Let's Start Over, Darling!

What would it be like if something could really come back in this world?

Congratulations on the completion and happy new year!!! I want to see a sweet extra

Oh~~~~~I really can't have any peace.

My dear, you're crawling back again~~~~Spreading flowers

Haha, such a sweet and happy chapter, why can't I write it. Zhizhi, you are great!

Anyway, happy Christmas Eve

Love is not a faucet. You can turn it on or off at any time when you want to. Love comes and goes as quickly as it comes, like the tide rushing against your face, and like the turbulent waves. However, I didn't like Qing Xie's confession. He was about to leave, and he said it impulsively. It was really too much and irresponsible. But it is love, the impulse is just because of love, it is instinct. The 20-year-old Chu Jian said to Yun Qi that I love you and willingly gave everything that was most beautiful about him. As long as you are with the one you love, simple and simple things like driving on the road are all so sweet and happy. This is the most innocent introduction each of us has ever had in our first love. And Yunqi is her favorite time to leave. When we first met, he was like every stubborn child among us, saying that no matter what time, we would wait for him to come back. Just because of this love, I don't want to watch it disappear. Many times, even though we have seen the scene we least want to see, we still have to close our eyes and not face it, because tearing one's face requires too much skill and courage. Someone once said, if you love me, please accompany me to the end of the world and the ends of the earth. Why didn't Yunqi leave with Chujian? As I slowly looked back, I just felt more and more distressed. I felt distressed that when I first met, I had to wait for my love alone, and I had to face such a cruel farewell without saying goodbye, and I also had to experience the torture of illness. But then I thought again, if the departure of love is like a disease, will it fade away with the participation of time as the effect of medicine enters the treatment? After all, too many people's first love ends up rotting into mud. When time slipped by quietly and the ties between each other were slowly worn away, when they first met, they almost thought that they had become accustomed to it and did not miss or remember it. However, the wheel of fate has turned around and around, as if it has returned to the same place. The people who left, the people who loved it, and the people who thought they were relieved, stand in front of them again and meet again. Comes with earth-shattering ambiguity, but no longer cares about who loves whom more. Chu Jian has always had someone beside her who is willing to give 100%, but why does her heart grow cold and not give the slightest response? Could it be that even if her destined lover has left, she still has to stay where she is and wait? Or, turn around? Or, turn back? It turns out that the so-called separation is not because they no longer love each other, but because their steps cannot be consistent. Miracles are too stingy. Even if we don't want to leave anymore, we still have to move forward as time flies. She seemed to have finally waited until Ling Yunqi said to Ye Chujian: "I decided to chase you!" Liang Ming, a simple child. Why do you say he is a child? It's just because his words don't sound like a mature person. It's like a child who will never get recognition. He just stands alone in his corner, watching the dancers dancing with elegant postures on the glorious stage, and will never notice him. Love is sometimes too sad. How can love be given up? If it could be given up, how could there be so many sad people in this world and on the other side of the world. With Ling Yunqi's return and his current active pursuit, it seems that he has forgotten the idea that he once thought "I am destined to leave you, so we can't be together." Did he turn back just because he saw love and wanted to continue it? If the time machine could be turned back, we wouldn't have to waste so much time... However, I hope Nagi-sama will give you a good ending. After all, turning around like this is too rare and precious. Ling Yunqi, what I admire more about him is that he did not lose his heart during the days he left... May his turn back be a worthwhile trip!

