually a heart-wrenching child. We are always reincarnating, but we can never remember the people who passed by us. Those who may have been very important people in the past can only be blurred in the memory little by little in the end, and there is no longer any trace of their eyebrows, eyes, mouth, and nose. However, such a maverick person has left an indelible mark in the hearts of those people - firmly remembered.
The author uses some playful dialogues and descriptions to gradually portray such a girl with a dual personality. And Milo, the man whom the girl fell in love with at first sight, would rather risk serious injury to make Zhang Xixi remember her boy Julian. A very real character. Milo has his own responsibilities as a Saint, but the young Julian is not Poseidon, the god of the sea. He is willful and proud. Different people have different attitudes towards their so-called status and so-called responsibilities, which makes people feel very clear.
This article is said to be a Saint Seiya fanfic, but I personally think it is more like a fantasy novel disguised as a fanfic - if you say that, please don't PIA me, because this is a real idea. The entire article did not describe the specific circumstances of the jihad. Instead, it focused on trivial things and some emotions about the past and present. To be honest, I always felt a little impatient when reading this article, because the transitions in it are very jerky and have little to do with the plot of Saint Seiya. It writes a lot of original plots and emotions, but does not pay good attention to the details and process of description. Sudden turns and jumps often leave people confused.
Moreover, I think the author's way of writing this article makes people think that this is not a serious article. There are spoof articles in Jinjiang, but that is just a style of writing. However, in this article, I will have a headache due to some interlaced dividing lines and small theaters that frequently appear when reading. After a chapter, at least, you need to ensure that the writing is smooth, so that it seems to be immersive. Continuously adding small theaters in the middle of chapters will interrupt the reader's thoughts while reading the article. Maybe I don't like this feeling, so I suggest that such small theaters or other explanations be concentrated at the end of the chapter "The author has something to say", or write a separate chapter.
In fact, after reading the whole article, I feel that the writing style is good. The emotions in the text are layered and blurred between the lines. The plot of the article is also good, with ups and downs, and it can touch the readers' hearts. This article has been completed, but I still hope that it can be slightly revised so that the structure will look more reasonable. The next article can also pay a little attention to the transition of the plot and the division of chapters. I hope Sakura can write better essays~
I forgot my score = mouth = b, can I make up for it? ?
Climb over and read the article... Ask quietly, is it HE? Saint Seiya is sad enough, so if I were to write about BJ... I would draw circles every day and curse that... So-and-so...
It's over, it's over…
First of all, congratulations on the completion, I will go pack it now...
And you have to finish writing the rest, embarrassing = =
[Fantastic Beasts] Little Pot Lid and Little Pudding
[Three Kingdoms] If I Were to Meet Jia Wenhe~
[Setting Guide] For My Writing Only
[Red] The Flower in My Heart
The Adorable Han Emperor of the Three Kingdoms
Feizharan's Wallflower List
[Infinite Horror] Love and Punishment
[Jokes] A Ran's Fairy Tale
[Naruto] The Sound of Summer
[Fake Hikaru No Go] The Names We Still Haven't Remembered
[Qing Transmigration] Atop the World
[Inuyasha] The Voice of Spring
I think the author is a jerk. . . . Still a god. . . . Together, it's exciting~
This is an uneasy reminder
I calmly passed by Soy Sauce and urged me to write... Sigh... You should hurry up and finish the other articles...
Hey... The ending is half updated. Although it is clearly stated in the title that it has been completed, wouldn't you feel guilty if you didn't complete it? … = = As for the ending of Fairy... I've been waiting for a long time. Hey Xiaoran, it would be very immoral if you don't... = = Xiao negative, at least Yi Di has updated a little bit... Why don't you update it... = =
Saint Seiya—The Clear Sky of Xi Author: Ying Yingran ==dabao!
Urgent update! ! ! ! ! ! Your update! ! ! ! Finish this ending as soon as possible and go to the Fairy ending...
A brief review of "Saint Seiya - Clear Sky of Dawn" When I first read this article, I actually didn't have much love in my heart. Because the copywriting of this article is really a bit erratic and confusing, and it is impossible to grasp the meaning and theme that the author wants to express. After all, a good copywriting is very important for an article. For me, I would rather see a few simple content introductions than such semi-literary copywriting. Copywriting is used to give readers a preliminary understanding of your article. If the meaning is too vague, people will not understand it and cannot find the cuteness of it. You probably like the characters in Saint Seiya very much. Thinking about those boys and girls who were touched and obsessed with when they were young, in fact, they are all very vague now. The adults use their own perspective to write out the thoughts of the characters in their hearts and Athena's helplessness and uneasiness. He has a relatively good grasp of the character's personality traits and can fulfill this task in different details. And among the large number of articles about Saint Seiya and Athena that are despised and criticized from an opposing perspective, Sakura's article is somewhat reassuring - after all, the stories and characters that I once loved so much, made me laugh and cry for them, are now being thrown away all of a sudden, which makes me feel a little disappointed. The original protagonist Zhang Xixi looks heartless, but she is actually a heart-wrenching child. We are always reincarnating, but we can never remember the people who passed by us. Those who may have been very important people in the past can only be blurred in the memory little by little in the end, and there is no longer any trace of their eyebrows, eyes, mouth, and nose. However, such a maverick person has left an indelible mark in the hearts of those people - firmly remembered. The author uses some playful dialogues and descriptions to gradually portray such a girl with a dual personality. And Milo, the man whom the girl fell in love with at first sight, would rather risk serious injury to make Zhang Xixi remember her boy Julian. A very real character. Milo has his own responsibilities as a Saint, but the young Julian is not Poseidon, the god of the sea. He is willful and proud. Different people have different attitudes towards their so-called status and so-called responsibilities, which makes people feel very clear. This article is said to be a Saint Seiya fanfic, but I personally think it is more like a fantasy novel disguised as a fanfic - if you say that, please don't PIA me, because this is a real idea. The entire article did not describe the specific circumstances of the jihad. Instead, it focused on trivial things and some emotions about the past and present. To be honest, I always felt a little impatient when reading this article, because the transitions in it are very jerky and have little to do with the plot of Saint Seiya. It writes a lot of original plots and emotions, but does not pay good attention to the details and process of description. Sudden turns and jumps often leave people confused. Moreover, I think the author's way of writing this article makes people think that this is not a serious article. There are spoof articles in Jinjiang, but that is just a style of writing. However, in this article, I will have a headache due to some interlaced dividing lines and small theaters that frequently appear when reading. After a chapter, at least, you need to ensure that the writing is smooth, so that it seems to be immersive. Continuously adding small theaters in the middle of chapters will interrupt the reader's thoughts while reading the article. Maybe I don't like this feeling, so I suggest that such small theaters or other explanations be concentrated at the end of the chapter "The author has something to say", or write a separate chapter. In fact, after reading the whole article, I feel that the writing style is good. The emotions in the text are layered and blurred between the lines. The plot of the article is also good, with ups and downs, and it can touch the readers' hearts. This article has been completed, but I still hope that it can be slightly revised so that the structure will look more reasonable. The next article can also pay a little attention to the transition of the plot and the division of chapters. I hope Sakura can write better essays~
I forgot my score = mouth = b, can I make up for it? ?
Climb over and read the article... Ask quietly, is it HE? Saint Seiya is sad enough, so if I were to write about BJ... I would draw circles every day and curse that... So-and-so...
It's over, it's over… First of all, congratulations on the completion, I will go pack it now... And you have to finish writing the rest, embarrassing = =