Raising a Husband in a Body Double Novel

This chapter is simply an outline. Let me share your thoughts after reading the article. To be honest, the author's writing style is very good, but the plot is not rigorous enough and has many loopholes. It was controllable at the beginning, but then it started to get messy. The actions of many characters cannot be justified, and the reasons for their actions are far-fetched. Moreover, all the people who made mistakes are just as loud as thunder and small as rain. , Handled it painlessly, so when I watched it, I always felt disconnected and full of question marks. I was just immersed in the plot and was distracted from the drama. The viewing experience was not good, and the emotional drama was superficial. But I think you have great potential. If you improve these problems, you can write a good article. After all, your writing is really good. Don't give up. Keep up the good work.

After reading it, I felt like I was rushing to finish it. The foreshadowing was wonderful, and there were a lot of foreshadowings, but they were all useless in the end. It was finished in a hurry. The final chapter advanced half of the story in one chapter. It might have been better if it could be advanced slowly.

I don't know if it's for the good of the family, but the family's wealth is almost empty, and I don't know what to think. Isn't this mother really the mastermind behind the scenes?

It's so disgusting that the so-called "for you, for your good" remarks

Yes, the content of the rebirth chapter is better.

Have great pity on the children of Wenhuang

I feel like this Mrs. Li is looking down on others.

Xdm Come on, come and read this food!

There are bugs, but overall it's not annoying and the pace is fast. I read it all in one go and it felt comfortable.

Warm and plain writing! Beautiful~