Review of "Start Again!" Honey! Reviewed by: Inn Signature Mashed Potatoes Score: 0 points I would like to state in advance that the author was very emotional during the writing of this review, and I hope that I will forgive my words if they are too intense. The author read the first chapter of this article no less than eight times. After eight times, he turned to the next chapter, and finally stopped at chapter eight. Therefore, this review is not produced after reading the full text. I want to state this in advance. As far as the first chapter is concerned, there are many and complex problems in this article. It can be said that any problems that may arise in the writing have been revealed in this article. The author is not confident that I can cover everything and detail everything. I can only explain my views on a few serious and obvious points. First, the writing. After reading the first chapter for the first time, I had a very strong feeling, that is, "to express sorrow in order to compose new words." The pear-shaped style at the beginning, the heroine's memory of her grandmother, and the abrupt "Yueren Song" in the middle made this feeling linger in the author's mind. The author's rhetorical use seems too deliberate. "A smile without warmth or self-deprecating, the eyes are finally exposed under the long hair, and there is a thin layer of mist in the eyes that makes people wonder what she is thinking. Is she about to cry?" This is a description of an expression, but it is very awkward to read. What does it mean that the eyes are finally exposed under the long hair? And who is the last question mark for? Perhaps there is an additional question, who is asking. The author obviously wrote this sentence to describe the pitiful situation of the heroine, but the whole sentence feels extremely hypocritical. And such a sentence is not just a special case in the first chapter, "When I first saw it, I knew that I was selfish. I just wanted to be greedy for the warmth, so I deliberately approached it. When I realized that it was too much, I pulled away. It was not that I didn't think about it, but that I didn't want to. I would rather be bruised." The same goes for this sentence. At first glance, it seems to express the heroine's state of mind, with a kind of soft self-protection, but the words always make people feel awkward. "It's not that I don't think about it, it's that I don't want to think about it." The author would like to ask, is there any special difference between considering and thinking about it? In terms of writing, there is an issue that needs to be brought up carefully, which is the author's dialogue description. The author noticed a habit of the author, for example: "'Have you eaten anything?' Chu Jian sat down opposite him and said, 'Have you eaten a bowl of noodles.'" , "Chu Jian walked up and gently hugged Yunqi, 'Yunqi, I want to be with you.' A voice came out from the vest with a slight vibration.", "'One month, one month, right? I only want you for one month, okay? I won't put pressure on you, I won't give you trouble!' Yunqi looked at her He lit up a cigarette and drove away, only to hear the voice from behind that was a little hoarse due to fever, 'I won't give up! '… There are countless descriptions of such dialogues. Perhaps this is the author's writing habit, but in the author's opinion, this is a very confusing description and a very bad habit. In the first example, the words are spoken by the male protagonist, but the scene in the middle is written from the female protagonist's perspective. In the second sentence, the first half of the sentence is the female protagonist's words paired with the male protagonist's perspective. The third sentence still has this combination. It is awkward to read, and the entire logic of the reader will easily become confused. If the author is really not used to paragraphing, the worst he can do is add a period to separate the two perspectives. Second, characters. In the first chapter, which is just over 3,200 words, the character of the heroine changes again and again. From the cold heroine who was slapped by her roommate at the beginning, to the unrestrained heroine who teases the doctor in the hospital, to the mean heroine who faces an ambiguous partner, to the down-and-out heroine who is caught in the rain on the roadside... Therefore, the author deeply feels that what I am reading is not a long novel, but short stories. This brings up a problem with the plot of this article. There are serious gaps between plots. The author seems to be writing very impromptuly, and the words come out as they come to mind. After the heroine was stimulated by the hero and his girlfriend, she switched to a work scene; the hero was moved by the heroine's daily breakfast and accepted the heroine, but the author forgot that he had a real girlfriend before, and handed over the hero to the heroine without any explanation; the hero and heroine fell in love, and the hero had no clue It was announced in advance that he was leaving for the United States, and it was originally planned. However, there was no sign in the previous novel that the male protagonist was alienating the female protagonist for this reason. However, in the later novel, the so-called "I am destined to leave you, so we can't be together" suddenly started. The author can only say that the signs of the cause and effect are too obvious. There is no foreshadowing and no coherence. It is really difficult to make people feel immersed and resonate. In my opinion, the so-called minor abuse in the author's copywriting is indifferent. To make people abuse, one must have deep emotional resonance. However, the author's writing seems too rough, and he lacks the ability to grasp emotions. Third, the plot. The plot is actually a very broad question. To be precise, the plot is a matter of opinion and wisdom. There should be nothing to say except for some obvious contradictions and bugs. However, the plot of this article made the author feel a lot. After reading the entire eight chapters, the author has no expectations for the plot. The plot in the article gives people a sense of déjà vu. Every time the plot enters the next stage, what I feel in my heart is not a sense of twists and turns, but a sigh: "As expected." When I first read this article, a term popped into my head - pocket talk. Pocket gossip has a very common pattern: love at first sight -> meeting and falling in love -> breaking up -> getting back together. The pattern of this article is like this. Not only is the pattern universal, but the plot development and situations are so common that they are familiar to people. To put it simply, they are cliche. When the heroine appeared, she was misunderstood as a mistress. She was slapped, got into a car accident, and got into trouble with a handsome guy. Then the plot gradually drifted away in a bloody direction, and she couldn't pull it back. What is particularly memorable is the scene where the heroine seduces the hero H, first with seduction, then with drugging and then with threats. Such pocket gossip scenes are not uncommon. Unfortunately, the author's H also has a strong flavor of pocket gossip. "Yunqi's heart was instantly filled with anger. Yunqi took a deep breath and walked towards the balcony of the living room. When he saw the intact woman in front of him, he lifted her onto his shoulders, threw her heavily onto the bed, and immediately pressed her down heavily. He looked at the laughing woman in front of him with a pair of angry eyes. 'Is this what you want? I will satisfy you right away! ' Yun Qi pulled down her skirt, and her body appeared in front of him without any cover-up. The flames in Yun Qi's eyes suddenly shot up. 'Damn... How could you... How could you be so beautiful. '" I apologize for my incompetence and cannot elaborate on those scenes one by one. I can only say that the author feels like looking at a clipboard. The clipboard is full of common scenes in Xiaoyan, and I have a deep feeling of powerlessness that I can't tell where I have seen but is extremely familiar. The plot may be bloody, but the emotional tone is the most important element of a good article. The male and female protagonists in the novel have a good impression of each other, but it is rootless. This good impression comes suddenly and erratically. This emotional scene is not enough to just say you like it, just say you love it. Without a foundation, it is just a castle in the air. How can readers resonate with it? Finally, the author hopes that the author can write a good article with his own style next time. The above is just a personal opinion, if you have any questions, please feel free to discuss.

It's over like this, I still want to continue watching, woo hoo

Thank you for your hard work, the article is very nice!