Deep in the Bones

I want to see Ah Li become the queen, so I can write some extra stories.

It feels like... The ending is a bit rushed. Where is Xiao Jinyun? What about the old department? What happened to the male protagonist's injury and what to do about the female protagonist's illness? Could you please do another extra story?

The writing is compact, the childhood sweetheart is enviable, the heroine is very self-respecting, although the hero is a scumbag, but overall the article is good.

A third-grade official? Every time I write the plot of a scene, it ends suddenly and jumps to another place, which is very incoherent! I don't understand. Is this some kind of writing technique? It's really funny to read. Can you at least explain the result?

Every time I see the first few paragraphs of a new chapter written by the author, it makes me dream back to the few paragraphs I wrote in the past to try to turn the tide. Zou Zou's incomprehensible sentences ended up being scolded by the Chinese teacher. Now I understand why I was criticized.

The writing was okay at first, but then...

What's wrong with this prince's son? The people around him are even more evil-minded, and the male protagonist Mingzhu secretly betrays her.

I really agree with what everyone said before, why would a man like this come here? Why should you forgive him? Why didn't he say that the heroine Yuan Liang didn't know anything before and treated her well? His old witch mother-in-law was so vicious that she almost sold the heroine to a brothel. How can you forgive such a person? This princess is also quite dirty, and she can do anything to her.

This princess is not much different from that one. After the Prince Lu's Mansion falls, this princess can consider a second career... It's so disgusting. Please reduce the space where these two disgusting people appear. PS: I don't think this novel is my favorite style. I saw the label saying it's about a reunion, so maybe the male and female protagonists will be together in the end. Hey, I persist until now. In fact, I just want to see the ending, otherwise I will feel uneasy. But actually, I still feel, why would a man like this come here? If you don't want it, don't want it. If you want to get along with someone, they have to forget about their previous scars and jump into your arms immediately, right? That's such a bitch! In fact, the situation between the two of them is now reversed. Pei had resentment towards Jiang Li before, so he kept abusing her. Even if he still had secret feelings for the heroine at that time, wasn't he more resentful, and even those little feelings could be ignored? Now it's the other way around, but you're asking the heroine to forgive him and continue to love him. You're asking others to do something you haven't done yourself. Even the heroine didn't have any fault in this matter, it was all your own imaginary hatred. If I were the heroine, why should I wish him to take it seriously? If this person is sick, he can cause a big drama by himself. Just say it is your own business. Whether he lives or dies has nothing to do with me. Roll your eyes?

Is there... A side story? (Another novel is finished, ah, I'm going to grow grass)