The Laid-Off Moonlight Darling Slaps Faces on a Reality Show
下岗白月光在真人秀里打脸
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 256k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
74Chapters
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The biggest failure is that male channels never disclose their opportunities to women, and women themselves always expose their weaknesses. This is completely inconsistent with the character.
I don't think it's necessary to tell someone like traveling through multiple worlds, no matter how intimate it is. Male videos rarely do this.
The first thing I wrote was very exciting, but why did it end up like this later? The emotional line is also inexplicable.
To be honest, this plot has been very weak since the end of the first program. It is like a running story. Now Goodfellas is completely unfinished. As expected, you shouldn't continue watching when you feel something is wrong.
After the first variety show ended, I felt that the plot began to lose its appeal to me. It felt like it was always about other characters, and the content was very complicated. But now the main story is over? It feels like nothing was explained. It's just about the heroine being framed by a scumbag as a substitute and being framed on the show. What happens next? I feel like after I finished watching, the previous plot left no impression on me at the end. . . . .
It feels anticlimactic. Several reality shows are becoming more and more routine, and the writing seems very white. The creation of the villain in the early stage is not satisfactory, but the writing is quite good. As a result, there is no progress later, and there is a feeling of repetition, which makes it boring. The last extra episode was also lonely, and there is actually no need for a running account.
Su Ze is a jerk.
Um, okay, but it feels a bit unfinished.
Sure enough, it's the familiar smell of unfinished business, as expected of you
Why are we here in the extra chapter? I haven't reached the level of abuse towards my ex-boyfriend yet. The interaction with Ji Huai always felt fake, and the level of abuse towards Shiwen has not reached the level. I always thought that the author was playing a big game of chess. These can only be regarded as preludes. Is this the result? The portrayal of the heroine is not vivid enough because of the lack of psychological description. It feels like everything is scratching an itch, and it stops abruptly before it reaches the point of pleasure. It's amazing that Su Ze has not been abused so far.