Make Your Debut, Shirai Kuroko!
出道吧，铃科百合子！
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 3k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
130Favorites
25Nutrient gifts
2.8kClicks per chapter
13Comments
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Damn, damn, I'm going to double cook and be ecstatic
Come on, Iruma is so cute! This pair of CPs is very interesting, I look forward to the follow-up.
Help! It's really my side!! There really is an Accelerator manga who debuted as an idol!! If you haven't seen it, I recommend it to everyone, it's very interesting!
Is there any more? Is there any more? Urge more, Urge more, Urge more!!!
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Even grass!!!!!
??? Isn't Shokuhou's analysis the fifth one?
The evil cycle, evil shaking, is really awesome. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Iruma is super cute! The second season of Xiaopo Station Iruma has started