Sparse shadows slant across clear, shallow water; a faint fragrance drifts beneath the moon at dusk.
When shackles become the knot in his heart, this is the only reason he loves her.
A fair and graceful maiden, by day and night he longs to seek her.
He seeks her but cannot have her, and day and night he yearns for her.
The Book of Songs, “Guan Ju”
P.S. Kisses! I really don't know how to write a blurb ╮(╯▽╰)╭, so please bear with me, hehe O(∩_∩)O~. I'd love to hear your thoughts! This story is a slow burn, (*^__^*) heehee... so please be patient.
Revising this story has been so exhausting. Time to shout about it!
Let me recommend one of my short stories:
A modern short story, complete, about school and youth. If you're interested, come take a look! If it's not your thing, feel free to ignore it…
I'm so excited! I also write ancient Chinese martial arts novels. High five! Keep it up! Well, there are quite a few suspenseful plot points and foreshadowing, which is quite captivating, but I was a little confused at the beginning. Hooray! Forgot the Moon is my pen name. I look forward to comments from fellow martial arts novelists!
Your writing is excellent, keep it up!
I got a headache just looking at the character names; they were all so romantic and dreamy, like something out of a romance novel—not my type. I skipped the second chapter, so I read three chapters in total. After finishing them, I felt a little lost: at first glance, there were many characters, but the plot didn't progress much.
Send flowers to those who submit your work!! Keep it up!
Why do I know both of the people downstairs?! Seriously, the first chapter... The author's rambling is longer than the actual article. The first chapter is crucial! Whether it captivates the reader depends entirely on this chapter. Perhaps you could dedicate more time and effort to it?
I still prefer this young master.
Please pay attention to the formatting. Each paragraph begins with a two-space indentation. There's no need to leave so many blank lines between paragraphs. Closely packed It's better to leave two blank lines when transitioning between scenes. Moreover, each chapter is at least 3000 words long. Now, a chapter is only a little over 1000 words long with wide line spacing.
Hoo hoo... Wa is here... Received the article... *Throws confetti*... *Unlimited confetti*
Although it's a fictional story, the presence of English in the text is quite jarring.
I'm Xingzi Qing! Please submit your submissions and leave a comment~~~~ I always keep my word