Here is the first part, the complete original version, before any revisions. Haha.
Everyone, the first part has now been fully revised and cut, from 130,000 words to around 50,000. The complete version is posted in the first chapter of Part Two, so there's no need to read this one. Go straight to http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=142120 to read the whole thing.
It was locked before, but I've decided to unlock it. Feel free to choose whichever version you want :) Just keep in mind that the unrevised first part has quite a few errors!
Link to the complete version: http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=142120
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You can watch this abandoned first part as a side story to understand Jun Yu beyond the main plot of the main text.
Come and rate it, it's well written~!
I think it would be better to continue writing here...
Takusang showed up a little late... Hehe, maybe more than a little...
There are many things in the new first volume that are not explained clearly...
Although the rhythm is a bit messy, overall it is still a good article
Meng Yuanjing's status has declined so quickly. How pitiful is this dead actor?
With Tuosang and Zhu Yu, he can only stand on one side~~
This article is very strange, it feels like it has no main line.
In fact, Zhu Yu shouldn't be that bad.
Great article, I haven't seen such good-looking martial arts in a long time
Damn, your article is very well written, especially about Jun Yu's parents. I'm very curious about it. Can you explain it to me? If possible, I will exchange it with you for a long comment, haha
Haha, I wish you all a Happy New Year in advance:)
Haha, thank you for your critical comments:))) The revised first part has not been completed yet, and will be reposted after the year; the revised first part has a lot fewer words than now; and Takusang's appearance time has been advanced:)))))
For now, everyone can just watch it:)))) There are many loopholes, everyone understands, haha.
You can watch this abandoned first part as a side story to understand Jun Yu beyond the main plot of the main text.
Come and rate it, it's well written~!
I think it would be better to continue writing here... Takusang showed up a little late... Hehe, maybe more than a little... There are many things in the new first volume that are not explained clearly...
Although the rhythm is a bit messy, overall it is still a good article
Meng Yuanjing's status has declined so quickly. How pitiful is this dead actor? With Tuosang and Zhu Yu, he can only stand on one side~~
This article is very strange, it feels like it has no main line.
In fact, Zhu Yu shouldn't be that bad.
Great article, I haven't seen such good-looking martial arts in a long time
Damn, your article is very well written, especially about Jun Yu's parents. I'm very curious about it. Can you explain it to me? If possible, I will exchange it with you for a long comment, haha
Haha, I wish you all a Happy New Year in advance:) Haha, thank you for your critical comments:))) The revised first part has not been completed yet, and will be reposted after the year; the revised first part has a lot fewer words than now; and Takusang's appearance time has been advanced:))))) For now, everyone can just watch it:)))) There are many loopholes, everyone understands, haha.